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Recent Reviews for Jennifer Rose Lane
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Depravedness (Short Story) - 4/30/2008 12:39:42 PM
This story is fantastic, Pisces! Great writing from start to finish. You added such an interesting twist at the end. Thumbs up!
Best wishes,
David Boyle
Someone Pretty Like You (Short Story) - 3/26/2008 8:38:09 AM
I liked the story, and the way the tension was allowed to build. Now we don't know if she's really trapped, or dead. An interesting proposition. Good work!
Mark
Finding Common Ground in Unlikely Places A Story of Tolerance (Article) - 7/13/2008 2:56:37 PM
Pisces... I commend you for stating your position.. and for the courage to do so. Unfortunately, many horrible events have occurred over time "in the name of God and/or Christianty"... this is not new, and will not stop, altho I sure wish it would. Strangely, that is why many of us live in a Free America...where we have the liberty to speak... even when it is not politically or socially correct. My measure is to know that at the end of each day I can look at myself in the mirror and know that my heart is clear and that God knows my heart... Kindness and tolerance are virtues that are not mandatory with each human, therefore, those of us with kindness and tolerance must pray for the rest... If we were perfect beings, there would be no need for Earth... Good job Pisces... I know where your heart is! lindalaw
Finding Common Ground in Unlikely Places A Story of Tolerance (Article) - 7/13/2008 10:16:47 AM
Interesting and nice article...there are not enough people who can express their true beliefs and or feel that they can state and or support others who have the same thoughts....life is life, that is all, we live here to find our true selves...and along this path we find those who are lost, and this is so even within religions (and this is a man made product also)...the unfortunate realization is that we live among so many different characters of humans and so we find many minds with good and bad thoughts....I commend you for your willingness to accept and to discuss your own philosophy of life...nothing wrong with being yourself...
nice work...
Art Sun...
537 Lunatics (Poetry) - 6/14/2009 9:55:17 AM
Points well made, Jennifer. Love and peace,
Regis
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 6/14/2009 9:54:21 AM
A fine tribute to our feline friends, Jennifer. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 11/8/2008 2:00:20 AM
Nice work !
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 2:45:56 AM
A tribute to cats!
Bravo!
They are not of this world - but they know how to make biscuits!
Blessings,
JMD
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 8/24/2008 2:56:59 AM
Hello Jennifer,
Absolutely fascinating - I love cats! They hold a mystery in their steady gaze and regal in their bearing. Your poem is a tribute!
Cynthia
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 8/14/2008 11:19:55 PM
Interesting and signature piece
Well done.
Rodney
Aquamarine (Poetry) - 7/29/2008 8:41:45 AM
My deceased Hubby Tom had such blue true blue eyes. They were sort of that aqua color too. Last thing I saw as he died in front of my eyes. So sad, he was only 58. I miss him still and this poem brought him back to me and he had ways just like your love. Not too many good men like them around nowadays.
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 7/29/2008 8:39:35 AM
My cat watches for me to come home and meows when I walk in the door. As if to say, why did you leave me. So glad you are back. Missed you. Slinking around the room she was last night, don't know what she was looking for. Maybe her Daddy gone to heaven aug 17 07.Love it when she purrs, know she is very happy and content then.
From a cat lover indeed.
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 7/17/2008 12:56:17 AM
The love of your feline is well expressed in this delightful poem.
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 7/16/2008 9:37:08 PM
Purrrrfectly marvelous and very creative too....
Be always safe,
Karen
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 7/16/2008 12:03:49 PM
Pisces...you have a very special gift. lindalaw
Silent Guardians (Poetry) - 7/16/2008 10:33:34 AM
Being a cat lover, this is so true. Beautifully written.
Mary
537 Lunatics (Poetry) - 7/14/2008 3:19:01 AM
The ramblings of 537 lunatics
Hypnotize a nation of sheep
And it amazes just how many sheep there are today.
Desolate Whispers (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 8:30:35 PM
Forever together, always alone...........
Yet another thought provoking write. You have captured the fear of many, only to be viewed by the victim from a look in the silence of ones own self.
SOOOO NICE THIS ONE YOU PEN.
Fool's Gold (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 8:24:17 PM
So is the way of their desires. As their dreams are contrived from their false beliefs and their faiths have no course.
very nice, how true are your words...............
Awake (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 8:17:59 PM
Incredible, Luminous prism shatters the void of coma-like dream.
Your words and bio are not unlike my own...........I have to write as well.
I really love this piece.
Rising From the Sea (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 3:21:04 AM
Wonderful writing,enjoyed..have a great and safe day ...Hugss
Rising From the Sea (Poetry) - 6/8/2008 9:44:52 PM
These images are wonderful, I really felt like i was there-and I liked the Pisces tied in at the end.
Roses (Poetry) - 6/7/2008 4:29:50 PM
Nothing like roses and the perfume they give off. Such a compelling write, I just loved it. To have roses blooming within your heart is so compelling. Then pouring out petals of fuchsia of her lips. all this gives beauty of strength. So compound a write but very understandable.
Rising From the Sea (Poetry) - 6/5/2008 8:01:09 PM
Fine images throughout and a gentle telling end
John
Rising From the Sea (Poetry) - 6/5/2008 7:24:44 PM
What a terrific poem, Pisces. I love it. So many great lines...
Awake for a shadow in the blur of nothing. Wonderful.
Gene.
Desolate Whispers (Poetry) - 5/19/2008 12:07:32 AM
Loved your poem-I think more people should be reading your poetry
Chartreuse Illusion (Poetry) - 5/19/2008 12:06:41 AM
Woman your poetry is inspiring!!!
Roses (Poetry) - 5/18/2008 9:25:33 AM
Such beauty wrapped inside the rose..so delicate and fragrant
so innocent yet when touched it pricks the finger
leaving us open to hurt and
bleeding from our hearts.
a rose is vulnerablility
the petals last only a short while
a metaphor for attraction
to take the moment and
live it sweetly
like the rose...
i like your poems
Chartreuse Illusion (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 6:50:54 PM
"They let us pick off just enough to barely survive
Green figments of God crumbled up in our pockets
Grabbing our knees in servitude in the church they have created"
Interesting lines, well written to share your ideas.
Axilea
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