Recent Reviews for Debra Faulconer Baker
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I’ve Come Home to Turn the Key (Short Story) - 7/10/2008 4:11:41 PM
Warm and wonderful. This is so full of family love, and love for the old, simple ways. Home is the place to be. You made everything come to life so beautifully that I would love to visit in this home.
Connie
I Slip Away in My Book (Short Story) - 6/28/2008 2:37:11 PM
A lovely bedtime story of princesses and magic that I can truly see the little girl reading as the candle light flickers. There is somthing about reading books by candle that brings one into a sort of magic trance at times. I used to love being at my cottage at night and reading by that flickering flame.
Fee
I Slip Away in My Book (Short Story) - 6/28/2008 10:01:53 AM
My dreams tend to haunt me at night. But your beautiful, heartwarming and comforting story above is what I will dwell on as I fade into sleep. Well Done! Deborah
I’ve Come Home to Turn the Key (Short Story) - 6/28/2008 8:24:20 AM
Debra - so sweet, touching, deep and wonderful this write of yours. Brought me back to the time my grandmother was looking at her family albums. She was all that was left in her generation and she wondered why she was still here as she ached to go home. Well Done! Deborah
I’ve Come Home to Turn the Key (Short Story) - 6/24/2008 12:18:52 PM
Excellent work!!! It was so deep with meanings of life past and present. The welcome the Aunt received was wonderful and the relationship between the nephew and Aunt truly heartfelt. A most enjoyable write with such power in the words. "You will turn the key" sent chills through me. Well done!
Smiles,
Dorothy
I’ve Come Home to Turn the Key (Short Story) - 6/21/2008 9:49:52 AM
Debra---how deep and thought provoking were the effective combination of a picture and haunting, if not deeply spiritual words.
Aloha and Best
Myles
I’ve Come Home to Turn the Key (Short Story) - 6/19/2008 12:10:03 PM
Rivetting tale from beginning to end...brought us into the world that you so obviously cherish deep in your heart and soul.
hugs
Fee
I’ve Come Home to Turn the Key (Short Story) - 6/19/2008 10:26:31 AM
The photo is absolutely beautiful in a hauntingly nostalgic way. I love the title to this write. The feel of your words is so genuine and your overall composition propels the reader into your heart. I really enjoyed reading this.
Putting The Scottish Ghost To Rest (Short Story) - 5/17/2007 5:44:08 PM
Very good stuff, thanks!
The Fork Lore Tale of Caleb O'Mally (Short Story) - 5/12/2007 4:54:38 AM
Wonderful ghostly tale my friend, this reminds me of the legends and myths that my grandmother used to tell us when we younger. Oh my when nighttime fell, it was something...all of us would hear the cries of whoever the story was about, just knowing that they were lurking outside our windows. I love how you grab the reader at the beginning and lead them through quickly with no wasted words, strong right to the very end! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Putting The Scottish Ghost To Rest (Short Story) - 5/12/2007 4:11:51 AM
Ooh, this was so good! Loved every word of this poetic tale, I agree with Felix this has the makings of a great book. Great imagery, you took the reader on a timeless journey! Bravo!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The Fork Lore Tale of Caleb O'Mally (Short Story) - 5/8/2007 3:29:33 AM
Eerie yet enticing right to the end, as it grips you from the beginning and winds you through the sad story of lovers scorned left to mourn. Wonderful Deb.
Fee
Putting The Scottish Ghost To Rest (Short Story) - 5/7/2007 7:45:42 AM
What a terrific tale and one that has the makings of a great book with all the images, ghosts, romance and intrique to fill in betweent he exceptional lines already covered here.
Fee
Putting The Scottish Ghost To Rest (Short Story) - 5/7/2007 7:41:20 AM
Eternal love... awesome ghost story!
Take Care,
Karen
She Surrenders (Poetry) - 11/10/2009 5:09:04 PM
A soul-stirring offering, Debra; very compelling. Love and best wishes,
Regis
She Surrenders (Poetry) - 11/10/2009 4:30:18 PM
Deb this is special, captures romance ache so lovingly tender and sweet. Well done
fee
She Surrenders (Poetry) - 11/10/2009 4:12:25 PM
This is a wonderfully constructed poem and a sad one to me, because I feel the same echoes of her heart that she feels. Someone is gone. It has been nine months for me. "Forever and once more to awaken his heart" Outstanding.
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/7/2009 5:00:43 PM
How beautiful Debra. I love the line, "The butterflies danced in my heart" For some reason the picture isn't showing up.
Hugs,
Marcia
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/7/2009 2:27:08 PM
It is amazing when that kind of love exists and lasts often for a lifetime and the flame never burns out. You capture the longing of lost love that was held in the heart so well.
hugs
fee
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/7/2009 11:30:09 AM
Words meant to remember a love everlasting and beautifully put together . . .
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/7/2009 10:53:06 AM
Lovely memories well-shared via your verses, Debra. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/7/2009 8:47:59 AM
Debra,
Beautiful memories never fade. Loved it. So happy, yet so sad.
Mary
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/7/2009 7:51:40 AM
A beautiful memory took me back to my first love I remember it well and at times I can still smell her hair.. thanks
A Lovely Petal of Endless Time (Poetry) - 11/5/2009 4:26:30 PM
This gives the impression of a solitary figure waiting, mourning, for one as yet unseen. She must make a striking picture, as you are so absorbed in her search. You paint a fascinating scene in these lines.
Connie
A Lovely Petal of Endless Time (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 10:21:32 PM
"For whom
I have yet to see" a reflection of love shadowed by hope. very good indeed..
A Beggar I've Become (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 6:46:10 PM
....A MOTHER...THERE IN THE GOOD TIMES AND THE BAD TIMES...AND THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT. THIS WORK TOUCHED ME DEEPLY...I CAN RELATE TO IT COMPLETELY FOR 'CHARITY'(LOVE)...BEGINS AT HOME. DONE SO WELL AND ENJOYED IMMENSELY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Fantasy Waiting to Emerge (Poetry) - 9/20/2009 6:34:29 AM
emotionally passionate, beautiful poem ...
Fantasy Waiting to Emerge (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 9:08:34 PM
This is a gorgeous piece of work. Well done.
Ageless in Time (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 6:32:36 PM
DONE WELL...FILLED WITH GOOD PHRASES AND IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Fantasy Waiting to Emerge (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 10:28:08 AM
Very nicely done Deb, truly loved the train of thought and how you projected it so well with your lines...sweet.
hugs
fee
Fantasy Waiting to Emerge (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 10:09:41 AM
DEPICTED HEREIN SO WONDERFUL AND TENDER IS ONE WHO WAITS, HOPES AND YEARNS FOR TRUE LOVE...I PRAY SHE COMES. THANK YOU DEBRA FOR SHARING YOUR ARTISTIC GIFT SO BEAUTIFULLY. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Fantasy Waiting to Emerge (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 9:05:59 AM
Beautiful writing sweet lady..nice to read you again..stay safe and well..Hugss
Fantasy Waiting to Emerge (Poetry) - 9/19/2009 6:02:38 AM
Ah, the ache within the boundaries of this piece of poetical masterpiece. There are so many lines, phrases which could stand alone that is takes my breath. This is beautiful.
A Beggar I've Become (Poetry) - 9/7/2009 4:37:13 PM
Nice construction to carry the story of a quest.
The emotion appears without being forced.
Axilea
A Beggar I've Become (Poetry) - 9/4/2009 11:32:32 AM
Wow Deb this one yanks the heart right out of a parent and leaves tear stains on my tee shirt for I CANNOT imagine if that had been one of mine...
fee
A Beggar I've Become (Poetry) - 9/3/2009 7:10:46 AM
I wish I could see your photos you post
they are a big white box with a little red X in it :(
This post rips into the heart allowing us to feel a depth of emptiness in dispair...deeply set in grievous emotions...
Peace & Blesings
Vickie
Restless Spirit (Poetry) - 7/26/2009 11:20:46 AM
Yes, we have moments like this...
Amen
Pick from the Vines of Heartache (Poetry) - 6/22/2009 7:36:57 AM
How did I miss these posts? I am sorry, I think my email must not be correct!
This is so beautiful of love!! Though I am seriously late...These words reflect a true depth of real love beyound the physical elelemtns of love's caress...
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Ageless in Time (Poetry) - 6/22/2009 7:33:37 AM
"She is the breath of time"
this line is so beautiful within this lovely poem!
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
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