Recent Reviews for Theresa ann curnow
One Day in September (Short Story) - 6/6/2007 9:08:34 AM|
Great story from beginning to the end...good work!
One Day in September (Short Story) - 6/6/2007 8:44:47 AM
What a story, Theresa. Thouroughly engaging and compelling. I am caught up in it. Thank you. Love and blessings to you,
Spring. (Short Story) - 6/6/2007 8:12:14 AM
This is a fine offering, Theresa. It makes one hope for good things to come. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love to you,
Spring. (Short Story) - 6/1/2007 3:30:23 AM
Hi Dan, courgettes are a vegetable a bit like a cucumber in shape and colour only you can steam or roast them instead. Regards, Theresa.
Spring. (Short Story) - 5/31/2007 7:39:16 PM
Yes, so awesome yet so fleeting; take hold while ya can.
Spring. (Short Story) - 5/31/2007 9:22:10 AM
This is a find accounting of spring but I must ask you; what are cougettes?
Room Thirty Nine. (Short Story) - 5/24/2007 6:58:35 AM
You do write from the "dark side." I do not mean that disrespectfully. Very chilling. It's too bad most people on here don't read anything longer than poems. Thank you, Theresa. Love and peace,
Broken Doll (Short Story) - 5/24/2007 4:46:06 AM
Very interesting write/story and so well written. Very surprising ending. You kept me on the edge of my seat throughout. Excellent read my friend. Always, Paul.
Final Sale (Short Story) - 5/23/2007 8:55:46 AM
I appreciate the genre, Theresa. Thank you. Love and peace,
Broken Doll (Short Story) - 5/23/2007 8:53:30 AM
Well done, Theresa. I see that you write your stories like your poem; so like mine. Thank you. Love and peace,
Broken Doll (Short Story) - 5/21/2007 2:38:54 PM
Wow! great story.
Starry Night. (Short Story) - 5/10/2007 9:55:05 AM
One of the things I liked about this story was that Bruce Willis did not come at the last minute to save the world. There may be more truth in your write, than fiction, if we (the human race)don't get our act together.
Reap and Sow (Short Story) - 4/27/2007 4:04:52 AM
I love the story. The turn of events were awesome. Sort of a Twilight Zone effect. Well thought out and played all the way through. I guess the moral of this story could be, "what goes around, comes around." (lol)
Reap and Sow (Short Story) - 4/26/2007 10:26:24 AM
Wow! a fantastic story.
Reap and Sow (Short Story) - 4/26/2007 9:37:40 AM
Excellent story; well done! BRAVA!
A modern diverse Christian (Article) - 6/21/2007 7:41:28 AM
the true meaning of diversity...
A modern diverse Christian (Article) - 6/20/2007 8:58:56 PM
My family is diverse as well, from buddhism to Cathecism, to myself, my Mom and Brother who is Pentecostal, thanks for the write...
Do you Believe in Ghosts? (Article) - 6/9/2007 9:57:29 AM
Indeed I do. From my research, ghosts can be asked to leave by telling them to move on to the light where someone they know is waiting for them However, you seem to be enjoying yours - so please do.
Do you Believe in Ghosts? (Article) - 6/8/2007 7:30:51 PM
I was remodeling a building in an old minning town years ago and after two weeks there I was convinced beyond a doubt that they have the capability of moving material objects. I was locked out three days in a row, had the toilet seat slam down repeatedly, had doors not only slaming but slaming in my face and thats only afew of the problems I experienced there. I found out later that I was the third contractor, the others refused to return!
Do you Believe in Ghosts? (Article) - 6/8/2007 5:07:31 PM
Nope. But I stayed in an old house at Watchet, something woke me up, I tried to tell my ex, but My mouth could say nothing, it came throgh a 17 century wall, and i was frozen to the spot...eventually i managed a yell, but joanne woke up, saying ok, i'll look later, yawned and comforted me by****************** it
Do you Believe in Ghosts? (Article) - 6/8/2007 2:47:16 PM
Thanks for sharing these experiences. I believe that ghosts are essentially an imprint on space-time like a kind of video-tape that replays. There may be many more than one kind but the fact the ghosts are often seen in the same spot, doing same or similar things by different people suggests I may be onto something. Also, I think some people are sensitive to these phenomena - especially children. Malcolm Watts (see my article on ghosts)
Cat or Dog? (Article) - 6/1/2007 9:05:30 AM
Cats or dogs? Why not go for both and make your life really interesting.
I have, and there is never a dull moment around our house!
Is there a Literal Hell? (Article) - 5/31/2007 9:27:24 AM
Interesting write, Theresa.
Is there a Literal Hell? (Article) - 5/31/2007 7:16:05 AM
Hell is Darfur and downtown Baghdad.
Is there a Literal Hell? (Article) - 5/30/2007 6:31:53 PM
I believe that Hell is a a literal place, a place of great torment, and one place, I am praying that I never know a place such as that
Is there a Literal Hell? (Article) - 5/30/2007 4:13:14 PM
Little Do You Even Know You We Are Already Living In Hell...In World Where In Over 43 Million + Homeless USA Citizens Most Little Children Sleep Live In Streets Are Starving...Where Over 2 Million + Children Disappear Each Year Enslaved Most Raped Killed By Perverts Child Molesters,i.e. I Can Go On & On But Why-I Don't Quote Bible...
I Am Realist Living In Real World- Not An Idealist...
Credit For Write...
What Happens When we Die (Article) - 5/22/2007 7:24:17 AM
There may be something after death, but I don't believe whatever it is corresponds to mythic concepts of Heaven and Hell. The important thing is for people to have a Life after birth and not worry so much about the rest. Nature has been gracious in offering us opportunity for the former...why does mankind think it needs or wants more than that? Eternal life sounds boring in the extreme. Malcolm Watts
What Happens When we Die (Article) - 5/21/2007 2:27:09 PM
Real Life Parenting. (Article) - 5/11/2007 4:19:27 PM
A quick dose of reality is all that's needed. Many of your situations sound so familiar. Bless You and Happy Mother's Day my friend.
Why Can't We See God? (Article) - 5/10/2007 9:57:27 AM
God has been and always is right where we've failed to look.
Real Life Parenting. (Article) - 5/10/2007 9:44:00 AM
Gawd, isn't it true, we don't begin our education about everything in life, until we become parents. Extremely good write.
Love is. (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 12:50:25 AM
Beautiful imagery...loved all those lines that captivated the heart and soul of what love truly is.
Morning Comes. (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 12:48:07 AM
Your rhyme and meter are flawless in this piece. Filled with imagery and the carved path of the sun did it for me. THis is the beauty of writing.
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 12:45:53 AM
Truly bittersweet piece but the cries are only muffled in the absence of tears. Excellent write.
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 12:43:56 AM
The emotions in this work are intense and full of imagery. The closed doors are but the end of chapters just as in the verses you open are the beginning of all healing.
Bending with the Wind (Poetry) - 12/13/2007 12:41:36 AM
This piece of full of mystery and the bleeding of an open wound suffered by the heart. Beautiful wording, Theresa. I noted you have not posted anything lately...Life comes at us full speed and time passes in the blink of an eye. Hopefully soon you shall grace us with your writes again.
Bending with the Wind (Poetry) - 7/14/2007 10:07:10 PM
ah, now this is good! Great flow and imagery in this dark tale of revenge...or perhaps, just desserts would be better.
Another said this would make a good short story...I agree with that.
Bending with the Wind (Poetry) - 7/5/2007 3:18:15 AM
I hope you can hear my thunderous applause. The salt of your tears cauterizes my wound as they bathe the hilt of your blade. Hear how the wind howls to steal each beat of your precious heart. In life we are none but in death, we shall be one. Brava! Exquisite write my friend. Thine pen has an energy that touches the poetic mind.
Bending with the Wind (Poetry) - 7/4/2007 7:01:48 PM
Great writing as always...Hugssssssss
Bending with the Wind (Poetry) - 7/4/2007 1:26:20 PM
This is an Alfred Hitchcock thriller. Great write.
Bending with the Wind (Poetry) - 7/4/2007 12:41:48 PM
Eerie passionate and ripe for molding into a short story this one is good for sure...
The Clock (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 10:59:51 PM
No matter what...the clock continues to click on us all...to remind us that is how we measure life. Superb work.
The Clock (Poetry) - 6/30/2007 10:32:38 PM
Nice poem Theresa, time does have the world within it's grasp...enjoyed your thoughts on this...
The Clock (Poetry) - 6/30/2007 2:04:30 PM
Funny how you only hear the ticking at night...
If you got the time I got the potting shed.lol
Yup, one thing we can't turn back, and one thing no matter how rich or poor, we all have in equal measure, it's how it is spent or wasted that matters...
The Clock (Poetry) - 6/30/2007 11:24:37 AM
Theresa, great write...now close your eyes and count to 10 and imagine all of the things that have taken place across the globe, in that short span of time, 'tis amazing.
The Clock (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 7:42:29 PM
Wonderful! Yes, time continues on waiting for no one.....
The Clock (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 6:34:55 PM
The Clock (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 4:28:49 PM
So true. Time stops not. Sometimes, I close my eyes and think of the seconds passing by and it almost seems as though I feel time like a breeze on my face, going by... ...going on. Nicely done, Theresa. Love and peace to you,
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 4:34:10 AM
Doors are never closed when the heart is open. Wishing Peace Always, Paul.
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 6:23:39 PM
Had to read this several times. The power in this pen is deafning. Very well done
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 5:52:55 AM
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 8:11:51 PM
Behind closed doors!!! Think that was a motto of my family......
Smile when the door is open, but when it is closed.........
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 5:20:23 PM
Interesting muse; Vengence be mine!
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 2:07:56 PM
lol. 24/7 romancing is a stroll in the park for us Cornish elves. ; )
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 1:18:22 PM
Ouch. bloody ouch..... you need to know that ain't all doors... seya behind mine. Naa Cornish lasses ain't up to it I'm told. They dont do 24/7 romancing...
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 12:45:20 PM
oh my...this is almost an incantation for a magick spell, lady poet...
Dark yes, but well written...and on a theme that is all to common. Well done!
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 10:09:34 AM
Wow! Very dark and foretelling...good pen.
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 8:08:10 AM
Theresa, to steal someone elses' line...sometimes you gotta do what ya gotta do, and not look back. A brave thing to do...touching and emotive write.
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 7:42:34 AM
Thank you for your comments. I was married to an addict and had to leave for my own sanity and that of my children. It gave him a shock and although our relationship couldn't be mended, happily he is now drug free but he still battles everyday.
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 7:25:53 AM
So sad. so painful. This man is helpless and needs care, please don;t walk away. Seek medical help instead.
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 6:05:50 AM
It is so sad when one is faced with the reality of another's addiction...
nice work on this subject of which many have seen and or had to face and make a choice...
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 9:51:42 PM
How very sad this is. Bittersweet love indeed, such a shame. Very descriptive......
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 5:33:01 PM
When it comes to drug addicts or alcoholics who refuse to help themselves we sometimes have no option but to walk away.
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 4:42:39 PM
A really poignant write my friend. Sometimes it's just better to walk away.
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 4:31:17 PM
Bittersweet love (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 2:16:54 PM
Sounds like a plan.
Morning Comes. (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 7:38:23 AM
the ballad like flow if this wonderful piece is smoothly done...the wonderful and rich imagery gives it both color and depth. Excellent work.
Morning Comes. (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 11:13:12 AM
You have created the desired mood very effectively, Theresa. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
Morning Comes. (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 7:53:32 AM
fantastic write....you are very talened..keep it up...cheers..love n luck...BHUWAN!!!
Morning Comes. (Poetry) - 6/22/2007 7:04:06 PM
Sum-her time. :0
Morning Comes. (Poetry) - 6/22/2007 6:45:13 PM
Something strange (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 7:16:02 PM
God's Waiting Room. (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 3:22:56 PM
I felt the hope and despair fighting for domination in this one and as each of us ages and the spiritual door to the other side grows closer our acceptance with grace is usually our only option.
Something strange (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 9:06:09 AM
This is precious! Had me going too, well done.
Something strange (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 4:04:56 PM
Awwww! This is just darling! Had me going all the way to the end, just loved it....."four black and white fur balls" just precious!
God's Waiting Room. (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 11:08:51 AM
I know what you mean Dan. I work in a care home and it pains me a lot of the time to see the life gone from their eyes. there is laughter as well but death is a constant visitor and old age is a cruel thing, a very cruel thing for those who suffer its indignaties. God bless you and your mum, Theresa.
God's Waiting Room. (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 8:59:54 AM
Theresa, you've touched on something we talk very little about and you've done it quite well. Our Mom is a permanent guest in a nursing home and you can see the quiet desparation going on each of the lives of those that sit and wait.
God's Waiting Room. (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 11:59:07 PM
am going through this with someone now. Yet it's not true for everyone. I've a sprightly 94 yr young neighbour....
God's Waiting Room. (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 10:28:57 PM
God's waiting room, I like the terminology...Something I have not thought of, but in the future will use. A bitterly sad but true write.....
God's Waiting Room. (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 5:44:16 PM
I'm in no hurry but when it comes I welcome it with open arms.
Interesting write. I sometimes wonder where we get our inspiration.
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 9:11:26 AM
Great story line, with an ending that most men would dream for. Enjoyed
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 5:33:49 AM
I love the rhyme and flow of your poem. Very mysterious throughout. Bless You, Paul.
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 6:45:41 PM
A nice poem, written as a short piece of a story...
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 9:34:05 AM
and off you go again...thanks for the walk in the rain...great work.
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 8:17:35 AM
Wow! This certainly kept my attention, perfect ending too, I never saw it coming!! Well done.
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 10:15:45 PM
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 7:23:49 PM
Oooooooo this one packs a punch, a stinging to the ego. Enjoyed reading this one.....
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 6:38:12 PM
Strong scary images that paint the dreary side of night and how quickly an outfit that is quite appropriate in one place is asking for trouble in another.
Tears in the Rain (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 4:39:34 PM
The "I'll show him" syndrome. Very well written story poem. Great rhyme and a stellar ending!
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 5:24:25 AM
excellent work...powerful is the longing and need in this piece.
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 3:03:15 PM
Your longing pen plants characterized images so well. Enjoyed
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 11:06:55 AM
Now that's obsession! nice write
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 5:44:44 AM
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 3:01:25 AM
The real thing or not you sure poured your heart into this one Theresa and when the real thing does arrive...look out you will break hearts if you are not the careful one.
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 1:30:23 AM
Its not the real thing no although I did have an obsession with a pop star when I was younger, : )Thanks for your reviews.
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 6:40:04 PM
Such devout longing and admiration of a mutual love.....
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 4:16:58 PM
Men rarely show their feelings as women do, and love differently too. It may seem like indifference a lot of times when really it's just being unaware. However, obsession is destructive. I hope it's just a poem and not the real thing.Excellent write...
Obsession (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 3:24:17 PM
And I'm low maintenance, good at diy and best of all in**************************** and***********
Strangers (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 9:20:03 PM
wet urgent cries! My kind of party.
Strangers (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 2:26:33 PM
Strangers (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 1:55:59 PM
Lovely pen, wish I could meet a stranger like that!
Strangers (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 12:45:08 PM
i had this happen once at a party and i've never forgotten it or him, it was one of the sexiest moments in my life. you wrote it well too
Strangers (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 12:39:49 PM
This almost blew my Hard........................Drive....
Black Widow (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 6:31:47 AM
Well done ,enjoyed,Hugssss
Black Widow (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 10:11:03 PM
So very passionately written in the depths of the "Black Widow" as life slips silently away.....
Black Widow (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 4:05:41 PM
Very good! and very dark and sinister. I feel a thriller coming on!
Black Widow (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 1:58:55 PM
Blimey, you've just described my xmas over in NY. There was a metaphorical death. With the relationship, and that I doubt I can trust femanimals again... Though if I turned gay, I'd have to beat myself up everyday...So celibacy is the life for me...
I asked a black widow for a dance once and she bit my head off....
Black Widow (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 1:46:36 PM
Enjoyed this pen of potential death. It easily lures ones thoughts into its depths.
Black Widow (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 10:31:44 AM
Excelllent poem,beautifully written!
Black Widow (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 10:24:10 AM
remind me to never tick you off...great write,
Was it Me? (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 8:10:32 AM
Sweet write. Sometimes, lovers tell lies, Theresa. I can relate to your sentiments. Thank you. Love and blessings to you,
Life's a Beach. (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 8:08:53 AM
I love the sensual way you put this across, Theresa. Thank you. Beautifully done. Love to you,
Life's a Beach. (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 7:10:35 AM
Enjoyed very much,Hugsssssss
Life's a Beach. (Poetry) - 6/4/2007 6:24:08 PM
Sounds good to me.
Life's a Beach. (Poetry) - 6/3/2007 9:44:19 PM
Oh please! You are making me sooooooooo homesick!! I have spent most of my life living on or near the beach and now I miss it terribly. You have penned so vividly I could see myself stretched out on the beach again.....
Life's a Beach. (Poetry) - 6/3/2007 3:43:39 PM
Ever been to St Ives, spec late at night, twill be heavenly oblivion... fun fun fun, just need the pastie, naa stuff that, just the kissing upwards sound kewl...
Life's a Beach. (Poetry) - 6/3/2007 1:14:55 PM
Very colorful, creative and calming,
Life's a Beach. (Poetry) - 6/3/2007 12:06:08 PM
I found your poem very sensual. The word usage was exquisite. As always your imagery is perfect. Almost makes one jealous of the ocean. Life is definitely a Beach.
Was it Me? (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 8:07:09 PM
A love lost to deception, so very sad......
Was it Me? (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 5:36:39 PM
Seems that no one is immune to the effects of rain, you have shown this within your thoughts, and expressed it well within this poem...
nice work on this...
Was it Me? (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 3:39:45 PM
Why do we always ask 'was it me?' lets face it, it takes two, to do the dance, right? Wonderful write,
Was it Me? (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 1:56:07 PM
they lie, huh? this is very well written, the words painful but flowing
Was it Me? (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 1:33:53 PM
Painful but beautifully written.
Was it Me? (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 1:28:06 PM
Well time to move on, and try a better bit of sussex....
Moving On (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 6:05:27 AM
Moving On (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 7:39:01 PM
One who made a wrong turn and was dealt a hand of disrepair. We all must learn to adjust to the up and down of life's journey.....
Moving On (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 4:18:51 PM
We never know what turns life can take. Sometimes we turn around and it's on top of us like a speeding train and we just can't get out of the way soon enough. We all make choices, but there are times when life chooses for us. I could easily be the man in your piece. There are times when life is just too much.
Moving On (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 4:17:15 PM
I think I know how that guy feels, aside from winning the lottery. :)
Moving On (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 1:49:52 PM
I don't have an Iron, other than a soldering one, if I go out and fall asleep with my hat before me, it's full of coins..lol
A compassionate write from a beautiful heart. Hows life down the tin mines?
Moving On (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 11:38:13 AM
You are right, Theresa... ...it is a fine line that makes or breaks us. I appreciate your thoughts here. Very compelling. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Moving On (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 11:37:22 AM
Very good pen, and so very true,
When You Died. (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 7:08:10 AM
Time doesn't release the memories of past though the heart does heal. I am saddened when I read this poem and yet hope that your healing has replaced the pain of past...
love and peace, Art Sun...
When You Died. (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 9:33:18 PM
Sometimes it takes longer for the hurt and pain to fade, but over time it does fade.....Sorry for your loss!
When You Died. (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 7:33:21 PM
I do not believe that time heals such pain. Thank you, sweet Theresa.
I wish you love and peace and all that is good,
When You Died. (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 6:59:41 PM
Oh my,so very sad,stay safe and well....Hugssssss
When You Died. (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 2:07:49 PM
Theresa, this is a gut-wrenching write... I felt the grief and pain from the loss of your beloved boyfriend.
When You Died. (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 11:35:04 AM
AWWWW, HOW AWFUL, AND DEVISTATINGLY SAD...15 years time to move on, I hear sussex lads are the best.
His Charming Smile. (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 7:55:48 AM
Powerful story in this poem.
His Charming Smile. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 8:10:17 PM
I'd say he finally got the point. Excellant pen
His Charming Smile. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 10:08:27 AM
lol. Its not that bad honestly Andy.
Reg, its a terrible thing, abuse, a powerful cycle and difficult to get out of. Sometimes an extreme act of desperation seems the only way out. Thanks both of you for the reviews.
His Charming Smile. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 10:06:41 AM
Strong, emotive write...like Reg I find it so hard to believe that a man can be so cruel...excellent write,
His Charming Smile. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 10:00:36 AM
Well if ever I'm in cornwall don't call me. lol Weird though cos I was thinking of taking a sabaticle to St Ives, earlier your vampires lips, now a stabbing.. Suddenly Devon looks good...
His Charming Smile. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 9:56:50 AM
I do not understand how men can be so violent as to push women to such an extreme as this. Powerfully expressed, Theresa. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Mountain. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 6:06:51 AM
I hope the "king" is deserving of your sitting next to him. I rather doubt it. Once again, Theresa; I love your style. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Running. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 6:04:55 AM
I'd love to be the "knight in shining armor" saving the princess. Nicely expressed, Theresa. Love and peace,
Snow Angel (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 6:03:25 AM
I know this may come across as presumptuous (I hope not and I don't wish it to) but you write the way I want to (and I do actually). I love your poetry, Theresa. Merci! Amour et paix,
Trevithick Day. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 6:01:39 AM
You are witty and I love the way you write, Theresa. Thank you. Love and peace,
Love is. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 4:05:24 AM
Strong foundations are what truly holds it all together and can only be accomplished with a strong concrete mixture. One's gotta love the gentleness of the moment. Peace to You Always, Paul.
Love is. (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 12:27:29 AM
Superb poetry. Though he needs to be more gentle, biting your lips making them blood red. Cut mine shaving, it bled for hours...
Love is. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 9:35:25 PM
Think you have summed this one up very well.....Enjoyed.
Love is. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 7:27:12 PM
Enjoyed very much...Hugssssss
Love is. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 6:29:43 PM
Hey, this is awesome!
Love is. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 9:55:11 AM
Wow! really good,
Love is. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 9:54:21 AM
I do so love your "ass kicking" style of writing because it speaks to me in the fave of my soul. I don't say this to just anyone who comes along. I love what you express. It's painful a lot of it. I think it just the way things are. I wish I could meet you.
Love and peace,
Running. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 8:19:18 AM
and keep running girl...good pen,
Tears of a Fallen Angel (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 8:11:42 AM
Very powerful and stirring again, Theresa. I love the way you write. I love succinct and strong expression. You do it very well. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
The Graveyard. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 8:09:57 AM
If expressed it already, Theresa; your style reaches my soul. I can totally relate to the feelings expressed. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Running. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 3:18:26 AM
Running. (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 2:53:35 AM
I can feel your pain in every stride. Getting as far away from the source as possible. Each inch becoming a foot progressively growing to miles. Exquisite imagery as always.
Hidden. (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 8:28:12 AM
Dark and powerful, Theresa. I love it. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Guilty passion (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 8:27:08 AM
So real and true, Theresa. Nicely done. Thank you. Love and peace,
Forget me Not (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 8:26:05 AM
A fine ode to the infinity of true love, Theresa. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Fields of Corn (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 8:24:25 AM
I can easily relate to your verses. I love the way you write. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
At Night. (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 8:23:20 AM
I love your style, Theresa. Thank you. Love and peaced to you,
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 8:22:26 AM
A very moving offering, Theresa. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/21/2007 1:32:22 PM
this made me misty...perhaps it was about this time of year when, while serving in Vietnam, I was informed that a lady I had been engaged to died in a car accident...perhaps it was that and this wonderful piece of work.
To me, the mark of a good piece of verse is whether or not it touches a reader on some level...this poem touched.
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/21/2007 9:14:30 AM
Paul is so right. "Very sad but so full of light and love." (Right about the kiss, too!!) B r a v a, b r a v i s s i m a!!! 'Pea'
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/21/2007 3:40:56 AM
Very sad but so full of light and love. Surely a breath of life in just one kiss. Blessings, Paul.
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/20/2007 9:48:17 PM
So very deep, so sad, yet an eternal light will burn bright!
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/20/2007 7:22:49 PM
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/20/2007 3:56:11 PM
A fitting epitaph indeed.
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/20/2007 1:42:30 PM
May I be so fortunate to have that kiss before I close my eyes for the last time. Bravo!
Kiss Before Dying. (Poetry) - 5/20/2007 12:51:48 PM
THIS IS A BRAVO MASTERPIECE.
Guilty passion (Poetry) - 5/17/2007 7:58:46 PM
Enjoyed very much...Hugssssssss
Guilty passion (Poetry) - 5/17/2007 8:41:23 AM
Nice thought provoking expressions through poem...
At Night. (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 4:34:39 AM
The kiss of death lies around every corner so I always walk the straight and narrow. Very chilling bite my friend.
Guilty passion (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 4:26:59 AM
Does one ever get over the guilt of passion. Needs are needs and love is love. One without the other can never be complete. As you say in your poem, "two steps forward and three steps back." Shall always leave us one step behind. Bless You Always, Paul.
Guilty passion (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 4:29:48 PM
Okies maybe I will come to vampire cornwall...
Guilty passion (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 10:57:57 AM
Look before you leap? I really enjoyed this lesson in pretentious love.
Guilty passion (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 10:30:31 AM
Wow! this is realllly good.
At Night. (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 8:59:39 AM
Quote Andy; You're a vampire?
LOL. Yeah didn't I mention that.....
Thanks for the reviews everyone.
At Night. (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 8:41:12 AM
as I sense my prey.
I smile as the night
cloaks me like a friend. <-----You're a vampire?
Changing my holiday plans, if that's cornwall..
I enjoy the atmosphere this does provoke...
At Night. (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 7:58:15 AM
Night time can be our friend in many and various ways...Good write.
At Night. (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 7:56:00 AM
As the night beckons, what waits hidden in the cooling dusk....
Mountain. (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 1:07:27 PM
Wonderful imagery throughout.
Trevithick Day. (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 9:05:30 AM
Theresa, we could use another holiday (excuse not to work) on this side of the pond...so, send it our way. Great write!
Snow Angel (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 8:55:13 AM
It appears as if an 'angelic' healing took place.
Mountain. (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 8:20:07 AM
I love this...great imagry all the way through.
Tears of a Fallen Angel (Poetry) - 4/30/2007 8:00:57 PM
A nice expression of thought...
Mountain. (Poetry) - 4/30/2007 7:58:59 PM
Very nice...pictures that make one find that beauty you speak of, the mountains are such a nice source of peace....
Mountain. (Poetry) - 4/30/2007 7:51:21 PM
An enjoyable read this one is. Breathe in the fresh, clean air at the mountain top is an experience for so few.
Mountain. (Poetry) - 4/30/2007 6:11:11 PM
Yep, your right; as I stare out over the Collieget's watching the sun retreat behind infinite hills, Mt. Princton's visible though 100 miles or so. I know a river that snakes down from her majesty, through the Chalk cliff's. In the dead of winter the hot springs call me still. No flowers visible at this altitude yet but the Elk come often, and soon the bears are yawning and will be in my garbage all season long.
Mountain. (Poetry) - 4/30/2007 1:18:58 PM
This is a beautiful picture. I can see the Mountain kings with heavy beards of ice and snow, others wearing thick beards of green green trees.
Mountain. (Poetry) - 4/30/2007 12:55:11 PM
What took you so long? I've been up hear waiting. Seriously, I'm lost in the beauty of the imagery. I love the way you put yourself into your writing.
Mountain. (Poetry) - 4/30/2007 12:42:24 PM
smooth, soft, hard, unyielding
yet beautiful and so tempting. <----seya at the top..lol
Snow Angel (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 10:37:38 PM
Very passionate write, your mind wandering, taking it all in, how beautiful.
Snow Angel (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 4:01:44 PM
Your imagery is outstanding as always. I felt the cold and the heat of the person as well as the weather yet there was the carefree feeling of childhood. Blessings Always, Paul.
Snow Angel (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 12:39:50 PM
You get snow? Not seen it in years..
Maybe I'll do a sand one, and see if it has the same healing affect...
Trevithick Day. (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 11:14:18 AM
Drunken people loving everyone <---LOLOLOLOL. H is write cotton candy over the puddle, we should send books over about correct words. Ask for suspenders and see what yer get..
No Maypole or bloody Morris dancers
Nice one, just read up the the big feller, interesting...
Trevithick Day. (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 9:45:41 AM
Very beautiful write. I love the nostalgia of the fair, especially the antics of the clowns. Popcorn, candy apples and cotton candy. Outstanding dedication also.
Trevithick Day. (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 7:25:38 AM
Fun read, and a nice commemerative. Candy floss? I think they call this cotton candy on this side of the world... :0)
The Graveyard. (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 5:38:08 PM
Interesting, yet very sad. You know, on the tombstones they all have a birth, a dash, and a death. I try to focus on the dash because that is where all the living is. Good write.
The Graveyard. (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 4:20:19 PM
I could feel the longing you have for your lost love in this write. Well done.
The Graveyard. (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 2:08:39 PM
Just enough darkness, but then it is the graveyard. Well done!
Tears of a Fallen Angel (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 1:02:59 PM
Very breast beating like lamentations. I can feel it to the core of nature. I'm elated my angels are all happy ones. Blessings Always, Paul.
The Graveyard. (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 12:58:03 PM
Your imagery is always so outstanding. It definitely never lacks detail. I could feel the embrace of death. A sort of Danse Macabre. Hauntingly beautiful poetry my friend.
The Graveyard. (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 6:46:24 AM
This poem touched me deeply. Such heartache for a loved one. He will always live in your heart, Theresa. Awesome poem of love and loss.
Tears of a Fallen Angel (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 6:35:18 AM
Hi Ann, I like this, it reminds me of mythology; possibly Greek or?
Fields of Corn (Poetry) - 4/25/2007 4:07:11 AM
I was one of the children in the corn.. corny huh..
Nice poem about the occasional day we see the sun..
Hidden. (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 1:19:26 PM
Quite eerie and gloomy. I can picture the many limbs reaching out to punish me for something I swear I didn't do. Sort of a gantlet. I can feel my legs moving like hell but my body's going nowheres. I love your use of words. Always, Paul.
Fields of Corn (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 4:41:20 AM
You are more accomplished than you think my friend. This is very well written. You captured and took me to your moment in the sun. I could almost taste the strawberries myself. You used nature and sensuality to your advantage to draw the reader in and that is what effective writing is all about. Excellent poem.
Forget me Not (Poetry) - 4/13/2007 10:40:53 AM
This is quite a piece you have here. Yes, this can be considered dark poetry in some respects but this is also inspirational and an affirmation of belief. I enjoyed your little piece here and am glad to have dropped by.
Forget me Not (Poetry) - 4/10/2007 12:33:23 PM
I like your poem. A bit dark but very good. Makes one think what the deceased is actually thinking. I don't think I'll ever pay my respects again without wondering.