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Recent Reviews for John Reilly

Sleep Easy or not at all (Short Story) - 9/24/2002 4:39:14 PM
action alot of action but i'm lost as to what is going on is this a dream??? Are you sleeping inside a t.v. program...it sound like (what i do many times) when i sleep with the television on up loud watching a movie....let me knoe whats going on here....

Sleep Easy or not at all (Short Story) - 9/24/2002 1:41:35 PM
What an ending ...nice job

Sleep Easy or not at all (Short Story) - 9/21/2002 1:42:13 PM
wow

Straight outta the archive (Short Story) - 9/10/2002 11:54:00 AM
Oh boy now that's exactly how it feels when I am frustrated. You got this out so well babe...aaaaaah excellent!! Sometime even one day of relief is worth just about the whole damn world n all the riches in it. Shit. Awesome one Reillyji!

Straight outta the archive (Short Story) - 9/10/2002 7:02:48 AM
full circle....if this isn't real/reality than please somebody helpme to remove this brick I shoved up my ass.....you have a way of sneaking up on ppl and smacking them right in the face....must be that infectious smile of yours...at first I didn't know what this all was leading up to by the time I wanted to stop it was over....shit!! Good job

another day in the life (Short Story) - 9/5/2002 1:20:53 PM
rock on mr reilly... josie

another day in the life (Short Story) - 9/2/2002 12:31:13 PM
alright this is tight!!!! sounds real (real dialogue) and worth the wait.......

another day in the life (Short Story) - 8/29/2002 11:30:09 AM
Damn baby, I miss you too. I miss your unique way of looking at things. Your style is like a blast of fresh air. I enjoyed this the first time I read it, and I still do. Scada

another day in the life (Short Story) - 8/29/2002 9:41:41 AM
LOL and I thought I was having a bad day!

Just For Jolly (Short Story) - 5/7/2002 1:23:21 PM
Have you been reading James Patterson? ") Now I'm going to look for any items out of place.... Yikes. Josie

Just For Jolly (Short Story) - 5/1/2002 3:20:14 PM
Damn John i knew you had it in you....i loved this....got to shower and i won't peek

Just For Jolly (Short Story) - 4/30/2002 9:16:16 AM
Wow. I don't usually read the short stories, and I can see that I've been missing out. This is so disturbed, so... me. Lol. Scada

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 12:41:10 PM
John, I agree

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 6:48:13 AM
Not withstanding criticism of your criticism, I must say the intent of your rant here is well taken! I have been a member, and frequent poster, of AD for one year. Many who follow my postings will attest the fact that I am my own critic. I have never felt my poetry to be worthy of any flattery or serious review. However, serious review is NOT one of the elements to be found here at AD. I know your words are not directed at any one person but I do agree with your sentiment. But taking that into consideration, if I read someone's poetry and find it less than desirable I simply will not review the work. Why rain on someone's parade? The fact remains that, while some of the postings here are in no way credible (based on current academia), the people here are simply exercising their need to express themselves. Nothing is more wonderful than another human being opening their heart to share their feelings. "For poetry is the blossom and the fragrance of all human knowledge, human thoughts, human passions, emotions, language". --Coleridge. AD professes to be a home for authors and poets, however it does not imply the authors and poets are good ones. I would venture to say 80% of what I read here is not to my liking for one reason or another. But to throw the term garbage into the arena is a foray which I find a bit too strong. None of us has the right to judge anothers writing and deem it to be unworthy There can be no common conception of good or bad when it comes to writing. Of course there is always technical clarity such as spelling, grammar, and punctuation but the overall content and intent should be given recognition. Each individual will perceive a piece of writing from their unique perspective. Therefore, it is not possible for a person who is trying to create "legitimate" pieces of work to be judged as garbage, or wonderful for that matter. John, I thank you for your totally honest opinion and I respect your feelings. I would love to see some people here improve their abilities (including myself), but I am not interested in berating them to do so.

PISSing the night away THE remix for pro choice and pro life alike (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 6:39:43 AM
I wrote one about abortion last year, the site I used to illustrate it, pretty shocking stuff right...well that got deleted mysteriously, huh, some ppl cant handle truth can they! In all honesty, I find your lingo a tad hard to take, being ozzie n all, but I get your drift, and at least you have the courage to talk about it, most dont. TY Ch'erie

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 3:52:44 AM
My poems may suck, but heck, at least I know how to spell "fucking" and I'm aware that "You ppl are poets def poetry is hip hop masquarading as poetry all in all im hardly a poet but i remember when ad was better" needs some sort of punctuation in it to make any sort of sense. Thanks for the honest opinion, though. Lisa

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 11:23:24 PM
ROTFLMAO....took me a clp of years to get that right so hay I agree with Trask Amazing......:}

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 11:09:26 PM
That's why they make chocolate and vanilla! And now you have what you sought, readers!;-)

Long Haul (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 7:17:28 PM
And you were critising other authors!!!! Well pardon me mate, but this is sub standard writing if ever i saw it, sheeesh. IMHO! Hrrrrumph Ch'erie

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 5:31:19 PM
As one who plays with rhythm and rhyme, I wonder if you consider Theodore Geisel as "sing song"... the man who gave us some powerfully conscientious message rhymes? Ogden Nash made his living as a recognized poet.. em.. he rhymed, too. I saved the best for last, of course. Iambic Pentameter: guess who? (smile) Lincoln gets the credit but 'you can't please all the people all the time'... Actually, I've never met a poet who wished to. Soooooooo.... you've stated your case. Now it's time to dazzle us. Write on, Mr. Reilly. We'll be waiting. katy xox. (my favorite response here is La Belle's... on the money, I'd say). Enjoy your day.

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 3:14:38 PM
Who really can be the judge of what is or is not litter? Unlike some here I do not apologize for what I write, some of my poetry is in fun some is from my gut some is for the folks here and some is just for myself.Its called freedom to express. I don't post everyday but I read it everyday and reading it is joyful. I do remember you,you have an original style that I like,you also don't mind bruising people if it gets you noticed. You succeeded...we see you ...now,get back to writing poetry John.

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 1:59:14 PM
AMAZING! TRASK

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 12:13:27 PM
John--while I am big advocate for respecting another opinion, I have to say indefense of some of the posters here that there has been a lot going on under the surface and many posters are looking to the lighter side of things to release stress. If you are familiar with this board then you should know that at times a few poets play with one another in fun. I was giving this posting fair and open thought until I got stuck somewhere in your presentation. First off a lot is two words, not one. Secondly, I have rarely seen this board littered with garbage (there is some on occasion, though I have never seen it littered) and lastly many poets have used the word 'fuck' to express themselves but most know how to spell it. : ) Oh one more thing..I am a little confused--you say in one paragraph that you do not care for God poetry and then say God Bless America? Easy on the kryptonite, eh, der Superman?

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 11:40:24 AM
I�ve always found it difficult to view anything posing as literary criticism seriously, when it is packed with typos. If you�re a �fucking� critic, you should probably learn to spell. Your point is relevant, but your post qualifies as the garbage you rant about. Yes, I can be a bitch.

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 10:53:04 AM
One's man's trash may well be another's treasure and many fine poets were unappreciated and died in obscurity, being recognized only after they had left the building. You are certainly entitiled to your opinion but so are all the people posting here, entitled to write as they feel, express what they want in the way they choose. Perhaps you will post some superior work that we can all learn from.

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 10:13:32 AM
I consider myself a writer of stories, not poems, but if the spirit moves me, I will write a poem, even though I think it sucks! But we all are entitled to our opinions, and I think that some of what I have written earlier on is nothing more than trash. I am my own worst critic, and even though I have improved as a writer, I still have a very long way to go, and I still have yet to have a book to my name. I only write because I enjoy it! Thank you for expressing yourself; not all may agree with you, but that is okay! Good write that comes from the heart; thank you for baring your soul and heart with us! Most sincerely, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn.

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 10:07:38 AM
(((john))) thank you for your opinion. you are free to express yourself, as am i. thank God. you've said your piece, now hear mine. some of what i've written may be trash: my thoughts. my feelings. my soul and heart, laying there in the streets--MY "trash." i'm sorry if it gets in your way. i write because i love to--have to--write. i may not be a published writer, but i have dreams...and will not stop. if i never have a book, the journey has been enlightening and fun ANY way. sincerely, karla dorman.

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 9:26:16 AM
John, Certainly there are some here (myself) that will never consider themselves as poets, writers, authors of any kind, but there has been many times that I've written things that have been read and reflected on as something a bit more substantial than 'garbage'. Your opinion is most clearly yours, and you have all rights to express it as do all others, especially here in the good 'ol USA. Lives have been lost through the ages so that you have that priviledge, and personally I'm honored that you take your time to monopolize the use of that Freedom. Since I normally try and place a new post each day or quite regularly anyway, I will take this chance to apologize for any trash of mine that may have fallen from my part of the Den's sidewalk and caused you to have to maybe sidestep the litter. Hope you have a wonderful day Sir, and that very soon the reading and the quality of poems are more sufficient and pleasing to your tastes. Well that is it for me and thanks for the time and may God Bless America. Lisa

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 8:53:19 AM
We celebrate and welcome your opinion, John. Lately, many of us have turned to humor to enliven this place, which seemed to have a little too much hatred and vindictiveness in it. And, of course, many of us in AD believe that anyone who pays their fee is entitled to post any kind of material they want, as long as it doesn't viciously attack any one personally, whether it be good, bad, or in between.

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 8:36:00 AM
the only recourse it enlighten the den with some awesome poetry to set an example on how its done ...

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 8:35:28 AM
Writing poetry is in some ways like other human activities such as football games or family relations -- it comes in spurts of greatness separated by periods of humdrum. It usually happens that someone tires of the humdrum and sparks a run of greatness with an extraordinary effort. Now that you've identified, rightly or wrongly, a period of humdrum on AD, why don't you spark it up with something worth reading? Best regards, Leland

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 7:45:52 AM
Well, you have certainly expressed yourself quite well herein...as for poetry, mine for the fact that I am writing this, I just post for fun, shits and giggles, I don't post for others to become enraptured by my poetic abilities. I don't care if I ever get published, as I doubt with what I write, I will, unless it self published...I am here to post some fun, some personal experiences and to get out what I feel each day. So bad or good, my particular poetry is just that, mine, but I appreciate you have your right to an opinion as well... Peace, ed & rufuz

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 7:38:29 AM
Yeah well that's the thing with opinions you know, we all have them, and we are entitled to our own, which not always pleases everyone, but, hey thems the brakes. I think, that the Authors in here, some of them, are letting their hair down, as there has been alot of stress over wacko's causing trouble, and writing a bit of lighthearted stuff relieves the stress. Hey go into my den and learn how to play cricket, go on, it will do yah good, and when you have done that, check out the bug busters, its a riot. I've got something totally brilliant in the pipeline, but you'll have ta wait ole son, lol, till then........

To all authors den poets an honest opinion waits inside (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 7:37:51 AM
John, You never hold back the bars do ya... Always tight and right hitiing hard.,.. Sometimes reading you is like looking in the street at all the faces we meet... And then you throw us one of those dective type poems that makes us search... yes it isnt like it use to be I agree... Was nice seeing ya post again.... LP

In the end it was the only thing that ever mattered (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 2:40:19 PM
Powerful and moving write said with pure candor.

Samson and Sangria (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 2:33:10 PM
You speak much wisdom.

In the end it was the only thing that ever mattered (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 9:23:45 AM
pure reilly...it is so good to read your stuff again, i have genuinely missed you

In the end it was the only thing that ever mattered (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 8:50:23 AM
Wow..powerful and intense poetry, this was excellent. Reindeer

In the end it was the only thing that ever mattered (Poetry) - 6/28/2004 8:40:42 AM
John, How's Jilly... I missed you here on the ad.... This poenm is so good john. a slap of reality and life. I enjoyed it and was excited to see you posting.... Lady peg

I feel like I coulda loved her (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 12:37:31 AM
you fit an entire movie into a minute (genre: black comedy, not in the sense that the actors are black, but in the sense that reality is so sad that its ridiculous and appeals to afflicted senses of humour-- id est, mine) (not bad) damn fine actually.

I feel like I coulda loved her (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 4:32:20 PM
as always something spe....ugh...ugh!!!!

I feel like I coulda loved her (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 2:28:14 AM
very good story/poem... enjoyed reading...

I feel like I coulda loved her (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 2:20:30 PM
hahahahaha...

I feel like I coulda loved her (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 8:46:37 AM
Such a powerful write. Trixie :)

I feel like I coulda loved her (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 8:45:27 AM
do you know how good it is to read you? welcome back reilly, and remind me not to go to dinner with you....

Valentines day 1998 (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 10:22:02 AM
when i said edible panties were cool, i hadnt met you yet. good stuff reilly

Valentines day 1998 (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 9:49:42 PM
do my eyes deceive me, is this You? well done panty peanut butter boy. great to see you post. josie

Valentines day 1998 (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 9:32:03 PM
Oh my, this is great! Happy V-Day or just a happy day. Peace, Janet xoxoxo

Valentines day 1998 (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 6:50:12 PM
Happy Valentine's Day!!!!!.....Heeeheee!!!!!.....this is goood write!!!!!..... Sandie Angel :o)

A Little Romance (Poetry) - 2/4/2003 2:42:43 PM
lookee what i found

Killing Time (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 11:45:18 PM
u r a sic fuk, god i love ya! lol Janet xoxoxoxo

and we lived happily ever after (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 11:50:42 AM
reilly, u always pull my panties down...is that what i meant to say? anyway... good write. haha

and we lived happily ever after (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 11:24:47 AM
No nazi propaganda--just Reilly. :) Great.

and we lived happily ever after (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 10:43:41 AM
John...you are truly one of my favorite writers. "You want euphemisms I got fuking euphemisms" Classic!

and we lived happily ever after (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 10:03:45 AM
what's the number reilly? dude when they gonna Learn? ha. alls i gots to say is at least your dreaming it daddyO josie

and we lived happily ever after (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 8:58:25 AM
CRAP!

Harvest season...boring (Poetry) - 1/16/2003 9:02:06 PM
All the other time is wasted. Once she starts suckin dick everthing else is blown out pf my mind. Good honest write.

Harvest season...boring (Poetry) - 1/16/2003 5:45:49 PM
Did i mention that i never wear nylons? *Grin* Miss ya baby. Scada

Harvest season...boring (Poetry) - 1/16/2003 1:44:26 PM
email etiquette? mmmm very interesting, do you have a cam in my bedroom? good right?

Harvest season...boring (Poetry) - 1/16/2003 1:06:00 PM
interesting take on "boring" reilly, but then your an interesting guy. not a damn boring thing about it! and i like it. lots. josie

This started with such Promise (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 11:09:34 AM
As always, your writes hit me in the gut and leave me feeling winded. Awesome work. Scada

This started with such Promise (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 9:34:35 AM
there you go reilly. glad this is not one of those times. keep um coming josie

This started with such Promise (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 9:07:52 AM
Such massive chaos but a good look at life in the bowels of a huge city and what happens to some peopple. Seems like Tom Waites was speaking here. Truly insightful piece. --Susan

This started with such Promise (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 7:03:24 AM
Wonderful work.

This started with such Promise (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 6:37:49 AM
ooooofffff! this is one of the best write ups i've ever read - very few people have the ability to so effectively put into words feelings emotions, day to day experiences into words with such flow and expression - keep it up!

This started with such Promise (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 5:23:45 AM
John, your stanza breaks are masterful, your pacing flawless. Wish I'd wrote this part: "...There are times I cant stand my face in the mirror Times when I want to tear the flesh from it Wipe my skull smooth with a shammy and brush my teeth without my lips in the f*king way..." Your work was the bounce, the verve of a Dadist.

This started with such Promise (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 5:17:45 AM
wow this is truly garbage

Falling in line, the possibilities were endless (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 10:22:53 AM
I have missed you SOOOO much! What a great relief to see your name here today. Sue's right, we believe in you baby. Love Scada

Falling in line, the possibilities were endless (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 9:29:02 AM
Dude, welcome home. Glad to see you post, yes lots of changes, but they grow on you. Your work is good, draws you in, too many parts to name that I like, I won't soon forget "woke the sleepy faces that were there". Forget technicalities just write, you voice is fresh and real and alive. Pinky swear. josie

Falling in line, the possibilities were endless (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 8:02:35 AM
What a voice you have! This IS poetry!

Falling in line, the possibilities were endless (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 7:20:53 AM
there's tons more to you...this proves it

Falling in line, the possibilities were endless (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 7:15:34 AM
baby,so good to read something by you after all this time, you have to take time to write, there is so much more to you than all nighters and minimum wage..if you ever doubt, ask scada and I, we believe in you

No sleep no sleep in almost 40 hours (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 4:26:52 PM
Try a doobie instead of a Black Beauty. But keep writing this great stuff.

No sleep no sleep in almost 40 hours (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 4:02:11 PM
interesting what happens when we don't sleep... life seems to unravel and reveal itself...

No sleep no sleep in almost 40 hours (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 11:58:14 AM
good write, john! glad you are back; we've missed you here at the den! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

No sleep no sleep in almost 40 hours (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 9:58:03 AM
Glad you weaved your way back. Bill Murray

No sleep no sleep in almost 40 hours (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 7:55:18 AM
welcome back baby i missed you...this is good, i could feel how u were feeling and i think sleep is the ticket. that or romance

No sleep no sleep in almost 40 hours (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 6:50:35 AM
Nice write.

No sleep no sleep in almost 40 hours (Poetry) - 12/7/2002 6:01:25 AM
what a trip I could feel the exaustion great write

Embassador's to a wasteland (Poetry) - 10/31/2002 5:06:25 PM
Young people shouldn't do drugs. It runs up the price for us old folks. A harshly real write - Encore.

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/30/2002 6:04:55 AM
"...smoked to the filter/ cigarette I have become" - a gripping image. Well Done.

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:37:21 PM
and a deep bow to you...

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 11:12:47 AM
gutsy write, john; you tell it like it is, and i respect that! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :)

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:50:46 AM
told direct from the heart all guts reilly all guts josie

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:47:06 AM
John, I love this one the " lies told melting inside" the whole piece is so real and truthful , the pain and gathered in a toast... been here hated it...I quit smoking a year ago but I could use i one after this...Peg

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 6:48:19 AM
I hear ya budz. Much truth in it and at this point of time especially, this is something I really identify with. Great to read you Reillyji!

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 6:45:31 AM
yes! Yes! this is good and right from the guts.

Its only everything (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 6:41:18 AM
I love this one.... so truthful of one person trying to forget.. and to escape the pain...(Pass me a cigarette please!!!!)

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/26/2002 2:00:20 PM
Ah, this brought back memories og bad road trips on good drugs. A lady of my past once threw a "moon" the entire length of the L.I.E. with some help from Southern Comfort and Mescaline. Two nights later we tried it on the CrossBronx and got busted.

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/25/2002 8:17:02 PM
10+++ wild man

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 4:32:40 PM
mr defoe, the spelling is intentional and part of reilly's style, what he wears is his business, and perhaps being taken seriously by you is not high on his list of priorities, did you have anything constructive to say about style or content or did you just drop by to disparage what you obviously don't understand

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/21/2002 9:13:21 AM
I can't take seriously any man who walks around in a superman costume, and can't spell properly.

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 2:48:10 PM
Man.....pushing,pushing this is crazy live handjobs and donations

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 10:38:50 AM
Good story, John. We are all are superheroes dressed in drag. :)

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 9:27:14 AM
This was great Up Up Up and away your writing soars. I remember the old LIE very well i spent most of my life on it. from exit 60 to 30 then southern state

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 7:58:47 AM
Good to be back and read you first - always fresh and new from u Reillyji.. ;)

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 7:55:18 AM
are there any superheros? are there? josie

Exit 53 to 56 as seen thru the rearview (Poetry) - 10/17/2002 6:01:45 AM
Rough life what with Taxes Death and all.

Blue babies and the hunt for 1 more good time (Poetry) - 10/16/2002 2:36:23 PM
I agree with Hess, 13 is a lil outta control. Quit it or I'll kick your ass all over the country. Luv ya, Scada

Dealer shows ace high (Poetry) - 10/16/2002 2:33:39 PM
What about me? I'm feeling neglected. Scada

Body Of Christ...Yes Please (Poetry) - 10/16/2002 12:53:22 PM
even though you and i have different views, i still thought this was good. a little warped, maybe, but still, a good, thought-provoking write. thanks for your honesty and for your review; it was most appreciated!! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS)) :)

Dealer shows ace high (Poetry) - 10/16/2002 4:59:51 AM
A writer is one who writes. A Marine Biologist is all wet. You write and are far from all wet.

Dealer shows ace high (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 10:45:10 AM
Excellent. Life is about laying our cards on the table.

Dealer shows ace high (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 8:11:58 AM
so melancholy mr rielly, but i hear exactly what your saying. hey if you take off how ya gonna give me those 1 on 1s huh? and dude you are a writer serious josie

Dealer shows ace high (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 7:23:14 AM
not far from being a writer...you ARE

Dealer shows ace high (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 5:53:52 AM
John you are a writer and i think you should take your passion and try writing a book i think with your imagination and expression it would do well

Dealer shows ace high (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 5:53:18 AM
bags are packed, meet you at the airport, luv

PISSing the night away THE remix for pro choice and pro life alike (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 4:08:07 AM
You know I could give my opinion on the subject but who really cares. the point is a writer has the ability to stir emotions in others. So i will just say that you Do that in most everything you write. you have a raw style that bites with reality. So write on John

PISSing the night away THE remix for pro choice and pro life alike (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 3:31:05 PM
Excellent poem, John. This shows the "out sight, out of mind" mentality of most people when it comes to debates on abortions, wars, capital punishment, animal cruelty, etc. Some people argue that all life is sacred. But then they choose to ignore all those babies blown away, dismembered and maimed by US bombs. In the same way, the pro-choice people don't want to think of a foetus being crushed and thrown into a trash bag.

PISSing the night away THE remix for pro choice and pro life alike (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 3:19:11 PM
wow, this one sucker punched me right in the gut. graphic, terrifying, realistic in intensity. GREAT JOB on this...thought provoking. i'm pro life, BTW. (((HUGS))) and thanks for an eye-opening read...love, karla. :(

PISSing the night away THE remix for pro choice and pro life alike (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 3:18:08 PM
ah i remember this one good ole stomach turner you speak volumes here mr reilly as only you can..... are you really going to paste it to your ass? HA josie

PISSing the night away THE remix for pro choice and pro life alike (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 3:01:57 PM
john baby, i liked this the first time u posted it, i understand the ambivilence of abortion, but don't understand late trimester abortions, unless medically necessary. but i still have to uphold a womans right to decide about her body...as painful as that often is because so many women don't make wise decisions and use abortion as a birth control.

PISSing the night away THE remix for pro choice and pro life alike (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 2:39:44 PM
interesting, thought provoking write!!

Blue babies and the hunt for 1 more good time (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 7:00:16 PM
I like it. Crazy man...

Blue babies and the hunt for 1 more good time (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 6:46:17 PM
john, honey, u r one sick puppy but what worries me most is that i understood exactly what you are saying and why, so you see where my head is. but 13 is too many, u r playing with fire

Blue babies and the hunt for 1 more good time (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 4:23:03 PM
wow!!!!!!!!!!!

I give you the Sun Tan (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 3:33:45 PM
everyday (trivals).....not hard to turn your back to it when your soul searching *daffy

I give you the Sun Tan (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 10:55:06 AM
this is a good example of why you are one of my favorite writer's mr reilly. you are good!

I give you the Sun Tan (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 10:47:03 AM
Don't apologize, reads like you've been writing everyday! Love the Superman Suit.

I give you the Sun Tan (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 10:36:54 AM
Nice Reily, loved this line everyday silky love yous" alot of imagery in this one nice. Peggy

Worthy of a coat I may be (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 6:44:18 PM
sounds like you be singing the body electric ;)

Worthy of a coat I may be (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 1:53:42 PM
you do back and in...out and forth writing so well.....daytime momma...night-time daddy excellent!!!!

Worthy of a coat I may be (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 9:41:47 AM
"Its called the grind Sore feet in dress shoes Pictures in the wallet that look familiar But who the fuk is that?" you have truly captured the life of the middle class worker. Excellent write!

Worthy of a coat I may be (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 5:48:17 AM
Excellent poem! Bill

Worthy of a coat I may be (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 5:27:47 AM
as always i enjoy anything you write (and your spelling is still atrocious) keep writing...

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/29/2002 9:49:08 AM
you sure show you're human, man

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 11:44:46 PM
don't don't get stuck in the door handle ;)

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 10:27:30 PM

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 9:17:38 PM
Smile....now i've heard of blow-up dolls...holes in mattresses...even counters & tabletops....but garage doors????? your such a badboy!!!! what else can i say but hell ya!!! and your story is wild.....loved it!

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 5:07:47 PM
Hmmm... a new style? You are creative no matter what the topic. Great write.

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 4:54:02 PM
John, I like this poem alot down to earth tell it like it is stuff..And I will never forget to talk to the garage door.. or look at it again the same either.. Loved it....Peg

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 4:48:21 PM
u ok babe? nice poem but alot of angst here

loose meat sandwhiches heree come get your... (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 4:48:06 PM
so melancholy mr reilly ill never look at my garage door the same again bravo josie

Embassador's to a wasteland (Poetry) - 9/25/2002 6:21:09 AM
yoyo- dynamic shit man, top notch-cutting edge type shit- keep pushing and slicing ur way thru the quick cum

Embassador's to a wasteland (Poetry) - 9/22/2002 11:35:29 AM
Man what I say...you have the makings here to do some damage brace yourself with a camera...your in a primo spot to set it off........

Embassador's to a wasteland (Poetry) - 9/22/2002 9:16:27 AM
Pretty messed up ambassadors. Powerful images, John. Very raw. and from cocaine we gave the farmer death(accidental knife thru brown eye) and his wife new growing life(Hard unwanted western orgasms)

Embassador's to a wasteland (Poetry) - 9/22/2002 7:45:23 AM
intense state of affairs... remember drink the beer but don't drink the water...

The stifle Procedure (Poetry) - 9/21/2002 10:31:07 AM
raw....with all the twist and turns of life....you will always stir ones emotions keep it up!!!!!!!!!

The stifle Procedure (Poetry) - 9/21/2002 10:26:37 AM
"And what did you do that day? You sipped tropical smoked long white cigarettes and ate berry salads in Miami beach. You make me fukin ill u ball sniffing tramp." Excellent. Yes, stir up the pot!

The stifle Procedure (Poetry) - 9/21/2002 9:33:53 AM
your style is rough but your message is clear and everything you write stirs an emotion of some sort, i'd say you are on your way, mr reilly

Call this morning anything u want, cause I dont know what to say (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 7:36:58 PM
somedays........ reality settles in our stomach and take it's time going up or coming down crazy/wild

Call this morning anything u want, cause I dont know what to say (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 3:19:55 PM
honey,you really need a new career, job or whatever, this one is too depressing

Call this morning anything u want, cause I dont know what to say (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 12:01:47 PM
Hi always nice to get a little straight to Reilly style josie

Call this morning anything u want, cause I dont know what to say (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 11:22:27 AM
You did it right. Ignore Ignore Ignore. The key to a depression-free life :)

Call this morning anything u want, cause I dont know what to say (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 10:40:47 AM
So I let them be Let them have some internet closeness Some kind of oddball American family that rallies each other Keeps their spirits up and their wigs on straight --This sounds like Authors Den crowd. :) Enjoyed this.

Call this morning anything u want, cause I dont know what to say (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 10:12:25 AM
Love the ending. Great write.

1 2 3 4 cretins wanna hop some more (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 1:16:32 PM
...but no one is home well done mr reilly josie

1 2 3 4 cretins wanna hop some more (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 10:19:21 AM
the dead hurt us what will hurt more is when truth is revealed to us what if our people killed our people - just a thought good write here KP

1 2 3 4 cretins wanna hop some more (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 8:50:50 AM
my feelings are mixed on 9/11....my answers and thoughts haven't been form....like Masart said you did it Reilly style straight out the gate....in your face the pain is there and I feel it.....

1 2 3 4 cretins wanna hop some more (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 3:18:09 AM
An indirect 9/11 tribute from you and very much Reilly style. The hurt lives in every word of this piece but remember that anyone who hurts others will never be in peace - on Earth or hereafter. Excellent write Reillyji!

So they say (Poetry) - 9/1/2002 11:57:27 AM
Things are never what they appear--but folks are good at faking it. That's why we have strip bars. Loved the aquarium with the bow around it.

So they say (Poetry) - 9/1/2002 11:29:13 AM
very interesting write.....feelings of being stuck in/with fakin' for the sake of makin'...and still not great write!!!

So they say (Poetry) - 9/1/2002 9:13:33 AM
Too many things hiding under expensive clothes - very good write. Oh yes the ending was awesome..!

Samson and Sangria (Poetry) - 8/31/2002 10:49:59 AM
Just another day. Hilarious!

Samson and Sangria (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 10:51:46 PM
OOOOoooOOK, I need to go read your story now :)

Samson and Sangria (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 10:19:19 PM
Another day in the life indeed, one step at a time. Bravo.

Samson and Sangria (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 7:56:35 PM
one of my favorites.....nice to see it/you again!!!

under the chinese paper moon (Poetry) - 8/28/2002 5:36:31 PM
excellent scenario...

under the chinese paper moon (Poetry) - 8/28/2002 9:51:56 AM
as told by only you josie

under the chinese paper moon (Poetry) - 8/28/2002 8:39:44 AM
the imagery...the play on words and truth of wars(vitenam war) very well done!!!

under the chinese paper moon (Poetry) - 8/28/2002 8:30:31 AM
That's how I feel--corpses everywhere in the name of God and country. Excellent.

Broken Over Ghosts Knees (Poetry) - 8/26/2002 11:58:03 AM
I loved this Reillyji. It has a strange haunting feel to it - you know...looks like a night when you couldn't get to sleep...and you were thinking deep of life and it's meaning. And maybe some things just make us rethnk the whole concept of life and death...and just living. Keep writing hun... :)

Broken Over Ghosts Knees (Poetry) - 8/26/2002 8:20:57 AM
where the hell did i put my vicodin??? wonderful to read you again mr reilly josie

Broken Over Ghosts Knees (Poetry) - 8/26/2002 7:38:14 AM
I like this poem a lot, John. Really makes you wonder if this is all there is. Or could we do better?

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 1:19:36 PM
tHIS IS EXCELLENT WRITING MANY METAPHORS....

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 9:52:08 AM
Your pain hurts me, you know that. I'm happy to see you writing, because I miss you. This is well done of course, but I wish there was something I could do for you to make you smile. Take care, Scada

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 8:14:30 AM
hello superman, welcome home. enjoyed this as much as one can enjoy pain, it hurt me as i see myself tucked not so neatly amongst your words...this is as i understand from experience, growth, and you have that well in hand mr reilly.... your work here is profound ~ well done josie

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 6:22:11 AM
So much emotion intertwined in these words. This is Exceptional and well done. Tim

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 4:31:30 AM
You have a unique way of displaying your feelings. I like this!!!!! It's great to have you back on the board again. Welcome back!!!!! Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 4:03:29 AM
excellently written and very moving great talent you have Sir

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 3:44:20 AM
When I saw your poem under the "Poetry" section....I was really glad that finally I'd read something decent. I want you to keep on writing Reilly...this one was excellent. This had a cryptic insight into your being.

the beautiful eyes of a chameleon (Poetry) - 8/14/2002 2:20:37 AM
Read this bottom to top you have an extraordinary mind, Reilly.

Ladies please Feel free to plant tomatos in my ass (Poetry) - 7/2/2002 7:57:34 AM
Supa-fly! I enjoyed it...if A bit vauge, I won't suger-coat my reviews. Heads up, I liked the way this one flowed, humerous and real...good write.

Slave-Trainer (Poetry) - 6/25/2002 2:24:20 PM
I loved it then and I really really like it now.....you got it you do....

Slave-Trainer (Poetry) - 6/20/2002 3:16:22 PM
once again, kiddo..you prove my point... good heart and true artist! with a style that is all 'reilly'. hugsalot krissy

Slave-Trainer (Poetry) - 6/20/2002 11:44:55 AM
Great piece.

Slave-Trainer (Poetry) - 6/20/2002 10:13:37 AM
Liked the "shit".

Slave-Trainer (Poetry) - 6/20/2002 8:36:13 AM
I think this is a great glimpse of how you see the world, showing us from your heart. there is a hint of greatness here mr reilly, im not feeding you any bs, keep seeing it and writing it, just like this. josie