Recent Reviews for Nan C Loyd
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Smokin' Hot (Short Story) - 7/31/2008 10:50:05 AM
Well I must say......KUDOS TO YOU!! It's about time someone spoke up for the men being bashed by their "not so happy" loved ones. You sure did a wonderful job. This should be put in newspapers across the world.......maybe then would women understand how much they would gain in positive chat about their significant others! Women are powerful in so many ways and when they start bashing it goes below who they are in society. I enjoyed this write!
Smiles,
Dorothy
Boys and Their Toys (Short Story) - 3/23/2007 1:19:55 PM
Boys will be boys. With my hubby, it's Jeeps and jeep related accessories--not to mention his hot-rod project. I figured it would be wrong to stand between him and his child-like delights. I just make sure he's not blowing our mortgage on winches and brush-guards.
Ode to My Father's Truck (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 2:47:29 AM
Lovely tribute, Nan
Ode to My Father's Truck (Poetry) - 8/14/2009 2:49:12 AM
We miss those special folks who touch us. A wonderful tribute to your dad.
Amen
A Relaxing Ditty (Poetry) - 5/27/2009 8:58:29 AM
Me too....good job!
Anna
Snake in the Woodpile (Poetry) - 5/27/2009 8:58:01 AM
Been there done that too. Married a snake that slithered around me for 16 years. I shed the bum though. Good job Nan. I like your writing style. Gonna follow you.
Anna
Ode to My Father's Truck (Poetry) - 5/27/2009 8:56:36 AM
Lovely tribute to your father. My dad's been gone for 12 years, and I miss him like the day he left. Good job Nan.
Anna
Ode to My Father's Truck (Poetry) - 7/26/2008 4:08:35 PM
Am right there with you in missing my Dad. I always went with him and sat in the back seat when a child as if to say He's my chauffer.
He didn't mind, I did not mind. I was my fathers sidekick he'd tell others. I had such good times with him. Mother was the disciplanarian in our family and Dad and I were the ones who stuck together against her if we could. He was a very good man, my dad and handsome besides. Have photos to relate to him when needing memories.
His Way (Poetry) - 7/26/2008 12:25:09 PM
God is number one in my life now always. He give me what he wants me to have, leads me on my way each and every day I live now. I will abound in his tender mercies.
Snake in the Woodpile (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 8:38:27 PM
Nan this is priceless! Don't know what or who this is about...but it was sure a great topic to put on paper... YOu did it right, and gave us alot of food for thought.... There are all types of snakes in this world... be glad you/? escaped.... a iittle bite/sting...isn't near as bad as being totally devoured... You got it right...like I said... kick butt and keep going...best of all...keep writing... you sure have a gift... lindalaw
Ode to My Father's Truck (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 8:34:52 PM
I know you miss him...like Cryssa misses her mom; and I miss both of mine, my son, my precious mate, and on and on it goes... You know, sometimes we don't have to "move" to "feel" them near....but sometimes we have no choice....but remember this.... wherever you are..He is! My late hubby used to tell me about my first granddaughter... She is the spittin image of you thru and thru...and as long as she lives...you live! I thought about that, and it spoke volumes... We are a part of those we love and so on... I love this poem very much... very very much. Lindalaw
Heartache (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 7:11:50 PM
A perfect description of heartache...
Cryssa
Snake in the Woodpile (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 6:42:46 PM
Ouch, sounds like someone has been burned by a bad relationship. Yes, there are worse things than snakes....
Be always safe,
Karen
Snake in the Woodpile (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 6:28:20 PM
I hope he did not ruin you for life or for another relationship. You can find something better and eventually go on with life. Believe me I do know, it happened to me. Being asked for a divorce with 4 daughters to raise, and then divorcing him I found true love with my 2nd husband. Don't give up, there are good ones still out there who won't hurt you but give you lots of love and truly stand by you in everything you do. So sorry what you are going through now. Things will get better in time.
Protecting Love (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:58:18 PM
We all need those little wake-up calls in our life...
Cryssa
Saying Goodbye (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:57:11 PM
Especially when goodbyes come unexpectedly...
trying to hold sand in an hourglass doesn't work, but oh... that it would...
Cryssa
My Mother (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:54:45 PM
This brought tears to my eyes, as I think my daughter could have written this... or I about my daughter...
:~)
Cryssa
Real Love (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:53:34 PM
A beautiful tribute to your son...
If only children could understand this love...
Cryssa
I Knew You When (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:51:22 PM
a sad comment on life...when changes come and we are no longer "needed"
Cryssa
Ode to My Father's Truck (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:50:11 PM
I know the feeling...There I things I just don't move because they contain traces of my mother.
Cryssa
Snake in the Woodpile (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:39:10 PM
So sad to be true. So many's reality
Snake in the Woodpile (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 4:25:08 PM
I enjoyed the point of view in this; well conceived, well expressed.
John
Snake in the Woodpile (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 2:48:44 PM
Hi Nan,I'm sorry that you had a bad relationship and I'll bet your boyfriend was a snake in the grass.I like reading your poem.I hope one day you will find a man that will not act or be like a snake in front of you.Instead hopefully he will be a man full of love,compassion,understanding,sensitivity and all the things that you deserve and want in a man.take care of yourself and don't pick out anymore snakes lol :-)
Edwin
Weeping Willow (Poetry) - 7/2/2008 8:51:07 PM
Darn it... sometimes we sure do have to kiss alot of ugly frogs before that Prince finally comes along! Sure hope you got a good one! lindalaw
I Knew You When (Poetry) - 7/2/2008 8:50:22 PM
Isn't that the truth... Everyone knew us "when".... but where are they when we need THEM? Good writing. lindalaw
Love Ain't Got No Buts (Poetry) - 7/2/2008 8:49:38 PM
Are you sure I didn't write this.. sounds just like words I've said a million times... and had said to me as many jillion times... :-)) good poem. lindalaw
Weeping Willow (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 1:24:32 PM
A wonderful use of imagery. The emotion in this poem is raw and real - true to life. Well done!
Sheila
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