Recent Reviews for Oralya G Ueberroth
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I Remember You (Short Story) - 7/15/2008 9:00:52 AM
Fantastic Poetic song and dance.
God blessed you with talent that has no limits.
Other poets could learn from you - I am one of them!
Blessings,
John Michael
To Picture A Wedding Dress (Short Story) - 9/13/2007 6:38:45 PM
That is so wonderful. Why are you simply a reader and not an author. You have what it takes.
I Remember You (Short Story) - 8/17/2007 10:04:12 AM
A MOST POWERFUL WRITE!...(provoking self-introspection)
One "holds the mirror" up to oneself; viewing PAST the outer layer to the inner realm and ponders how GOD is shaping them, molding them into the person that HE wants them to become, all amidst the trials & tribulations of life.
...wanting them to GROW to be the BEST SOUL that they can possibly BE! (Draw nigh to HIM and HE WILL draw nigh to you) So one must GLORIFY GOD in the flesh by renewing our minds and making our petitions known [more importantly--REVERENCE]to HIM in our PRAYERS.
All the best;
Rober
To Picture A Wedding Dress (Short Story) - 8/9/2007 9:31:29 PM
Exceptional work
To Picture A Wedding Dress (Short Story) - 8/7/2007 3:32:38 PM
Absolutely beautiful!
Turbulence (Poetry) - 1/26/2009 8:34:09 PM
Yes we do!
I remember the day quite clearly myself, in a fog that seemed to be so thick one had to feel their way through to accept the hard facts! I wrote a poem regarding Di, and not that I'm a Di-hard Di-fan, but her death was such a waste! What a wonderful soul she was!
"The Yeoman's Shall" by Kimmy Van Kooten...check it out sometime!
I liked yor pen!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Only one thing left to say… (Poetry) - 1/18/2009 7:55:52 PM
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
Only one thing left to say… (Poetry) - 10/29/2008 7:08:56 AM
Teasing? At least it sounds good-natured; I wasn't as lucky. I was Mom's favorite target in verbal AND physical attacks.
Well written.
Sandy
Giving Up (Poetry) - 9/9/2008 7:40:24 PM
Damn - I very much identify with your writing - please continue. Best, BEEDS
What If? (Poetry) - 9/9/2008 7:38:31 PM
Absolutely outstanding! Well done - I very much enjoyed the read! Good Luck! And Best Wishes, BEEDS
The First Time (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 5:30:42 AM
this depicts more of the perfect time to make a wish that could possibly come through. I say this is somewhat inspirational.
The First Time (Poetry) - 5/1/2008 8:03:21 PM
You've captured the moment very well
Where Are the Words? (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 4:35:10 PM
I can feel the confusion, the longing, the love, keep writing so I can come back for more
Finding Fault (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 4:33:12 PM
Like a movie scene in my head! "...One small and dirty neglected child –
Living under a pile of laundry that is
Walking itself down the hallway to the washer " this made me laugh, what an image
Giving Up (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 4:30:52 PM
I am glad I found you at the Den, you are an amazing writer!
The First Time (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 4:29:31 PM
Awesome, I especially loved this line "...between the ponds of desires and dreams"
The Debt (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 4:27:12 PM
Wao! Very touching!
What If? (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 4:25:36 PM
Stunning!
Giving Up (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 4:45:48 AM
Surprisingly, this piece of poetry hasn't received any review yet.
I find the imagery interesting, speaking of an experience, yet focusing on symbolic details.
There is a time when we understand that it's time to close a door and pain will turn into deliverance.
Greetings,
Axilea
The Debt (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 7:29:09 PM
Yes Oralya - YES
The Debt (Poetry) - 10/20/2007 6:33:26 PM
This writing style is very inducing and interesting. "The Debt" depicts the feelings with a poemization that touches de womb of the heart and shows the picture of soul.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Where Are the Words? (Poetry) - 10/20/2007 6:21:51 PM
I like the poemization of emotions in "Where Are the Words?".
Keep posting, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Finding Fault (Poetry) - 10/20/2007 6:16:09 PM
Very unique composition. "Finding Fault" is pictured as a daily domestic affair, but it comes with an intrisic message that strikes one's sense of social responsibility. I also read it as a political satire.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Finding Fault".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The First Time (Poetry) - 9/7/2007 6:03:21 PM
wonderful! Jasmin Horst
The Debt (Poetry) - 8/19/2007 11:02:26 AM
Oh, wow. What a moving poem. It hits hard, makes me want to cry. Very well done.
Where Are the Words? (Poetry) - 8/16/2007 2:25:58 PM
i agree with amor, this is exceptionally well written, poetry is borne of pain, as well as beauty and love....bravo
Where Are the Words? (Poetry) - 8/9/2007 9:35:04 PM
Superbly written...superbly expressed...Love rarely ever comes without pain or sacrifice in some way or another. Though it leaves one injured...beautiful expressions such as this result.
Where Are the Words? (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 5:21:52 PM
This poem is a powerful cathartic ...
Richard
The First Time (Poetry) - 7/20/2007 7:54:00 AM
wow, this is great...your writing is really impressive
The Debt (Poetry) - 7/18/2007 7:50:09 PM
I've felt this myself.
You put it beautifully on paper.
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