Never give up (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 8:57:41 AM
It is very optimistic I must admit that. But sometimes we ultimately when we give it our best shot. Go read my song/poem "They Don't
Give Out Medals." Bill
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 9:45:22 PM
An A+ . That!!
everything in my life (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 8:46:56 PM
Profoundly beautiful vulnerability.
You might play with the length of the lines
to give it strength in verses. Just for an example at the beginning
and what you have to offer
is more than I can give
but I know that I will love you
as long as I live.
Just an idea. Vicky
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 8:14:51 PM
This is very good....
Never give up (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 7:58:27 PM
very well written but it makes it sound too easy to not give up