Recent Reviews for David A. Schwinghammer
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Prodigy with Hooves (Short Story) - 11/23/2009 5:38:20 PM
Enjoyed the walk down memory lane took me back to my own youthful misadventures great story
Little Crow (Short Story) - 11/9/2009 3:03:06 AM
Compelling story, David; well written!
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
MENGELE'S DOUBLE, Chapter One (Short Story) - 10/15/2009 1:50:19 AM
i'll read more
Mengele's Double, Chapter Five (Short Story) - 10/15/2009 1:48:10 AM
interesting read
Mengele's Double, Chapter Two (Short Story) - 5/19/2009 4:22:04 AM
hold's reader interest
Alpha Female (Short Story) - 3/6/2009 6:02:03 PM
Oh my gosh--this is just about the funniest short story that I've ever read! Blue-haired barracuda? Mushmouthed duck? The Benedetto twins? There's just so much here to like! Great job!
MENGELE'S DOUBLE, Chapter One (Short Story) - 1/24/2009 3:13:32 AM
WOW! I am sorry you wont be posting chapter two, this had me on the edge of my seat, thank you for sharing this! You drew me in and didnt let go, and painted a very vivid picture of what was happening in my mind, thank you.
In Christs Love
Michelle~
War of the Wills (Short Story) - 7/27/2008 1:24:11 PM
Terrific story, Dave. Hey, I can't even tell you're a former teacher. :) Really, I liked this one a lot. I was hooked the whole way. Run through it with an editor's eye, though. There are just a few little boo-boos.
-- Dave Lane
The Telemarketer (Short Story) - 6/28/2008 5:25:10 PM
Dave,
This is a very touching story! I didn't know that you had it in you to write with a romantic twist! I liked the characters, but Gus is the best... Cindy
The Ghoul (Short Story) - 6/23/2008 3:14:38 PM
If you like Stephen King, you'll love The Ghoul by Dave Schwinghammer! Hal Trask is an obituary writer for the Minneapolis Gazzette. In his spare time, he sidelights as a taxidermist. But does he "stuff" more than dead animals and family pets? The Ghoul may be ghoulish, but it is also filled with some humor. All in all, it's a great story.
Today, I go to God (Short Story) - 3/27/2008 11:51:50 AM
Great stuff, David. You have a very accessible style, and your characters really come alive with the subtle traits you ascribe to them. Very nice. - Dave Lane
All of the Good Stories Are Taken (Short Story) - 3/18/2008 2:52:56 PM
Great stuff. I really couldn't stop reading, and I love the subtle humor throughout (sometimes not so subtle) and the literary references. Terrific.
Alpha Female (Short Story) - 1/18/2008 4:57:55 PM
Another excellent story. I really liked the way you characterized these people. Samantha certainly was an "Alpha Female." And Donald was so real and honest I couldn't help but like and identify with him. Wonderful!
Limbo (Short Story) - 1/18/2008 4:44:17 PM
Oh my gosh, David. Wow. This really took me by surprise. I was reading along, caught up in and enjoying this poor dad's story when suddenly it turned into quite another story altogether. Talk about fantastic use of irony. WOW!
Harper Lee (book review) (Article) - 11/8/2009 9:54:13 AM
Wow! This is very interesting to me (also a teacher for 34 years). I will put this on my "must read" list. Thanks for the interesting review. Eileen
Why Kids Kill: Inside the Minds of School Shooters (book review) (Article) - 6/13/2009 4:27:24 PM
REALLY: Kids Should Be Killing PERVERTS 1,000s Child Molesters In Lieu Of!!
Credit Illuminating Write...
TRASK...
What to look for in a humorous novel (Article) - 5/28/2009 11:00:02 AM
Thank you for your insight.
Shakespeare By Another Name (book review) (Article) - 5/19/2009 3:57:22 PM
interesting read
God's Harvard (book review) (Article) - 3/30/2009 9:21:33 PM
well done
Is Sarah Palin Really a Soccer Mom? (Article) - 2/6/2009 4:36:25 PM
This would have been a great editorial or op-ed piece in any of our nation's newspapers (not the tabloid papers) during the election. Talking-heads said picking Palin for his VP candidate was John McCain's Hail Mary pass. Thank goodness it wasn't successful.
Crossover to the Crossword (Article) - 2/6/2009 4:29:40 PM
Good article! Crosswords can be addicting. They say you can also increase brain power by doing three things a day with your opposite hand. Who knows if that really works...
Is Sarah Palin Really a Soccer Mom? (Article) - 9/17/2008 6:17:42 PM
Hello David,
You've written a well researched and informative write here, I just hope the women voters of America see through the real persons behind each candidate. Our country (Philippines) has been suffering from such unwise choices and ignoring the SEPARATION OF CHURCH AND STATE in government policies has brought dire consequences to us.
The Catholic Church has been the main dictatorial factor in our nation and it has enslaved our voters into blindness for years. I hope America does not follow what we have.
Cynthia
3 O'Clock (Poetry) - 2/25/2009 2:01:26 AM
David, it is 4:os, i got up at 2:30. I think the rooster woke me up.
but that is ok. i just worked on a poem. why can't you just turn the
clock around, and go back to sleep? i'll bet you spilled the hot milk, when you saw marley's ghost. enjoyed the poem. randy
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