A Mother 's Love (Poetry) - 10/21/2008 6:40:59 PM
Awesome!
Dr. D
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 8:57:41 AM
It is very optimistic I must admit that. But sometimes we ultimately when we give it our best shot. Go read my song/poem "They Don't
Give Out Medals." Bill
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 9:45:22 PM
10-28-02
An A+ . That!!
TRASK
everything in my life (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 8:46:56 PM
Profoundly beautiful vulnerability.
You might play with the length of the lines
to give it strength in verses. Just for an example at the beginning
and what you have to offer
is more than I can give
but I know that I will love you
as long as I live.
Just an idea. Vicky
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 8:14:51 PM
This is very good....
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:58:27 PM
very well written but it makes it sound too easy to not give up
everything in my life (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:51:02 PM
Is she talking about me? hehe. i hope so.
everything in my life (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:50:13 PM
one day im gonna find someone that feels that way about me.
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:48:51 PM
this girl knows what she's talking about.
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:42:27 PM
Bravo to this! I agree:)
A Mother 's Love (Poetry) - 6/13/2002 5:34:27 PM
Beautiful write.
A Mother 's Love (Poetry) - 6/13/2002 4:44:08 PM
I second that emotion!
A Mother 's Love (Poetry) - 6/13/2002 4:59:31 AM
Amy,
Very true - children's hearts are mother's diamonds - children's love is daddy's gold.
Karen Dunn
A Mother 's Love (Poetry) - 6/13/2002 3:22:47 AM
Good write Amy. I love the pic too!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
A Mother 's Love (Poetry) - 6/13/2002 1:37:24 AM
Without a doubt Amy...Good write!
A Mother 's Love (Poetry) - 6/13/2002 12:49:37 AM
Beautifully written, Amy. Children are a blessing.
