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Four Years Later: Our Still City Grieves (repost) (Short Story) - 3/4/2006 4:47:32 AM
This is so true Blackberry; none of them will be forgotten. I remember when the Empire State Building was the only tall structure in New York. Then came the magnificent World Trade Center, jutting into the New York Skyline. I have a small mirror clock that has the twin towers on it, and the airplane lights on the sides of the buildings, actuall light up. I have been offered $3,000.00 for this clock, and even tho I could use the money, I turned it down. Why? Because I felt it would be like deserting those whose memories we must never forget. The memories of the ones that went to work that fateful morning, never to return home again, alive. It is really sad, that once again, Americans have been attacked. But this time not by a country, but by cowards. Cowards who do not declare war outright, so we can be prepared, but cowards who attack unsuspecting and innocent people, without remorse. In my opinion, the Al Queda (never could spell that stupid thing), are not warriors, not fighting a religious war, but are just insane people, who need to be locked into a padded room, with mittens on their hands and a helmet on their head. Thnx for sharing Blackeberry. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and all those lost in the savage destruction of the World Trade Center, and all those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

The Color Purple (Short Story) - 8/9/2005 5:43:58 AM
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The Color Purple (Short Story) - 7/30/2005 3:22:30 PM
You deserve so much better than this! We need to raise our sons better and teach our daughters how precious they are. Another brave write...

The Color Purple (Short Story) - 2/23/2005 9:02:37 PM
Now it's time to say good bye and walk away towards forever.

The Color Purple (Short Story) - 2/20/2005 4:45:45 PM
The person that assaulted my friend's daughter got two years but is on probation. He also has a protective order against him and if he violates it he will serve time. No woman or man should have to put up with this. Walk away no don't walk you run.

The Color Purple (Short Story) - 2/20/2005 2:07:40 PM
sad write, but very well done, blueberry! thanks for sharing; well done! (((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :(

Four Years Later: Our Still City Grieves (repost) (Short Story) - 12/13/2003 7:59:57 PM
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Four Years Later: Our Still City Grieves (repost) (Short Story) - 7/20/2002 10:32:44 AM
such an emotional piece, RuthCamille!! it evokes just how you felt (and still feel). my prayers and thoughts are with you. i love you, and i love new york; i also love america, and all that she stands for. god bless you mightily, my friend!!

Four Years Later: Our Still City Grieves (repost) (Short Story) - 5/22/2002 3:47:29 PM
I am from Chicago, so I can feel for what goes on -- some friends of mine live in New York City and I had no idea where they were or if they were safe. I was scared if one of them was in the towers -- then a friend in Iowa lost her best friend, she worked on the 130 floor. Then a person I stayed with in Canada was talking to a dying man.

Yellow Grits -Part IV (Short Story) - 3/26/2002 4:58:16 PM
You've brought tears to my eyes! Wonderful writing and vivid characters. Now...excuse my begging, "More, pleasse."

Yellow Grits - Part II (Short Story) - 3/26/2002 4:52:13 PM
You've got me now...gonna have to read part 3 again!

Yellow Grits - Part I (Short Story) - 3/26/2002 4:50:28 PM
Well...going on to the other continuations! This is good...I want to read more!

Yellow Grits -Part III (Short Story) - 3/26/2002 4:48:32 PM
I just started reading this and now I see that there's other parts to it. My o my...you sure did 'reel' me in...have to go and read the others now.

Morning News (Short Story) - 3/20/2002 3:58:08 PM
Very nice. Enjoyed the read...

Four Years Later: Our Still City Grieves (repost) (Short Story) - 3/15/2002 4:00:10 PM
I live in NY myself so I can clearly relate to this. You have such a beautiful way of expressing yourself.

Four Years Later: Our Still City Grieves (repost) (Short Story) - 3/14/2002 9:12:27 AM
A clear description of the way it is for you now. Here on the other side of your world I can visualise it so well through your words.

The Missing Ingredient (Article) - 3/12/2006 12:03:58 PM
Mnnnnn mmmm I can smell it cooking all the way up here in Acadian Nova Scotia. Felix

Halloween (Article) - 11/4/2005 8:31:30 AM
Thanks for the great info, Blackberry! Happy Halloween to you too and God bless, Sandie.

Halloween (Article) - 11/3/2005 12:27:34 PM
Good informative and fact filled article. Felix

My House (Article) - 8/24/2005 8:43:36 PM
I love Nikki Giovanni too! I presented a poem written by her in junior high, however it wasn't until this year that I really dove into her poetry. Wow!!!!!!!! I wish I could have met her; must've been a wonderful experience.

Faith (Article) - 8/15/2005 7:35:32 PM
This heavenly blessing written above was sent to me on just the right moment in just the right way. Thank you so very much. I bless the Lord. Stephanie Sawyer

Keeping it Real (Article) - 8/15/2005 10:00:32 AM
Jennifer...that is the whole point of the piece. When you expose your own flaws ON YOUR OWN no one else can judge you nor will they expect you to be perfect because you've already made it know that you are not. Just try to be real and not present yourself as perfect so that people know that what they see is what they get. People are drawn to others who are more open and expose themselves - flaws and all. Hiding is not being authentic and true to yourself.

Keeping it Real (Article) - 8/15/2005 8:50:23 AM
Knowing a person's flaws only gives you the power to judge them in your time of anger. If you want to trust yourself to love a person despite past failures, you must let those failures remain safely hidden in the past where your eventual wrath will never be able to pounce upon them. Nobody's perfect ALL the time.

Weighting to Exhale - Part 2 (Article) - 8/13/2005 11:29:29 PM
Good luck, Blackberry! I wish I had your will power! and my schedule has been so tight of late! " ... I am struggling to recapture the person I used to be so that I can become the person I want to be ..." powerful statement. God bless, Sandie.

Bus Bully (Article) - 8/13/2005 10:08:51 AM
Good story. Thanks for that one.

Bus Bully (Article) - 8/11/2005 8:16:36 PM
So true and so right on as usual my lovely friend and so wise. Felix

Purple is the Color (Article) - 8/11/2005 2:59:31 PM
A frightening write, BJ, with undertones of helplessness and apathy strung within its framwork. And, Felix is right, it is the victim who has to help her or himself in an abusive relationship. A strong, almost 'disassociative' piece emoted calmly, but which chills the reader, nonetheless. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Purple is the Color (Article) - 8/11/2005 2:48:55 PM
This is too scary because it is all too real in too many relaionships and it just keeps going on. I said it before we are moving towards a point where this has to be stopped at all costs. Yet unfortunately it is still only the victims that can make the real impact. Felix

Hair braid mess (Article) - 8/10/2005 2:38:40 PM
LOL good one, but as I shave my own head it saves me all those problems. Felix

I Owe my Mother (Article) - 8/10/2005 12:49:56 PM
So right you are and losing my mother and father when I was only 26 I can understand this write so well. now it is 25 years later and I still miss my mom as much as I did then. Felix

Drumstruck! (Article) - 8/10/2005 12:47:41 PM
sounds like it was a truly uplifting and interesting musical happening. YOur words brought me there. Thank you. Felix

An Ode to Friends (Article) - 8/9/2005 7:08:54 AM
So true. Someone actually attempted to buy my love, as he had so little affection to offer. But of course, that is impossible for the sincere of heart.

An Ode to Friends (Article) - 8/9/2005 6:58:26 AM
Wonderful write, and beautiful outlook on life and friendships, if more people thought your way maybe the world would find a way to live in peace. Felix

Weighting to Exhale (Article) - 7/31/2005 5:30:55 AM
I've just read in another article that one of our own here has lost 40 pounds in no time by adding a large glass of water before and after each meal -- this in addition to her 3 times per week workout. I'm going to try that myself. Fight! Fight! Fight! :)

Weighting to Exhale (Article) - 7/30/2005 3:19:53 PM
This is my battle, too! I hope you find success. It's brave to face these things in writing.

Charity begins at home (Article) - 7/28/2005 10:14:43 PM
Sounds like a marvelous program. I wonder whether there is one in Houston?

Charity begins at home (Article) - 7/26/2005 6:51:51 PM
Thank you BJ and I certainly will look into it. Anyway we can reach out and help these people is good in my books. Felix

Good Vibrations: (Article) - 4/24/2005 2:17:51 PM
Thanks for sharing. Tituss has a remarkable voice. Cynthia

My House (Article) - 4/20/2005 9:31:33 AM
nikki giovanni is one of my favorites too, berry! glad you got to meet her! how exciting! wonderful write; well done! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Poker Face (Article) - 4/18/2005 5:20:44 PM
i hide my true feelings too, berry; you are certainly not alone in this matter! which is why i write; i can say things in words that i can't say in real life, and writing helps me to heal. good write! :)

A Taxing Situation (Article) - 4/12/2005 9:33:52 AM
we (my twin and myself) do our taxes early (depending on when we get our W-2 forms; we do it anywhere from january to february); always have since i moved to texas, and we usually get something back. karla got enough to be able to go on a cruise to mexico; i got a little, but it's better than nothing! :) good advice here, berry; well done! love the pic; too cute! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 1/1/2007 7:20:38 PM
Yes Blackberry, this is very wonderfully expressed, from deep in your heart and soul. Happy New Year Blackberry Jam, to you, and those whom you love. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 11/7/2006 9:57:02 AM
A wonderfully expressive poem, Blackberry! Welcome back!

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 11/6/2006 3:31:51 PM
So excellent because it's so true. Who can't relate to these words?!

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 11/5/2006 6:06:28 PM
Thank you for your comments. I have been away too long. I appreciate your kind words. Hope to post more soon.

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 11/5/2006 3:05:44 PM
Blackberry. first of all it is so great to see you back on board again, you have been missed. As for this poem it is very self reflective and I hope it is not a personnal statement for it rings with self doubt which is somthing you should certainly not have. Great job though of a sad subject. Fee

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 11/5/2006 2:44:06 PM
An achingly sad write. The feeling of not being enough is something that is often a reflection of our own insecurity. You have no reason to be insecure. It is obvious you're a talented, sensitive and insightful person. May you find that you are more than enough. Chanti

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 11/5/2006 1:30:01 PM
Wow! This is a beautiful and deep write...if there is someone who has left your life...they are missing out on a fantastic poet, their loss. Nice write my friend don't be so hard on yourself, often times it is the one who departs where the problem lies. Blessings, Joyce Bowling

In the Absence of You (Poetry) - 11/5/2006 1:13:47 PM
A deep deep look inside the dynamics of emotional exchange within relationships. IN THE ABSENCE OF YOU makes me wonder if we sometimes both offer and expect "too much" in our unions with others. A great thought-provoking read. Aberjhani

Try a little tenderness (Poetry) - 4/5/2006 9:07:24 AM
I wish I had someone to say that too. I wish I had someone who could hold me, and tenderly kiss me in love's embrace. Anyway Thnx Blackberry for sharing this with us, this is such a romantic, emotional, and soulful write. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Try a little tenderness (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 6:14:13 AM
Ahhhhh. So sweet, so tender, so. . .h o t! Thank you !! 'Pea' <3

Try a little tenderness (Poetry) - 3/4/2006 2:29:32 PM
Tenderness and this poem definitely work:-)

Try a little tenderness (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 5:22:37 AM
Awesome. I just love the passion that is steaming off my screen. I hope your man realizes how lucky he is. Excellent write. Karen

Try a little tenderness (Poetry) - 2/25/2006 11:00:51 PM
Wow my first reaction to this was to quickly go to your picture to see the women who could send our such strong erotcally tender verses, then reread when no picture to be found and left with it lingering in my head. Well done Jam. Felix

closing the spaces in time (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 6:43:45 PM
A perfect gem! :)

In spite of... (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 9:43:55 AM
Beautiful passionate write, Blackberry! Oozing with a sense of longingness and desire! God bless, Sandie,

In spite of... (Poetry) - 1/29/2006 8:27:54 AM
Deeply moving expression of romantic desire and emotional need. A beautiful write.

In spite of... (Poetry) - 1/29/2006 12:09:51 AM
This one I can feel the longing and passion of an illicit desire coming right through the flat screen. Sends your message to your lover strong and bold well done Jam. Felix

closing the spaces in time (Poetry) - 1/17/2006 7:57:58 PM
I agree with Felix. This is such a great poem of yearnig, wondering, thinking, and meditating. Thnx for sharing, sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. Wih much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

closing the spaces in time (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 11:15:17 AM
I think you've said it all! It's very good!

closing the spaces in time (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 4:07:17 AM
a wonderful place to find one's self in. enjoyed the poem

closing the spaces in time (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 2:49:37 AM
I like this, simple but the very message shouts for the reader to look around and look at where they themselves have come from and where they stand now. A chance to take count of their blessings for a change instead of bitching at what they don't have. Great write here Blackberry. Felix

closing the spaces in time (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 6:55:03 PM
A nice start. I like it as it reads.

Opposites Attract (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 6:28:45 PM
Everyone said it well, Blackberry. While one man throws you away, another will always pick you up, and stand you on your feet. Very nice write Blackberry. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, maybe too stubborn for my own good, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and very terrified little sister, Barbie "if I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Opposites Attract (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 5:30:20 PM
And one to embrace. A true masterpiece...

Opposites Attract (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 3:25:01 PM
Opposites can and do attract, just like reverse polarity We should never place our lives and future in any one person Peter

Opposites Attract (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 1:42:38 PM
Well-expressed. This is most hope-filled. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you, Regis

Are you man enough for me? (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 1:08:05 PM
Ooh, rant on my sister! I like this one!!! I'm going to save this one! Darn, you have sung the song of so many independent, strong willed women, Blackberry! God bless, Sandie.

Opposites Attract (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 1:05:00 PM
Wonderful, wonderful write, Blackberry! I posted something on the same page a while back - Would You Take Me Back. God bless, Sandie.

Opposites Attract (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 12:10:18 PM
This is one of the most clear and precise poems I have ever read to describe and tell someone why they lost what they took for granted so badly. And it is usually only then they realize and wonder what happened. Felix

Dear Prince Charming (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 11:56:56 AM
you have a romantic heart, wonderful poem, enjoyed.

Opposites Attract (Poetry) - 1/12/2006 11:55:37 AM
loved this poem, it rocks Sweet Lady.

Dear Prince Charming (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 11:02:01 AM
New twist indeed on a romantic ballad that has given voice to the love of purity between man and women through the ages. Well done. Felix

Are you man enough for me? (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 11:00:03 AM
Ahhhh those are strong and hard to find characteristics but I am sure a lot of men would be willing to audition for the part Sweet, however sometimes the only way you can have these traits is from time spent together and learning together what makes each other happy. Felix

The Insider (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 12:06:49 AM
Had to go back and read The Outsider again - thanks for reminding us just how important family is. Great write, Sweet Berry! God bless, Sandie.

The Outsider (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 12:04:38 AM
A well written emotional haunting piece, Sweet Berry! God bless, Sandie.

Finding the words (Poetry) - 12/6/2005 12:21:42 PM
Compelling plea well-expressed. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis

Finding the words (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 11:26:45 AM
Wonderful passionate write! God bless, Sandie.

My Cozy Comforter (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 11:25:40 AM

Finding the words (Poetry) - 11/27/2005 5:09:06 PM
Wonderful description of the uncertainty yet the hope and wonder of falling in love. Well written and full of passion. Felix

My Cozy Comforter (Poetry) - 11/27/2005 12:22:09 PM
Yes, I can see the similarities, Sweet. Good poem. :-) ~~Nordette

Finding the words (Poetry) - 11/27/2005 12:15:00 PM
I think you found the words :-) Fantastic write.

Finding the words (Poetry) - 11/27/2005 12:02:43 PM
Wonderful poem from the heart.

The Outsider (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 9:42:04 PM
this poem echoes my sentiments, SweetBerry, especially now that I have no one with whom to share the holidays. This is a sad haunting piece, and I can identify with it. Beautifully done. Joni

The Outsider (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 2:50:37 PM
Remembrances haunting my mind of Times gone by forever lost Quite a powerful, heartfelt piece, Sweet Berry, and sadly feelings that many share during the Holidays.

My Cozy Comforter (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 9:59:46 AM
Wow this is superb, such a wonderful feeling it leaves one with wanting what you have. Felix

The Insider (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 9:58:39 AM
I hate to admit but I liked the outsider, I love the insider, so many fond family memories stirred by this one. Felix

The Outsider (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 9:52:44 AM
Very well written and emotional. I haven't lost anyone close (thank goodness), but I do know the feeling of being the outsider.

My Cozy Comforter (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 7:55:35 AM
Niiiice!

Alone (Poetry) - 11/10/2005 8:56:56 AM
Omg Blackberry, this sounds exactly like the thoughts I had, as my mother accepted me back into "her", not "our" home. As I was accepted back into the house, I was still alone and desperate for my mother's love and acceptance. Something she was not capable of giving. Even tho I have forgiven her, and am still proud that I look exactly like her, I will never forget the cruelty she imposed on me for 5 1/2 years, during my entire adolescence. I still cry at night knowing that I will never know a man's love, or the love of acceptance from my family. I am grateful tho, for the friends I have found here in AD. This is a very good write, Blackberry, and it brings back haunting memories of not only a lost youth, but of the sadness and aching I still bear, after all these years. Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Time is a Number's Game (Poetry) - 8/21/2005 3:02:48 PM
I love everything about this write, Blackberry. Its flow, the number concept, the simplicity, the depth - just everything! Great write - well penned! God bless, Blackberry! Sandkie.

Untitled 81405 (Poetry) - 8/21/2005 12:50:52 PM
Excellent write, Blackberry! Interesting enough, I posted one a while back "I Keep On Loving" - almost on the same page. I like how you have portrayed the inner strength and growth - very inspiring. God bless, Blackberry! Sandie.

Alone (Poetry) - 8/21/2005 8:46:52 AM
I agree with Felix - not necessarily the end. Captured the sorrowfulness very well through out the write. Greatly portrayed! God bless, Blackberry! Sandie.

Time is a Number's Game (Poetry) - 8/18/2005 11:58:31 PM
Blackberry this could not have been written any better. A 3000 mile romance and the search to close the gap on you both. What a ride that will be. I love every line of this piece. Now, if only someone would close the gap on my heart as well. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sad sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 2:28:14 PM
Amazing. Everyone talkin' food lately it seems. Forget Adkins; welcome ooh lahlah! blessin's cynth'ya lewis reed

Conditionally Yours (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 9:37:09 PM
These are universal questions for so many relationships. I know I never believed my former husband loved me unconditionally. I could almost see the dark brooding cloud of disapproval around his head on a daily basis, much more so after he hooked up with his long lost girlfriend from college. He didn't think I knew . ROFLMAO. Many parents fail in this area as well in loving their own children, not understanding that you can discipline a child, teach right from wrong, without withholding love. A thoughtful write, poet. ~~Nordette

Time is a Number's Game (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 12:31:23 PM
I can relate, very well-written, I am a lover of simplicity in form and word, love this.

Time is a Number's Game (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 12:04:22 AM
Terrific! I loved the number thing you had going. Love, Leah

Time is a Number's Game (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 9:10:43 PM
Outstanding, loved your thoughts here, this is just excellently deep and heart-wrenching, Reindeer

Time is a Number's Game (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 6:59:35 PM
Love by the numbers what a concept but so real that it is remarkable. Felix

Untitled 81405 (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 2:06:06 PM
Well said...I like the way you presented this piece. It shows the inner growth that more people should try to strive for, turning the negative into a positive learning experience. Without hurt, pain and disappointments we can not mature or grow, it is obvious that you don't let life control you instead you take what you need and keep moving forward, Very well written!

Untitled 81405 (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 5:55:58 AM
well done I've been there too you simply amaze me

Untitled 81405 (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 5:42:25 AM
We should never do to another , what we wouldn't want done to ourselves Love is kind , not hurtful Peter

Untitled 81405 (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 4:45:06 AM
This is an exceptiional write in format, wordplay and imaginative art. Your hurt is there but your inner strength shines through and although he hasn't treated you fairly you have not given up on men or love. Really different I liked it a lot. Felix

Untitled 81405 (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 10:57:47 PM
Hmmm, I think you missed the point of this piece, Ed. It wasn't about life being fair, it was about being treated fairly by an individual and there is a difference between the two.

Untitled 81405 (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 10:44:56 PM
Life isn't fair, but that you already know, in fact it sucks monkey but is better than the alternative...Ed

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 2:04:24 PM
I'm with Felix on this one straight out and true!! honesty at its best... find yourself in your pain

Make a wish and blow (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 2:02:50 PM
ideal this is me all the time, everyday it seems this could be said to so many.... oh how it falls from inside you, "inside me"

Alone (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 12:50:52 PM
Indeed...this is sad but not necessarily the end, it also shows hope for the future if y ou want to reach out and grasp it. Good write Felix

Broken Promises (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 12:22:35 PM
I love your writing! It really reminds me of me in so many ways... the feelings behind the words, the pictures, the sound in your voice I agree with Felix most definately!

Alone (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 10:58:01 AM
so sad but captured so well I agree with Michelle and the picture really lets us see just how alone you can be well read

Alone (Poetry) - 8/13/2005 10:36:34 AM
Very sad, liked the spare lines because it brought across the sense of being alone better than a thousand words would. Good work.

Careless (Poetry) - 8/12/2005 3:15:43 PM
Ah, I like this write, Jam! It speaks of rebuilding from ruin! Good job!

Careless (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 10:58:35 PM
Through love and commitment, even the most shattered of lives can be pieced back together. well written emotional piece. Allen

Careless (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 7:23:36 AM
A charming piece, Blackberry! One feels the deep pain and hope. Well done

Careless (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 10:41:25 PM
Lovely write, Blackberry! Full hope. God bless, Sandie.

Careless (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 9:46:04 PM
excellent...nicely done!

Broken Promises (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 7:19:27 PM
Makes a definate impact and a great statement. This is a unique write and once more your talent wins out. Felix

Careless (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 7:15:25 PM
Hope shines eternal in love and romance and we can never give up on our hearts. Felix

I need you (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 5:39:10 PM
The funny thing is Sandra is that the tide took me back where I started but I am stronger this time. I have to believe I am stronger than to wind up back where I was before the at wave carried me away. Peace and love.

Careless (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 5:24:29 PM
this is a great write I love how in the end your beauty and hope shown through well done

Role playing (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 1:05:39 PM
As powerful and deep as your last poem "Questions". There is nothing as empowering as collecting yourself and moving on. Great one, Blackberry! God bless, Sandie.

Questions (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 1:03:08 PM
Very deep write, Blackberry! Short but power packed! Many will relate to this. These are questions many are afraid to voice out - instead they just choke up silently. I have posted two writes almost on the same page - I Keep On Loving and The Moment - but on different levels. Painful profound questions. Great one! God bless, Sandie.

Role playing (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 3:34:38 PM
Right on and if this is a follow up to your Questions poem this is truly the right attitude to take. Well said. Felix

Questions (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 3:31:53 PM
These are questions that I'm sure a lot of lovers have wanted to ask the ones they loved and feared the answers they may get so have remained silent instead. If the questions though are being asked silently perhaps it is better to ask and learn the truth then waste your love not knowing. Felix

Questions (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 3:25:08 PM
Wow, powerful, this brings back lots of memories of being with the wrong man, this is so true it's painful, especially the 4th line, maybe because I have recalled thinking that one too many times myself. Short, tight and thought-provoking.

Questions (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 3:15:13 PM
Painful questions. Nicely done.

Questions (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 1:13:39 PM
Again, this piece reflects what I was going through in a recent relationship and I needed an outlet in order to receive clarity. I write in order to work out my feelings. This is the result of what I was feeling at the time.

Questions (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 1:07:33 PM
Painful - yes. But, I need to wonder... why ask why?

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 12:52:59 PM
Painfully honest and powerfully emotive. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Role playing (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 12:51:32 PM
Honest introspection shared well. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Questions (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 12:49:53 PM
Painful and yet many readers will relate I am quite sure. Take care. Love and peace to you. Regis

Role playing (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 12:18:57 PM
Thanks for your comment. I am still trying to work through some raw emotions. I am on a journey :-)

Role playing (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 11:59:02 AM
Fair enough. Good write. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/29/2005 9:12:21 AM
Powerfully simple, spare lines with strong emotion- my kind of poem.

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/28/2005 10:13:40 PM
This is beautiful and aching all at once!

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/27/2005 7:01:59 PM
an emotively powerful poem about a situation seemingly out of your control and reason ...

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/27/2005 1:05:38 PM
for sure girl! what have I done? I was abandoned at 12 years old, and have found a family here in AD. But I always second guess and always ask...What did I do that was so wrong to make my mother hate me so much? This is such a tearful and powerful write Blackberry that I did cry and mourn with you. thnx sister for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little den sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be." ps: thnx for the reviews. They are very much needed and appreciated.

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/27/2005 12:12:04 PM
It is so sad when we hang on someone like a life line. So many women and probably men alike, think without that person life is meanless. But hang on, you lived and breathed well before you met him!! Beautiful write Blackberry - as usual! Reminds me of mine - I Keep On Loving. God bless, Sandie.

Windows (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 4:46:38 AM
nicely said

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 4:44:53 AM
poignant read

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 5:43:49 PM
If he treated you like dirt you already know that it was for the best and though your poem expresses hurt it also has a glimmer of hope in that fact alone. Felix

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 12:35:25 PM
Oh so powerfully sad, this is outstanding, Reindeer

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 10:40:41 AM
excellent write, berry! well done!

And on the third day she mourned (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 10:33:21 AM
tell her! good poem

Truth & Dare (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 1:23:30 AM
Oh Gawd, I have been there! He just wouldn't exhale and let go! He just wanted to be felt sorry for. He had so much going, could have done so much with his life, but he chose to cling to his security blanket. Beautiful piece, Blackberry Jam! God bless, Sandie.

Truth & Dare (Poetry) - 7/23/2005 3:07:17 PM
This is a poem of true love. In order to really love someone you have to be able to be honest-bluntly honest with them as you have done in this work. Well expressed. Felix

Truth & Dare (Poetry) - 7/23/2005 11:29:12 AM
Great thoughts expressed so far. Thanks for your feedback Dave and Sandie...this piece is actually the aftermath of "Make a wish and blow." Kind of a continuum.

Truth & Dare (Poetry) - 7/23/2005 11:19:03 AM
The truth is many people who are filled with pain sometimes expect others to feel the pain with them, and when others don't feel their pains then they consider others as heartless and compassionless. The fact is people who are empathetic can always feel pain for others, even if the others aren't as painful as they thought. It all comes down to individuality. Not everyone is empathetic, but it does not mean that when a person is not empathetic, then he/she is not compassionate. Understand that we are all unique, and we all lead separate lives in separate places, I certainly would not obligate another person who is having a joyful event in his/her life to feel my pain. It isn't fair. Everyone is entitled to his/her time of happiness, as well as sadness and grieves. Just my 2 cents of opinion on this... A thought-provoking piece. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Truth & Dare (Poetry) - 7/23/2005 10:43:21 AM
Great write... the disease of any disease is co-dependency. We need to always take care of self first...

Shunned (Poetry) - 7/22/2005 5:50:38 AM
Well penned!

Shunned (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 4:52:26 PM
Thank you everyone for your kind words. Hope to have some uplifting work to share soon.

Shunned (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 2:53:52 PM
excellent thoughts here, berry! well done!

Shunned (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 1:27:28 PM
love is a two-way street. both parties have to do more give than take. then the meshing occurs, and that is when love enters a deeper level, making all those hard times well, worth the price.without that meshing, though, (in my opinion) it is no longer love, but a relationship based entirely on the self sacrifice of one person. and that is abuse. anyway....I've been reading your work, and it touches me deeply. if these are real life accounts, my heart goes out to you, along with my prayers. love your work, Leah

Shunned (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 12:51:43 PM
This applies to a lot of us and it is a just write but we must strive not to let the shunners break our spirits. Felix

Shunned (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 12:07:26 PM
If one still has her pride and accepts new beginning, then she ain't the one who is shunned. She has moved on - you have broken the shackles! Strong write, Blackberry! God bless, Sandie.

Shunned (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 11:29:03 AM
A strong write, sharp with emotional depth and straight to the point. Enjoyed it.

Make a wish and blow (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 3:46:30 PM
Beautiful work here and one that most of us can sympathize with, Love is a series of wishes and if we are lucky some of them come true but I think by this write you already know that. First time I have read you but will not be the last. Felix

Make a wish and blow (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 2:41:52 PM
thank you to everyone who commented...yes, this one was straight from the heart.

Make a wish and blow (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 1:52:22 PM
I wish you happiness and that all your wishes will come true! Beautiful passionate write, Blackberry. Well done!

Make a wish and blow (Poetry) - 7/16/2005 11:56:14 PM
Beautiful poem, Blackberry! Its a good thing when one acknowledges to herself that she is an (insecure) victim in a relationship. Most just hope and wish for a change that hardly ever happens to happen - until its too late for many. You give so much but get hardly anything in return. You would go an extra mile for them - drown in their pain, drink their sorrow etc. Hopefully the next step will be finding the inner strenght to actually do something about it. Great write, Blackberry! God bless, Sandie.

Make a wish and blow (Poetry) - 7/16/2005 7:48:45 PM
Heartfelt wishes I hope pan out for you. Excellent write Eileen

Make a wish and blow (Poetry) - 7/16/2005 5:54:22 PM
...and I wish I wave that magic wand and make all your wishes come true... Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/10/2005 10:32:45 PM
Hot, sensual write, Blackberry! Ooh yes, Mr. Laziness can be quite a seductor and charmer! One hell of a lover, he is! Great write as always Blackberry! God bless, Sandie.

Love...I want (Poetry) - 7/10/2005 10:27:16 PM
Blackberry, I find myself just saving away your work in my library! You write amazingly well - I love the soulfulness in your work! Standing tall and proud! Confident and content! Love it!!! God bless! Sandie.

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 7/10/2005 10:23:41 PM
Woooow! Blackberry this is so full of soul and so jazzy! I was practically dancing to the music it made in my head!! What a healthy filling breakfast! God bless, Sandie.

I need you (Poetry) - 7/10/2005 10:20:05 PM
Oh that feeling of I can't get through this alone! How will do we know it all!! I need someone to hold my hand to help me go through this! I always leave this "ride of a current of gentle highs and lows" to God. Beautiful descriptive write, BJ, erm, Blackberry! Lol! God bless, Sandie.

Midnight conversation (Poetry) - 3/29/2005 7:42:56 PM
Well stated! And yet ... the intimacy between man and woman is a splendid and nourishing essential that the creator has provided to soothe and delight our physical bodies. The man/woman who has opened their hearts to God, and nestles against the breast of his mate, should indeed be at peace within. Intresting midnight conversation, I'd love to read more when you're ready.

Midnight conversation (Poetry) - 3/27/2005 7:40:51 PM
excellent message ... truth transcends the flesh ...

Midnight conversation (Poetry) - 3/27/2005 3:04:32 AM
This is very well done. The message it sends is very powerful. M.Rose

Midnight conversation (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 1:19:54 PM
Great write BJ. Foxy eyes too. Yup only one loves us unconditionally. And only he gives us true peace..

Midnight conversation (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 1:01:00 PM
nice one, berry! well done; brava! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Midnight conversation (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 12:27:59 PM
Excellent advice! Extremely well written.

Windows (Poetry) - 3/15/2005 8:52:39 PM
Sometimes we have the saddest eyes we've ever seen. WINDOWS touched me.

Windows (Poetry) - 3/13/2005 10:12:51 PM
a powerful introspective poem ...

Windows (Poetry) - 3/13/2005 2:14:37 PM
excellent write, berry! well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Windows (Poetry) - 3/13/2005 12:11:42 PM
The same eyes, I use to look at others, are the same eyes, that look at me...

The Puzzle (Poetry) - 3/13/2005 9:57:00 AM
Have to agree that sometimes we can get so used to the ill-fitting yoke that the thought of a new and better fit just seems beyond our ability to achieve, so we keep hobbling along! But, even with just two bits, the combinations can be endless - jam isn't the only thing that can accompany muffins, after all! An intriguing write, BJ. TY Kate

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/27/2005 5:21:07 PM
life and art are infused with each other's motion and form ... be true to thy own artform ...

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 2:35:16 PM
The trick is to somehow make the life itself into a work of art as captivatingly lovely as Bearden's canvas or this poem:-) Sounds like your off to a good start.

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 12:50:12 PM
I truly believe when we look back on it our lives really are a collage. The painting is excellent.

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 11:26:46 AM
and as you age........it will fade, and fray........ but it will always be YOURS!! loved this! lol

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 11:24:03 AM
Nicely done.

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 11:07:09 AM
Well done, indeed!

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 9:22:20 AM
wonderful write and art, berry! well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 9:16:27 AM
I love Bearden's work and you have done an outstanding job putting words to this piece! Best wishes ~Z~

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 9:15:26 AM
Haha! Sorry for laughing but I couldn't help myself. That is a unique, but honest, way to describe almost everybody in the world. A hodgepodge collage. Gotta love it.

The Collage (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 9:05:52 AM
this is terrific, both the content and the structure and flow

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/23/2005 7:53:30 PM
Ohhhh...you make this sound so electrifying and enticing!!

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/23/2005 10:27:38 AM
Mmm, mmm, good, Blackberry. Thank you for sharing this delicious offering. Love and peace. Regis

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/23/2005 1:01:53 AM
Beautifully written, you do know how to wake up in style my friend! Peace and best wishes ~Z~

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 3:40:49 PM
Ah, yes, "Gues Who I Saw Today," Nancy. Thank you for reminding me of that beautiful song, and all the rest. I might even have a seond helping, if ya don't mind.

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 3:18:20 PM
berry, love this john+

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 2:48:07 PM
Very interesting write about some old favorites of mine. Yep it sure does pick up the soul.

Ascension (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 1:32:48 PM
YES!!!!!!!!!! Powerful and affirming, a get up and DANCE kind of write--you rock! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 1:31:56 PM
I can relate to this one...specially on those early mornings I have to get up and go to work--brilliantly penned metaphor! I've been dating him, too LOL (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

A Love Divine (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 1:30:43 PM
Delightful, delicious...spectacularly penned! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 1:29:22 PM
YUMMY! Delicious write and nourishment for this tired old soul. :) Thanks for the pick me up. :) (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 10:25:56 AM
now that is one satisfying breakfast, berry! well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 10:01:05 AM
Now there's some seriously satisfying nourishment for a soul looking to wake up and start the day right. Enjoyed it tremendously.

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 9:01:37 AM
fulfilling poem

A Jazzy Breakfast (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 8:58:06 AM
It was a delight sharing this gourmet jazzy breakfast with you! Thanks for treat! Eileen

A Love Divine (Poetry) - 2/20/2005 10:24:28 AM
So this is what blackberry jam tastes like: sweet indeed.

poetry (Poetry) - 8/24/2004 11:46:59 PM
Very intuitive using the pronoun "her" to describe the feminine strength in the term "poetry"--it truly is a ministry of healing. blessin's c.

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 12:54:43 AM
I appreciate everyone's comments. I think the photo may have caused some readers to read this piece as literal. It is an allegorical poem about laziness and how it can seduce you into staying in bed all day in the same way that a lover can seduce you into staying in bed all day. :-) I've been dating laziness for a while now and our relationship is getting really serious. *LOL*

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/6/2004 1:41:43 PM
Wow, sexy poem, wish I wa sin bed with my lover now. You really got across the feel of relaxing in bed in love all day, excellent.

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/4/2004 6:56:34 AM
Interesting write. Thanks for sharing this write with us.

A Love Divine (Poetry) - 7/3/2004 1:21:48 PM
Just reading this for the first time! Glad I didn't miss it, well done!

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/3/2004 1:19:18 PM
Earthy and powerful! Well done!

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/3/2004 10:45:35 AM
sometimes laziness is so energetic ...

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/3/2004 9:47:54 AM
hmm.. nice writ, thanks, d.

Laziness is My Lover (Poetry) - 7/3/2004 8:46:29 AM
I like this short insightful poem Very nicely done john+

poetry (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 4:34:40 PM
(((blackberry))) i love this write! well done! poetry is many things to each individual author (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

poetry (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 4:17:22 PM
Poetry is a form of � An expression from the poet�s soul; A whisper from the poet�s heart; Laughter in form of words; A beauty to be admired; A love to be treasured; A cry to be heard; A vent to be recognized. ~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o) ~

poetry (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 12:01:01 PM
This is excellent....

poetry (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 9:23:51 AM
I like the spread of this poem. Poetry is many things to many people. So they are all wrong and they are all right. How very interesting to see what poetry is to you.

Quench Me (Poetry) - 6/21/2004 11:13:47 AM
So much emotion and soul packed into this! Love how you use an economy of words. As writers, we are sometimes so in love with our own voice that we end up compromising the content just to see ourselves talk... Anthony

Harlem is.... (Poetry) - 6/21/2004 11:08:31 AM
'Harlem is..' fantastic writing! Enjoyed it very much. You might find my short story 'Harlem, 1949' of interest. Looking forward to reading more of you my sister. Anthony

Red Velvet (Poetry) - 6/21/2004 10:35:36 AM
Wow! This is hot, made me want my boyfriend right this second! Great poem:)

Harlem is.... (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 7:58:58 PM
I was hoping for something as well-written and descriptive as this, and there it was. You paint pictures with your words, like the greats.

Harlem is.... (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 6:02:16 PM
Thank you everyone who commented. Wow! That was quick. I just posted this today. Thanks for reading.

Harlem is.... (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 5:59:42 PM
You have made Harlem an outstanding written work!

River Dance (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 10:46:25 AM
Very nice!

Harlem is.... (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 10:43:43 AM
Wonderful! Strong and enjoyable poem!

Harlem is.... (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 10:13:07 AM
Harlem is an interesting poem!

Harlem is.... (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 8:54:13 AM
Harlem is - a wonderfully rich poem. Enjoyed much!

Love...I want (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 1:28:00 AM
"Oh yea" oh yea "The treasures of love a blackwoman desires the treasures of a black man. "Can I get a amen". Girl you going to have me shouting up in here. (SMILE)

Love...I want (Poetry) - 12/13/2003 10:26:23 AM
this is very good, b.j.! enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and love, a new tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Love...I want (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 7:57:45 PM
I can identify. Passionate, wonderful, life giveing love. Beautiful poem.

Love...I want (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 9:09:28 PM
yeah....I agree with ure write here...tell u this...this is superb write!!!

Love...I want (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 8:36:12 PM
Good choice. This is what everyone wants too! Sandie Angel :o)

Love...I want (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 8:07:55 PM
Oh Cthis is what I want to excellent write. peggy

Love...I want (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 7:19:15 PM
yes, we all want a true love in our life that will be a grand prize :-) thanks for sharing.

Close the Door (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 8:39:38 AM
Nice with a nice touch for the end, "All I ask is that you close the door behind you".

A Love Divine (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 8:35:59 AM
Beautifully written

A Love Divine (Poetry) - 5/15/2002 6:45:52 AM
Very nice Ruth

A Love Divine (Poetry) - 5/12/2002 3:17:52 PM
yes, that and more...

Danger (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 10:48:53 PM
Geeezzz. This guy is high maintanence. ~E

The Wishing Well (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 10:47:33 PM
Heartfelt...bittersweet...lovely piece. ~E

Nothing (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 10:46:27 PM
Slap him along side the head. Enough already. Very good compsition. Like your work. ~E

August 18, 1999 (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 10:45:09 PM
Sweet. Read it twice...~E