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Recent Reviews for Verica - Peacock
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Infinity (Poetry) - 3/24/2007 10:42:51 AM
Personally, I think that was a stupid decision but, in the grand scheme of things, it probably does not matter much. Thank you for this though and I agree with your sentiments. Love and peace,
Regis
A Plaintive Plea (Poetry) - 3/24/2007 10:41:07 AM
This touches the depth of my soul, Verica. Your verses are emotively powerful and meaningful. Love and peace,
Regis
My Best Friend And My Lover (Poetry) - 3/23/2007 9:45:46 PM
Oh, this is hilarious! As a suggestion, I would change the last line to "But, best of all, their brains and bums can easily interchange!"
That would better maintain the flow and cadence, IMO. -- Jeff
My Best Friend And My Lover (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 7:36:46 PM
Truely was a delight! Nice comparisons, well done.
Be safe,
Karen
My Best Friend And My Lover (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 8:12:02 AM
Thank you Karla and Karen on your comments; also, Mr Ed. The welcome is much appreciated. Lots of love, Verica
A Plaintive Plea (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 6:30:01 AM
Verica,
Heartshattering write! Very well and powerfully penned; may this never happen again!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears! <
My Best Friend And My Lover (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 6:29:02 AM
Your last stanza - says it all!!!
My Best Friend And My Lover (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 6:28:25 AM
LOL Too funny, Verica; enjoyed this romp of a write! Very ewll done; brava! And welcome to the Den; you are among friends! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, a new friend in America, Karen Lynn (Karla's twin sis; we live in Texas). :D
My Best Friend And My Lover (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 6:24:05 AM
LOL, Verica,
I know this much: surgeons make the W O R S T patients! LOL It's sad, though: talk to anyone working at a particular hospital, they don't want any procedures done at their own hospital! Another excellent write, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And the part about the politicians: SPOT ON!!!!!!
Infinity (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 6:21:34 AM
Verica,
Isn't it sad? All these years, I knew Pluto as a planet, and now it's just an asteroid. Just hope it doesn't slam into the Earth as revenge...LOL An excellent, thought provoking piece, well done!
Read your bio, I'm part Croatian (but cannot speak it)!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A Plaintive Plea (Poetry) - 3/22/2007 6:12:11 AM
Veronica,
What a eye-opening debut you have penned here about man's inhumanity to man...shattering!
Welcome to Author's Den, you're among friends.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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