Tolemac (Book) - 8/28/2009 6:21:43 AM
I loved this book and I'm putting links on the web site to it. Look forward to more from you. LadyJ
Tolemac (Book) - 10/21/2007 12:19:08 AM
Go for it, man!!! This is awesome for it in reality show exactly the why things are heading in this world. Supreme is how I see where this work is going. Please visit my website. It is fantasy, but heck, it is my best work. Waiting to hear from you in my guestbook. www.freewebs.com/rwwatt/ Robert W. Watt
Tolemac (Book) - 4/15/2007 12:02:45 PM
Interesting beginning of a mysterios journey that awaits Meno.
Tolemac (Book) - 1/5/2007 6:13:14 AM
Really sounds like a great story HJ I enjoyed reading the synopsis
Tolemac (Book) - 12/12/2006 8:12:51 PM
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 4/26/2009 6:52:33 PM
Powerful story HJ. Thanks for sharing it. Tom
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 2/5/2009 2:16:08 PM
What a story. Its soul shattering . Rest assured , Chis is there waiting for you . He lives on in your memories and heart. It took a lot of courage to write this story. Thanks for sharing.......M
The Pen Of Solomon (Short Story) - 7/4/2008 7:39:19 PM
Enjoyed reading this story, entertaininly truthful and thinkable for me. Must read it again. Sound as if you have a divine soul leading you to write this kind of story.
The Master and his pupil (Short Story) - 3/15/2008 6:31:34 PM
Wise ponderings... "The Master and his pupil" strikes ontological thoughts, and leads the reader to a learning adventure.
The fifth question affirms a scientifc or assumed position, and the answer doesn't stand to back scientific ground. The misinterpretation of the words INTELLIGENCE and INTELLECT is still one tall and long wall blocking the road to understanding.
I have enjoyed the reading of "The Master and his pupil".
In respect,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Song of a Mariner (Short Story) - 1/28/2008 10:20:00 AM
Downloaded it. Read all nine and a half pages. Very captivating. Enjoyed the read.
The Nutcracker (Short Story) - 12/10/2007 10:25:52 PM
what do i press for me to read it?
Master and his pupil II (Short Story) - 11/30/2007 8:51:22 PM
Very creative. An excellent write.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/28/2007 12:27:24 AM
An amazing story! Excellent write! I seriously enjoyed it from beginning to end.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/23/2007 1:26:59 PM
I was scared from beginning to end....
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/17/2007 2:40:23 AM
Wow! This story of your memoirs "H" was intense!
Thank you for sharing your heart and soul, with each intense caring line!
IN spirit he will always be!
I feel so blessed to know you better, through this life you once lead.
Your way with words are astounding "H"!
I felt I was there holding your hand, and wanted to be there to the very end.
Warmed in Inner Peace, LOVE, Light and Wisdom! Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/1/2007 10:19:46 AM
well done
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 10:42:22 AM
This touched me so deeply H. You are so masterful with memoirs. You live them again in each line and cause your readers to live them along with you.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 6:39:22 AM
this takes us down many roads, the meaning of loss and the transition we undertake as we deal with the physical loss and the spiritual infinity. energy is all around us, and those who have touched our lives continue to exist, awaiting our time to become one with them again. having recently lost my grandfather, you touched something really deep with this one. thanks.
The Pen Of Solomon (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 6:35:41 AM
your use of imagery rewards the literary vision quest. quite an enjoyable ride, even when that ride hits the bumps of reality and an awakening comparable to biting into the fruit from the tree of knowledge.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 2:31:36 AM
Chris will be there, besides you, always, until the day when you can follow him inside, beyond that fogged landscape.
Extraordinary well done.
Georg
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 5:38:37 PM
Lives are filled with remarkable things both sad and glad and then you read a story like this and find the balance. Lady J
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 3:53:18 PM
Wow what an amazing story I have heard of communicating
With the spirits and also have experience ounces in my life!
it sure was a very emotional journey
Thank you for taking me along!
Hugsss Love Peace and Joy to you...Morning Star
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 2:21:04 PM
I almost passed out readin this AWESOME from the heart write, cause I was holdin my breath and absorbin every word. Gosh Amighty, yore beauty is dazzlin! There be a lot goin on behind them dreamy dark eyes. SC
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 10:10:58 AM
Quite a gripping story.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 8:24:01 AM
HJ,
I am completely taken by this story. I love how you weave your words, and you take the reader on your emotional journey along with you.
Brilliant story of sadness and love for your brother. He was an incredible human being. Remember, though, he is not gone, his spirit lives on, especially right now as you have told of his death.
I shall be thankful for knowing you...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
The Ropes (Short Story) - 7/28/2007 4:29:19 AM
YOU write of such deep expression, I enjoyed immensly HJ
Memories - we need em'!
fleeting but truly endearing your hear and this well written heartfelt story is!
You write beautifully of painful memories and more HJ
Thank you for sharing!
WArmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Tobie's Secret (Short Story) - 7/28/2007 4:24:35 AM
HJ :)
Her memory still after so long, haunts your heart!
Her impressed passionately burned in!
Her spirit so strong within your own!
YOu wrote of passions between so well...and with such intensity!
HOT!
Loved your heart and Tobies! IN spirit you BOTH are!
She wanted NOTHING to come between the two of you, I feel that deeply within~ These memories still stand TRUE! Through your words and expressive feelings of a wonderful caring, loving memory!
WArmest Blessings, of LIGHT, LOVE, and PEACE!
WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Song of a Mariner (Short Story) - 7/26/2007 12:42:24 PM
Read it, loved it. The description, characterization was wonderful for such a short work. The love scene was sweet and hot. Lovely work. I hope you will take it out of doc file form and post it here.
Tobie's Secret (Short Story) - 7/3/2007 12:18:20 PM
Toby was a wonderful person. She didn't tell you about the illness because she wanted to enjoy every moment with you knowing there was no room for pity just happiness and joy. This is a bittersweet story. Great write.
Tobie's Secret (Short Story) - 7/3/2007 11:41:38 AM
HJ this is not only wonderfully erotic, it's high adventure and romance and bittersweet tragedy with characters who are real in every sense of the word. I hope you will publish a volume of your short stories!
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 2/5/2009 2:18:48 PM
I read the book ,, The Last TEMPLER and then saw the movie on Tv.. Great historical piece....M
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 11/27/2008 10:17:39 AM
I really enjoyed this article as I have been exploring the records of Historic Scotland. Very interesting.
Will the real William Shakespeare please stand up! (Article) - 4/10/2008 1:31:05 PM
this is an excellent article..I love Cruz's innovative catchy back and forth between old English and modern language to get the point and flavor across. Very true and penetrating insight.....where's part lll lV and V???!
Will the real William Shakespeare please stand up! (Article) - 1/28/2008 10:27:17 AM
Very interesting and informative. An excellent write.
TolemaC (Article) - 12/11/2007 12:14:22 AM
This really sounds fascinating. Willie
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/16/2007 5:03:56 PM
Well selected. societies of secret date back into time's eternity. mgf
Go to www.secrets-blog.com
Go softly into the night.
Will the real William Shakespeare please stand up! (Article) - 7/15/2007 11:13:38 AM
Perhaps it was remarkable that he did not give credit enough to whom it was due, and therewith acquired his historical murkiness. A truly remarkable author nevertheless. I have always greatly admired his works.
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/14/2007 3:56:34 PM
Very interesting reading.
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/14/2007 2:01:11 PM
I have no idea what the author's credentials are and find the article to be useless. My selection of the article was due to my wanting a little information on the origin of Friday the Thirteenth. Unfortunately, this one has too much legend and propaganda for Masons, as far as I can tell. How can anyone believe any part of the article when the author writes that Colombus was really not from Italy, but from Portugal? Finally, there are mistakes in grammer and spelling in the article.
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/14/2007 8:28:19 AM
Excellent this article has refreshed my memory
Of history and also about superstitious
Black Friday the thirteenth
My mom was real afraid of Friday the 13
Love how you captured such beautiful imagery and the vividness I could almost see it all happening as I read it!
Outstanding write!
Love Peace and Joy many hugsss to you always...Morning Star
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/13/2007 3:41:29 PM
good walk through history. I hear rumor these societies are not gone. What say you? Lady J
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/13/2007 10:46:04 AM
interesting article
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/13/2007 8:03:35 AM
OOOOOOO WEEEEEE I loves it when Ya gets riled. How's bout a lovely pair of apples fur the teacher! SC
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/13/2007 6:50:27 AM
Someone always will name himself the shepherd while the rest of us will always be the lambs to the slaughter.
Georg
Did ya ever (Article) - 6/27/2007 11:05:19 PM
I must admit to all but 3 of these:) I do rather like your rambles.
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/25/2007 8:05:00 PM
Wow I been to Santa Fee many times
If I was to move out of Texas
I want to live in Santa Fe
Its more beautiful and inspiring place I ever been to!!
I know about that carpenter Oh those spiral stairs
Are just out of this world!!Your words have captured perfectly
That magnificent beauty and spirituality of this place!!
Outstanding Job!!
Love Peace And Happiness to you my friend
Your Friend..Yolie that's my christian Name
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/17/2007 11:28:59 PM
I want to go to Santa fe and feel the atmosphere for myself now :) Nice although a little brief hun, so want to take me there in the NON twister season?
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/17/2007 5:33:33 PM
Interesting write and well done. Lady J
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/16/2007 3:52:17 PM
Howdy Professor Dreamy! Loved yore history 101 class, you are a delightful travel guide and teacher! I too have visited Santa Fe and thoroughly enjoyed my visit! BE SWEET SC
Will the real William Shakespeare please stand up! (Article) - 6/7/2007 3:08:40 AM
food for thought, this. i guess it's safe to say that some things simply defy human explanation. the genius of Shakespearean literature is still genius. it doesn't matter whether or not he did it all by himself or with some help. on that note, could writing be a bit like sex: bad for one; but good for two?
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/27/2007 8:14:42 AM
A good write with lot's of thought. Lady J
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/27/2007 6:31:43 AM
What’s a corrupt man to do?
What many of your fellow corrupt men and women have finally started doing - letters to congress, donations to save the whales, etc - every single voice, and every single dollar truly does help. And we better all start helping - before it's too late.
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/27/2007 1:17:07 AM
If you are a 21st Century snake-oil-salesman so are we all, with the exception of a few that were born to be duped by us.
Keep on dreaming? more like nightmares.
Very well done!
Georg
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/26/2007 10:55:05 PM
This write was AWESOME and truly touched my heart. At one time America belonged to my people, The Cherokee and other native American Tribes. GOD put us as caretakers of Mother Earth. We respected her and only took from her what we needed to survive. Then so-called civilized people came and took our land away from us and banished us. The civilized ones daily rape her and abuse her, for there is no one to stop them. SC
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/26/2007 9:45:12 PM
Wow! Joe, a wonderful story that resonates on many levels. Your connective tissues are finely tuned indeed and your expression is excellent. keep it coming.
With respect, tom
Music (Poetry) - 8/18/2009 5:34:50 PM
lol, great poem!
Yes it has changed a lot.
-Debra : )
Music (Poetry) - 8/17/2009 10:35:30 PM
'Still no matter what your disposition,
Always an empathetic minor composition..'
Wonderful!! ...
Great musical piece about the rock of ages!! Love it!! :-D
Music (Poetry) - 8/11/2009 6:37:18 AM
Well Sir Honey Jam, thou hast said a mouthful and very eloquently indeed. Time marches on, music is immortal.
Music (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 9:50:58 AM
alright, alright!!!
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 7:30:48 PM
All I can say is:
Supercalafragleistikexpialladoscious!
Great write, HJ, I had a blast reading it.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 11:52:58 AM
Great write, glad I stopped by, I could use a spoonfull of that medicine she offered...LadyJ
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 6:25:24 AM
HJ This is a gourmet feast for the music lover! Bravo! I love it.ET
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 1:31:54 AM
Long time no see HJ, and I am happy to read that we are hearing the same tunes, although Leonard Cohen and Gloria Gaynor can give us something about taking Manhattan and being a Survivor.
Nice done, pal.
Georg
Music (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 11:29:21 PM
and I am movin & groovin to the sounds
as I am steppin to these really groovy words playing in your poem......dig it? GroooooVAY Baby!! :)
I can't see the picture though :(
Time dah Book....Peace Out Babe :)
Vickie
Music (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 10:54:40 PM
A masterful play on words and a great read. :)
Chanti
Music (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 6:40:05 PM
Cleverly expressed, HJ. Music is magic. I've expressed my opinion in one of my poems at AD entitled, "I Would Be Music." Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Castrated (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 8:47:19 AM
Awesome write....giggled all the way through reading this cleverly crafted poem! Well done!
Anna
The Promise (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 8:43:56 AM
Very interesting write! Absolutely loved the story and the flow of your words. Great job.
Anna
The Promise (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 9:23:53 AM
Very touching sweet man..well done indeed keep smiling always OK...Hugss,much happiness to you
2012 (Poetry) - 7/4/2009 10:56:52 PM
A very interesting read. Well written.
The Promise (Poetry) - 7/4/2009 10:53:39 PM
Avery good write. Loved this one.
The Promise (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 4:12:28 PM
Great poem, and sad.
Thanks for sharing.
-Debra
The Promise (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 9:15:10 AM
So real and honest... ...and to me, sad. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 5:14:16 PM
for some reason I am hearing bruce springsteen i'm on fire!!
2012 (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 5:10:42 PM
H.J...our very life force we destroy will destroy us...I Loved This Poem!
Peace & Inspirations 2U
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
The Promise (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 5:08:08 PM
oh this is an honorable man to resist stealing love!
not a forsaken one!
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
The Promise (Poetry) - 6/6/2009 12:56:58 PM
I'd call it unnatural selection. Gave me deja vu. Women are a fickle lot, love the one you've got.
Ron
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 12:42:12 AM
I doubt it, I think her instincts must have betrayed her. Beautifully penned HJ and deeply touching.
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/10/2009 10:17:50 PM
An outstanding write HJ! That saying"what goes around comes around"
seems to be true many times...This is one many can relate to!
Love,
ET
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/10/2009 2:37:45 AM
Far too long in between your excellent writes arrive like tears from a rock. But when you decide to treat us with a poem, it is worth to read a few times!
Georg
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