Recent Reviews for Rose Loya
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Old Woman's Advice On Love (Short Story) - 4/1/2008 7:39:43 AM
Sounds like good advice to me. Remember, there is always hope.
Nice write.
Peace,
Dan
Old Woman's Advice On Love (Short Story) - 3/29/2008 10:44:58 AM
And yet some use their heart like a yoyo, Bless you Rose!
Jasmin Horst
Old Woman's Advice On Love (Short Story) - 3/29/2008 6:23:11 AM
Ah Rose what an interesting perspective of love and how others, in this case the little old lady, perceive the heart and love throughout there love. Now if I may I will add an old man's (will a middle aged man's perspective) if I may.
The heart and I am not speaking of the physical part of our body but the unseen heart that makes us fall in love can be dropped for sure. However sometimes we get lucky and it is only fumbled for a moment then retrieved as the heart that won the game and as such put on display for all to see in a special treasured spot. Sometimes the heart is not dropped at all but carried by another heart for an entire lifetime. Sometimes hearts are meant to be caught by more than one and that is okay too for no one should be alone in this world. So as you see from this man's perspective I do feel that all the pain a h eart can go through it is still very much worth having it always in the game and not sitting on the sidelines watching.
Big Hugs
Fee
Visiting Stranger's Cemeteries (Short Story) - 7/22/2007 9:34:54 PM
Great story, Rose; I really enjoyed it. And thank you very much for the kind words you said about my piece. That means a lot. It's nice to know I'm in such good literary company.
Visiting Stranger's Cemeteries (Short Story) - 6/3/2007 5:53:08 AM
Dear Rose:
Makes one think . . . and ponder. Thanks for the story.
The last time I did this was to visit my father's grave - in Germany. With years past, one gets a different perspective on reading 1896 - 1959. Wandering through graveyards and looking at some of those massive memorials they build to themselves in Europe, one does wonder, at some out-of-the-way German cemetary, at an inscription that includes the notation: Born 1872 in California.
There are stories to be told . . . .
Thanks, Charley
Visiting Stranger's Cemeteries (Short Story) - 5/28/2007 3:25:59 PM
A lovely write,well done.
Visiting Stranger's Cemeteries (Short Story) - 5/25/2007 9:37:28 PM
Wonderful...Cemeteries are therapeutic, and can teach you about history.
Nice read, thanks for sharing.
Visiting Stranger's Cemeteries (Short Story) - 5/17/2007 2:48:50 AM
Rose, I love visiting cemetries in small, country places. The town I lived in had the graves of some of our last bushrangers (and their victims!); for a country with no apparent history, there is so much to connect to. I wish my children had more time to visit graveyards and consider the shortness of life, and the challenges that come upon every generation, rather than worshipping celebrities (which, fortunately they don't).
Connect to the past, think of lives gone, consider what the land and sky looked like, and the waves of disease or war that carried people off; enouigh to be very thankful for being alive today. Fascinating little story; please share some more!
Visiting Stranger's Cemeteries (Short Story) - 5/13/2007 9:45:10 PM
this is very well done. It reminded me of two visits I made to a cemetery at Mt. Victory, OH...once by myself and once with my sons.
There are a quite a few stones there with our name on them. They are relatives...ancesters really since some of them lived and died before this country was a country.
So, they were not really strangers...but then, they were.
It made me courious and also sad...knowing that these folks had a hand in the making of me...and yet all I knew of them was the bit of info on each stone.
This wonderful story of yours reawakend that. Good job!
Visiting Stranger's Cemeteries (Short Story) - 1/28/2007 4:49:49 AM
I found this fascinating, since my father also took me to cemeteries when I was a child, and his name was Hank, too. But for some reason, I've never lost my interest in them, and these days, I still often wander old cemeteries, looking at tombstones, and wondering about all those long ago lives.
Contradict (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 10:26:59 PM
it is life the really real great piece
Give Me More (Poetry) - 8/17/2009 7:20:35 AM
Love,desire,yearning, joy, pain all seem to flow together and offer us a reason to yearn for the real stuff. Well done Rose.
hugs
\fee
Blue Heart (Poetry) - 7/25/2009 10:06:16 AM
Blue Heart (Poetry) - 5/22/2009 11:04:24 AM
Compassionate and most compelling, Rose. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Blue Heart (Poetry) - 5/22/2009 9:49:03 AM
Very caring write for to be able to let go in life but hold on in the heart is not an easy task to take on.
fee
Blue Heart (Poetry) - 5/22/2009 4:30:49 AM
A true heart of love, forgiveness, yet in suffering, sad, so sad, this poem wrings the juices of ones being, well done! Jasmin Horst
Sugar (Poetry) - 8/1/2008 6:04:56 PM
Great lines and poetic phrases that are sure to convert to song lyrics very easily. Well done Rose.
hugs
Fee
Sunlight Story (Poetry) - 8/1/2008 4:18:20 AM
Mother Nature does have her ways of brightening even the drabest of lifes landscapes.Well done.
hugs
Fee
Sunlight Story (Poetry) - 7/31/2008 6:38:51 PM
This is a good light story with true messages in it. I like it very much. Will be looking for sunshine early tomorrow morning.
Axle Rhyme (Poetry) - 7/29/2008 9:49:10 AM
Rose, wonderful words flowing smoothly through from beginning to the end.
Cheers,
Dan
Axle Rhyme (Poetry) - 7/27/2008 10:36:01 AM
We say it the best way we can Rose, and you sure did, thank you!
hugs! Jasmin Horst
Axle Rhyme (Poetry) - 7/27/2008 9:23:24 AM
Poetry does seem to spin eternally in the hearts of mankind and this intense verse is a good reminder of that eternalness. well done Rose,
hugs
Fee
Sun Drops (Poetry) - 7/25/2008 9:19:35 AM
Interesting write...truly enjoyed.
Cheers,
Dan
Iced Cream (Poetry) - 7/25/2008 4:33:31 AM
Sweet but sad lingering memories of love that get triggered from time to time by the little things in life. Love these and sound like great lyrics to me.
hugs
Fee
Dream (Poetry) - 7/21/2008 9:14:46 AM
Not too swift at reviews today. Kind of tired and wish I were still in dreamland. Good to read this today though.
Dream (Poetry) - 7/21/2008 7:37:12 AM
Lots of things going on within your pen...well done.
Cheers,
Dan
Dream (Poetry) - 7/21/2008 7:13:15 AM
Sounds like the beginning of some pretty heavy song lyrics with the repetition touching nerves like a high chord. Well done.
hugs
Fee
Muse's Fold (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 4:07:47 PM
A striking poem of faith that steps outside the box and into the mind and heart of it's subject. Interesting work here for sure.
hugs
Fee
Muse's Fold (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 7:33:13 PM
Think this is good writing and you are thinking so clearly and putting good words together to make us think of our christianity too and making us see the light about the savior with delight. Delightful write, keep them coming when they appear to you. Good ones for me to read anyhow.
Turn (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 2:04:53 PM
You done justice to your muse's enthusiasm with this splendid write Rose. Very nicely rolled out.
hugs
Fee
Turn (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 9:16:02 AM
Wow, Rose, this is very good writing. Loved your poem.
Cheers,
Dan
Words (Poetry) - 7/3/2008 3:41:00 PM
Ahhh words must be a popular muse's thoughts for I have seen several poems in the last little while which try to capure their spirit, and this one truly does justice to your theme. Well done my friend.
hugs
Fee
Words (Poetry) - 7/3/2008 6:29:58 AM
You are listening well, and we get rewarded with poetiful words! Bless you! Jasmin Horst
Words (Poetry) - 7/3/2008 6:23:21 AM
Rose, a wonderful compilation of 'words'
Cheers,
Dan
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