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Recent Reviews for D. L. Vaineo
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Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/11/2011 3:40:25 PM
I have to agree with Fee, and think of all the individuals with different personality disorder's whom went miss diagnosed. Be thankful, you have the answers now. Also, I enjoyed the write. Best wishes to you...
Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/20/2010 5:00:39 AM
Sadly all too many people were written off, kicked out of families, locked away or worst because so little was known about mental illness. Glad you survived.
fee
Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 6/10/2010 6:13:03 PM
Thank you for sharing this important information. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 1/22/2010 10:17:48 AM
Sounds as you suggest like a book we all should read and learn from.
fee
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/12/2013 2:37:51 PM
A rose waiting for the sun
to dry the dew *Deborah*
Perhaps..
Lady Vivian
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/12/2013 1:34:16 PM
Capturing "Patience be the Virtue"
*Deborah* as well as not being able
to change whatnot..
Lady Vivian
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/12/2013 4:47:57 AM
VERY SAD BUT BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 4:06:23 PM
I see it to be dialogue in a daytime soap...it's a compliment to The Bold and the Beautiful, Deb...the female soap star I can hear saying these lines...sometimes to sell poetry, we have to put it in other formats and package it in a different light...poet today, soap writer tomorrow...
Drama & Love's Memory
Sage
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 3:27:13 PM
I know I am loved :)
We all know, we ask why but know the answer...
Hugs
Love and Light
Lily
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 3:25:59 PM
I know this very well Deborah...
Being patient until things can be changed...
I have so much love to give and the clock ticks away...
Love and Light
Lily
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 2:31:11 PM
I Like Sage's Lip Stick Kisses...
Never Wait Time Really Is Of The Essence
So Grab That Bull By The Horns
Ride It & Rock It Like a Rodeo Star!!
Holding Hands
& Holding Hearts
Vickie
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 2:28:05 PM
oh the emotion engaged within
these lines is heart wrenching
how many of us have left & too
been left...but how awesome Dr. Hook is
you'll find "Better Love Next Time"
Song Thongs & New Heels
Vickie
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 2:09:03 PM
Hopefully it wasn't just a passing fancy...it's sad when love is one-sided...nicely penned, Deborah...
Anna
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 11:30:48 AM
Lovers who leave us hanging...sometimes increases our desire. Beautiful questions asked in the interim!
Peace,
Dayvid
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 5:59:13 AM
Reads like your lover was a tramp.
Ron
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 3:10:40 AM
I can relate so well to this. I hope it all works out the way you want it to and if it doesn't I pray you a speedy healing.
Love ya!
Jane
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/11/2013 3:09:54 AM
Glad I never had to experience such a loss of love, it would have devastated me. Powerful poetry that grabs at the heart and won't let go.
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 4:45:16 PM
I am living this at this very moment. Thank you, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 4:05:55 PM
D.L.,
Unfortunately as you said, this is true for many. So sad.
Many blessings,
+Linda
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 3:27:46 PM
i hope the answer was the one you want
budd
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 3:19:32 PM
Such heartache within the lines of this very sad, but somehow the words you write are not written with complete defeat. You have gathered lines of wanting and hope within the questioning of "You said you loved me." Beautiful, Deborah.
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 1:53:15 PM
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Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 10:47:35 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 7:52:01 AM
This speaks to me on so many levels!! Thanks for sharing, Deborah!!
Anna
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 6:19:14 AM
Time waits for no one. Sorry for the cliché.
Ron
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/10/2013 4:19:21 AM
If you only realized how much this means to me at this point in time. Thank you.
Love ya!
Jane
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/9/2013 2:43:34 PM
time is and so is love
budd
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/9/2013 10:31:58 AM
Many a preacher has used those words in their numerous sermons, and the meaning is never lost as he asks each person to shake the hand of the person next to them.
Patience in Waiting (Poetry) - 6/9/2013 9:02:21 AM
Excellent words from a wise and caring person. Simple thing to do, but too often, much too often, we forget to "reach out," and love as much as we can. If those in the world, if everyone would just reach out and love the world's problems would disappear overnight.
Alone no More (Poetry) - 6/6/2013 9:40:27 AM
yes this is lovely too
lonely people sharing space
that unspoken comfort zone
Pigeons & Peafowl
Vickie
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 6/6/2013 9:38:27 AM
sweet sweet yesterday
I too have a shadow that I love
it's a beautiful reflection Deborah
Love Unstoppable
Vickie
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 6/3/2013 6:15:23 AM
Lovely...and very romantic...
Anna
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 6/2/2013 8:24:24 AM
Reflections of light to feel
and touch from You, Deborah
Lady Vivian
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 6/1/2013 12:24:39 PM
Oh yes, Deborah....this is big identification with reader: "Walking with shadows/We all do-" Lots of maturity coming off this poem. ~~ Diana
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 1:16:25 PM
Emails do bring back the past walking with inbox stuffers, secrets and sex vids...great poetry, Deb. I've watched you soar over the years. Your words are more carefully chosen now, and book-ready. Be well.
Sage
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 9:56:31 AM
Beauty in thoughts *Deborah*
short and so sweet!!
Lady Viivan
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 7:10:26 AM
This one blew me away! Fabulous!
Love ya!
Jane
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 6:32:16 AM
Yes, we do. As I examine these words, I think they are beginning of the fabulous song of sorrow and light.
Ron
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 5:38:07 AM
Shadows always follow us...the trick is keeping them behind us.
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 5/31/2013 2:08:54 AM
the shadows accompany us always and the wish they were more is eternal
budd
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 5/30/2013 5:25:31 PM
It is wonderful that as you walk hearing cries in the night, and coveting dream, to bring back the past, that you have someone you single out as the one you want to walk with. That is a positive sign, Deborah.
Walking With Shadows (Poetry) - 5/30/2013 4:51:07 PM
Yes when you turn the lights off, the shadows are gone.
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/30/2013 4:37:13 AM
This speaks volumes...nicely done, Deborah!
Anna
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 3:26:05 PM
To sense anothers needs is a special gift...
Well done is such short verses to be alone
no more...
Love and Light
Lily
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 12:24:57 PM
Twelve words generate a thousand quick thoughts. As it has been said recently, "Start a conversation..." Meeting new people and making new friendships is one of the true joys of life.
Simple and evocative. I love it.
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 6:04:38 AM
'Funny how things happen isnt' it?
Love ya!
Jane
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 5:50:26 AM
To walk or sit, is that the question? Or is it love?
Ron
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/29/2013 2:20:00 AM
such a warm thought
budd
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 3:39:42 PM
Wow, this is a gemlet, Deborah. It actually fans out a story introduction in just those few words. I like the significance of red font for Part I of this, to me indicating "in the minus zone," then the black font creating the positive opposite. The sealing wax of the single word "Beautiful-" puts a finishing touch on the unfinished story. I like this very much; and what a great photograph to augment your lines. Wonderful. ~~ Diana
Alone no More (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 2:56:51 PM
I love these simple, but so eloquent pieces of life you give us Deborah . . .
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/28/2013 6:37:41 AM
What better place to be but within the bosom
of love...
Beautiful picture Deborah...
Love and Light
Lily
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/25/2013 3:46:43 PM
Courage of Convictions
is what I feel *Deborah*
Lady Vivian
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/25/2013 7:13:04 AM
Part of writing poetry is how you express yourself not only in words, but also in format, and this format is not new, just seldom used. I liked both the poem and the layout...well done. If you read any of the work of ee cummings you'll notice he didn't color inside the lines, either.
Never be tired of trying new things.
Cheers,
Dan
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/24/2013 12:51:39 PM
oh someone is changing team players
nicely done Deb
& I like the crossword puzzle style too
Hopping Fences & Totems
Vickie
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/24/2013 11:17:44 AM
This is a wonderful lead in to romance and love, well done.
Art
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/24/2013 6:54:43 AM
A poem about “crossing over” to better relationships on the other side of love. I will not make that journey, because I have plenty of love on this side.
As you can see by the above, the only thing interesting about the formatting is that it is harder to read. You may be trying to draw some kind of picture with the words (on both sides––having to cross over to read?), but I can't see it. I refer back to your primary purpose writing the poem and that is why you changed your mode of love.
Ron
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 3:54:17 PM
Great presentation! Love it!
Anna
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 2:38:34 PM
Creatively done! I enjoyed this very much.
Love ya!
Jane
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 1:22:49 PM
very different and much enjoyed
budd
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 9:06:36 AM
That's what I did, read it straight across, and my tingles were tingling by the time I finished it. Yes indeed. This is a tingling kind of poetry.
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 8:44:46 AM
You will have to read this straight across---Sorry!
The Other Side (Poetry) - 5/23/2013 8:43:21 AM
Lovely formatting. Crossword puzzle style. Is that a new position I don't know about, Deb?
Sage & Lucy in the Sky of Diamonds
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 9:07:22 PM
Singing Your praises
*Deborah*
Feeling in your heart!
Lady Vivian
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 11:39:53 AM
your poem (for me) is that intense moment right before they embrace their passion...to seal the deal with a sweet kiss
Almond Joy & Finger Foods
Vickie
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 8:23:03 AM
there is nothing more beautiful
than to feel the joy of love and touch...
Lovely Deborah
Love and Light
Lily
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 4:59:54 AM
Amen! Nicely penned, Deborah...
Anna
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/21/2013 12:00:24 AM
Big time!
Love ya!
Jane
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/20/2013 7:01:39 PM
Still miss it a bunch
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/20/2013 12:31:23 PM
yes the feeling is fantastic
budd
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/20/2013 12:03:34 PM
Reliving the memory without the reality can be the hardest.
Ron
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/20/2013 11:24:16 AM
You would make Tiny Tim
proud with this..as us
Lady Vivian
Joyous Love (Poetry) - 5/20/2013 10:18:38 AM
I too happen to be very familiar with that ache of which you speak, Deborah. Even though the love game can be cruel and unrelenting, it can also be the height of a person's life, therein is the allure which sucks us in. Yep, I too happen to be very familiar with that ache of which you speak, Deborah.
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/18/2013 12:10:27 PM
Aye never let it go :)
sage advice Deborah...
Love and Light
Lily
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/18/2013 11:32:37 AM
None are perfect and we come with our faults...
None mean any harm and some need to be overlooked
where love is concerned...
Love and Light
Lily
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/18/2013 10:41:06 AM
Wise words some waste.
Ron
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 9:09:41 AM
~Deborah~
Once you find love..never let it go..
Embrace the present.
Lady Mary Ann
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 8:34:45 AM
i so agree with Jane, when you find it hold on you need not smother it just bask in its warm embrace
budd
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 8:20:40 AM
Love really does mean so much more than sex...........that's lust. Love lasts. Grab it and hold on to it as if it were life itself. Wonderful write!
Love ya!
Jane
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 8:09:54 AM
. . . and all lived happily . . . Just kidding, Deborah . . . I actually shook hands with the "Tiptoe Through the Tulips" guy. I lived in New York at the time he came on the world stage. Strange character, and I was surprised one night watching television and there he was, and, as they say, the rest was history.
This poem is optimism with a capital "T." Everything is perfectly said and written. If we could all live in such a way the world would be a much happier place.
They Tiptoed ... (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 8:08:22 AM
No tiptoeing in this poem. Right on.
G
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 4:53:07 AM
Sincere words...nicely penned...
Anna
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/17/2013 4:48:25 AM
Lovely...
Anna
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/16/2013 6:53:27 PM
You are what you are
faults are not excluded
to have love included
Lady Vivian
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 9:11:10 PM
So beautiful the scenario!
Lady Vivian
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 9:47:04 AM
Reads like you are asking for forgiveness.
Ron
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 9:39:23 AM
it is more complicated than need be
budd
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 8:05:07 AM
I think more than a few of us can relate to the depth in this poetic gem.
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 7:37:21 AM
I hope everything works out well for you. Hold on to that hope!
Love ya!
Jane
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 6:59:34 AM
Ahhh . . . Deborah, hope is the last last thing to die. You can wash it down the drain, but it will return, fear not. I admire poetry of this kind/caliber, I've purged many demons doing the same thing. If you have anything to forgive yourself for the sooner the better. Then you can carry on with your hopes and desires. I support you in this effort.
An Already Complicated Life (Poetry) - 5/15/2013 6:51:32 AM
You have made easy in your writing that 'complicated life'...well done!
Cheers,
Dan
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 2:13:20 PM
Regardless of how many clever and eloquent arguments
we may hear in favour or against..."anticipation morning
dew"...is the true joy of life.
Thank you, Deborah, for sharing your poem.
With warm regards Isabella.
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 11:38:15 AM
And to quench our thirst from those sweet petals…
Ron
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 7:10:58 AM
Remembering the scents and moments
of every scene... lovely
Love and Light
Lily
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 5:32:29 AM
no w theres a way to measure time
budd
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 5:02:34 AM
From daybreak to day's end....always living in anticipation of "morning dew"......what a lovely existence.
Love ya!
Jane
Remember: Morning Dew (Poetry) - 5/14/2013 4:22:28 AM
Absolutely true is the message in this gem. Morning Dew from inception to the joy of the mid-life (or afternoon delights) til at last we lay down our heads, the race having been run . . . Morning Dew awaits.
With You (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 1:14:43 PM
Such an honest and meaningful poem Deborah.
With You (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 11:35:25 AM
The heart truly knows who it can - and wants - to be vulnerable with. If such feelings are reciprocated, then that makes for a wonderful synergy of being that results in true contentment. Love the purpose and clarity here. And the bio picture - is it close to Cathedral Rock? Looks familiar! :)
With You (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 1:46:28 PM
Well stated, It is very difficult to find that person. Lovely to know you have!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
With You (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 8:22:45 PM
A testament worthy
to be granted..
Lady Viivan
With You (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 5:50:45 PM
Very feeling write, Deb - so simply conveyed, so hard to say - and even harder to find!
With You (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 10:00:03 AM
And a wonderful sharing Deborah
in particular when trusting is a very
fragile thing to do...
Love and Light
Lily
With You (Poetry) - 5/10/2013 4:56:52 PM
Everywhere we turn, we seem to come across reasons
why certain things, people, circumstances cannot be accepted,
trusted or even considered..."to trust in them behind closed
doors"...is one of them.
But your... Dear Deborah...soft, and reassuring words of your
poem made me listen, think...trust your wisdom and intuition,
that come from...the very depth of your being......I'm ready
to be guided.
With warm regards Isabella.
With You (Poetry) - 5/10/2013 1:34:21 PM
Picture and poem are both delightful.
G
With You (Poetry) - 5/10/2013 11:51:34 AM
Your poem is an invitation for the right one.
Ron
With You (Poetry) - 5/10/2013 9:42:56 AM
i hope you get and have it too
budd
With You (Poetry) - 5/10/2013 9:04:52 AM
. . . and now he knows . . . next is his move . . .
Shone (Poetry) - 5/8/2013 2:46:15 AM
Wonderful advice for all.
Shone (Poetry) - 5/7/2013 11:52:37 AM
Many a beacon
like saviors
in the night
into the day
so true..
Lady Vivian
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/7/2013 9:17:48 AM
Fantastic!
Love ya!
Jane
Shone (Poetry) - 5/7/2013 7:13:25 AM
Shows love shone through.
Ron
Shone (Poetry) - 5/7/2013 2:16:13 AM
having love in your heart can never disappoint you
budd
Shone (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 2:43:17 PM
So true..." Beauty is more than outer appearance"
Love ya!
Jane
Shone (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 2:21:56 PM
..."follow your hear"...because only thing that
matters is LOVE.
Thank you for sharing those joyful experience.
Shone (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 2:15:56 PM
It sure takes one on the best road!
Shone (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 11:29:01 AM
Puppy love is the exception as is falling in love with love, so they tell me.
G
Shone (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 10:59:11 AM
Ah, it may not disappoint you, but there are plenty of situations where the heart is tremendously disappointed. I like your new short and to the point poetry you are putting out lately.
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 8:57:13 AM
Live, Laugh, Love
of a poem *Deborah*
Lady Vivian
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 8:14:45 AM
How much fun was this!! Amen to your words!
Anna
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 8:03:42 AM
Profoundly Real
*Deborah*
taking notes..
Lady Vivian
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 5:05:45 AM
Intriguing write, Deborah...well done!
Anna
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 4:14:23 AM
Restoration is a interesting way to describe spring. And it is loving and lovely.
Ron
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 3:15:46 AM
so true the restoration of life is love
budd
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 5:14:22 PM
The Spring winds of change...poem that invokes Hope,
manifested in the force of New Season.
Enjoyed the enchanting anticipation.
Thank you for sharing.
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 10:16:06 AM
A poem one should read every single morning! So well done!
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 10:15:23 AM
What a wonderful, so simple yet profound poem...what a gift!
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 9:49:12 AM
Happy picture that begets the love of Spring and the new life it creates. Poetry of the heart, springs to life as the season changes.
G
Restoration (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 7:50:34 AM
"Always Love!"
Yep. You have the source of great happiness at your fingertips when you take on love and all it offers. Love your upbeat thought, my friend.
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 5:53:16 AM
Deborah, this is one of your best...well done!
Cheers,
Dan
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/5/2013 5:48:11 AM
Yes, we have those dark times don't we? We have to gve it our all to get through it or forever be lost.
Love ya!
Jane
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/4/2013 4:39:15 PM
This is dark; and I can relate, but I love the optimism and hope at the end. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/4/2013 3:30:35 PM
Wonderful poem, Deborah.
It speaks...reality, spirituality
and consciousness that...hovers
within your mind...you within you
...called "me".
Thank you for sharing.
Warm regards Isabella.
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/4/2013 1:32:53 PM
Reality always wins.
G
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/4/2013 12:47:48 PM
I surprise myself, I write what comes out!
Thanks-
Clouds of Consciousness (Poetry) - 5/4/2013 12:38:48 PM
Whoa!!! Deborah!!! Dark stuff. You surprised me, and I don't know why. I like the tone and the conclusion of this one. Yep. Dark is special when done right, and you did it right.
S o f t ly...let me love you (Poetry) - 5/4/2013 12:33:35 PM
Beautifully written.
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 5/2/2013 4:52:18 AM
Oh how I love this feeling!
Wonderful!
Teresa
Sunrise...Sunset (Poetry) - 5/1/2013 6:48:27 PM
everyday beauty.
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 5/1/2013 3:11:49 AM
Blooming and budding. The most beautiful part of Spring.......just as everything else is renewing so is your love.
Love ya!
Jane
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 4/29/2013 3:22:05 PM
Beautifully captured colours of love! Nicely done, Deborah...
Anna
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 4/29/2013 9:29:41 AM
Love is many splendorous
to grow like your flowers!
Lady Vivian
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/29/2013 5:34:56 AM
At least once...giggle....
Anna
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 4/29/2013 2:55:05 AM
...time when you realize the whole world
belongs to you...
Absolutely wonderful poem.
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 4/28/2013 10:28:35 AM
very apt portrayal of this
budd
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/28/2013 8:23:35 AM
Many should agree *Deborah*
Lady Vivian
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 4/28/2013 8:20:31 AM
Like the pic and the wonderful image you portray making nature a love potion.
George
Falling in Love (Poetry) - 4/28/2013 7:54:47 AM
Precious love poetry, Deborah. You used lilacs and roses as they bloomed very effectively as metaphors for boundless love. Liked this very much.
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/27/2013 4:48:35 PM
all the honest have
budd
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/27/2013 2:56:26 PM
For me, more than once...nice write.
Cheers,
Dan
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/27/2013 11:28:49 AM
What's love got to do with it? Tina Turner.
Ron
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/27/2013 9:43:59 AM
Lusting is my hobby!
Love ya!
Jane
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/27/2013 7:14:34 AM
I lust every time I walk through WalMart. (They aren't all like the fatties you see in those sites.) I lust driving down the street. Whenever I see a pretty girl/woman, this guy flat-out lusts.
L u s t (Poetry) - 4/27/2013 6:18:55 AM
How true
A Heart Bled (Poetry) - 4/26/2013 6:10:58 AM
The whole story in a nutshell! Fabulous!
Love ya,
Jane
A Heart Bled (Poetry) - 4/25/2013 12:17:02 PM
Powerful!!!
*Deborah*
take a bow..
Lady Vivian
A Heart Bled (Poetry) - 4/25/2013 8:50:05 AM
Quite a romantic tale in such scant phrases...very nicely done, Deborah...
Anna
A Heart Bled (Poetry) - 4/25/2013 8:30:29 AM
not the way that springtime led it to believe
budd
A Heart Bled (Poetry) - 4/25/2013 8:05:59 AM
To the point poetry. Last two lines . . . Perfect.
A Heart Bled (Poetry) - 4/25/2013 7:31:00 AM
Eight lines of poetry telling a fantastic story...love it.
Cheers,
Dan
No Where to Hide (Poetry) - 4/22/2013 12:38:54 PM
Many to hide..Sagely
expressed *Deborah*
But then comes The Dawn
for a walk away with
faith in new day..
Lady Vivian
No Where to Hide (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 12:42:39 PM
the loss of trust is this devastating
budd
Tongue-tied (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 12:39:11 PM
Next time give it a whirl! You just might be surprised!
Love ya!
Jane
No Where to Hide (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 12:09:57 PM
Disbelief is the ugly blackness which overtakes trust. Very good write!
Love ya!
Jane
No Where to Hide (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 10:35:26 AM
"Imaginations becoming stagnant" Wish my imaginations was a little more stagnant, mine are so real sometimes they are scary.
I love dark poetry. This one is very dark. That is why I like it so much. Good writing, my friend.
No Where to Hide (Poetry) - 4/21/2013 10:30:26 AM
And then it all came to light, the awakening...
Love and Light
Lily
Tongue-tied (Poetry) - 4/20/2013 11:01:19 AM
It can surprise you (like Vivian said)
what you think is in your league or not...
each person has their own likes and dislikes...
she may have thought you were out of her league :)
Love and Light
Lily
Tongue-tied (Poetry) - 4/20/2013 10:48:37 AM
Has happened to me.
Ron
Tongue-tied (Poetry) - 4/20/2013 8:44:12 AM
You might get surprised if ventured..
Many a beautiful person has sat home
on a Saturday night because someone
was afraid to ask...but also understand
the dilemma you have well presented *Deborah*
Lady Vivian
Tongue-tied (Poetry) - 4/20/2013 8:30:29 AM
Never be outclassed.
Tongue-tied (Poetry) - 4/20/2013 7:31:07 AM
I know the feeling of being out-classed, but I found myself wading into unfamiliar territory as I bluffed my way in, and many times I found that the reception was far from the aloof, cold shouldered one I expected. Hah! (((((grinning)))))
Who (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 7:39:12 PM
Like fine wine..not before it's time
Lady Vivian
Who (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 6:02:56 AM
Lovely write...and that's the thing isn't it...when we're not looking for love it finds us...
Anna
Who (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 5:09:13 AM
One of the great mysteries...who will fill the void of love...but the search is delightful.
Cheers,
Dan
Who (Poetry) - 4/19/2013 4:15:36 AM
Love is gentle, love is kind, love is out there
for you to find :)
Never give up...
Love and Light
Lily
Who (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 5:32:16 PM
He us out there. He will make his presence know. Please do not fear.
Who (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 5:31:37 PM
I've given up on all kinds of love! Lusty love, tender love, love of steamed clams.......you name it. Then, some other kind of love comes along and bitescha!
Love ya!
Jane
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 3:09:02 PM
people returning to the older values will be the sving of us all
budd
When it Rains (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 1:49:42 PM
I do like the rain! A good book...
Warm comfy sofa...
Cup of hot tea or any other hot drink...
Sink in and enjoy :)
Dance!
Love and Light
Lily
When it Rains (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 12:33:10 PM
Just remembering..great minds think alike!
Rain, Rain etc..
Thunder and lightning scary,
so do the dancing in your mind *Deborah*
Lady Vivian
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 10:46:59 AM
Your words ring so true
*Deborah* but perhaps
remembering the past
will somehow get us
through..
Lady Vivian
When it Rains (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 8:40:38 AM
I love candle light and when the electricity come back on I feel a bit "let down".....unless it's cold!!!
Love ya!
Jane
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 8:26:35 AM
I think it's happening all around...every where....sad thing...speed is catching up on everyone, with gadgets and then corrupting minds...genius being left behind...all getting sort of chaos.. Reading Milan Kundera's slowness ...somehow thought of what I said.
Sad picture
When it Rains (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 6:26:12 AM
I love the smell of candles, that's a positive part of being isolated with no electricity. Maybe you can't to the fandango with the umbrella, and you didn't sing, but you can most assuredly hum . . .
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/18/2013 4:15:16 AM
We feel the same here in Canada, Deborah...don't know what's happened to the country....
Anna
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 11:14:54 PM
It's gone to hell in a handbasket!
Love ya!
Jane
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 7:26:57 PM
D.L,
I've often wondered the same thing. It seems the world's going crazy where children are dying and hearts are broken.
Many blessings,
+Linda
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 1:19:26 PM
I must agree with Jerry regarding politics...
Socially we have become a me world too, no longer
caring for the neighbor we once used to...
Love and Light
Lily
We Once Knew (Poetry) - 4/17/2013 9:59:07 AM
Liberals politicians / Too much welfare going to people who do not need it / W-a-a-a-y too much government intrusion in our daily lives / Too many people in this country who hate America and call us evil / Those are the beginning list, there are more, much more.
Without a Plane (Poetry) - 4/16/2013 2:55:06 PM
Ah yes the floating feeling of flying...
Just close your eyes and be in the moment :)
Love and Light
Lily
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/15/2013 1:27:25 PM
Wonderful rise to the challenge, Deborah!
Blessings,
Christine
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/15/2013 4:27:08 AM
Very different writing for you, Deborah, but nicely done...intriguing indeed...
Anna
Without a Plane (Poetry) - 4/14/2013 7:21:52 AM
Awesome poem! So succinct, the stuff dreams are made of. The last line is a little mysterious...but maybe that adds to the poem. Without dissuasion?
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/14/2013 7:16:57 AM
Well, girl.....I don't think you'll be getting that cake any time soon! LOL!!!
Love ya!
Jane
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/14/2013 6:56:04 AM
The last line says it all.
Ron
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/14/2013 3:19:06 AM
well this one is not your usual fare, cool
budd
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/13/2013 3:41:54 PM
This is quite different for you, Deborah. I find it to be a romping piece, even if the subject is not happy. I like that it creates a story in one bite. Nice* ~~ Diana
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/13/2013 2:56:47 PM
Someone left my cake
out in the rain in
Mc Arthur Park
How about this?
"Fruit cocktail"
Ingredients
1 cup Self-Rising Flour
1 cup Sugar
1 can Fruit Cocktail With Juice
Softened Butter, For Pan
Unsweetened Whipped Cream, For Serving
Preparation Instructions
Preheat oven to 350 degrees. Grease 8-inch square baking dish with butter.
Stir together flour, sugar, and fruit cocktail with juice until just combined.
Pour into buttered pan and bake until warm and bubbly.
Serve warm with whipped cream.
Lady Vivian
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/13/2013 2:36:45 PM
I hope you like chocolate cake with peanut butter frosting...just saying.
Cheers,
Dan
Don't Hate Me A Challenge by Sally Sue (Poetry) - 4/13/2013 12:02:55 PM
Yep, I'll bring the cake, you know the one, the one with pink candy roses on top of the frosting and the file inside of it.
Without a Plane (Poetry) - 4/10/2013 1:24:07 PM
Debrah, these lines do create a flying feeling, and your lighter font contributes to that. Elevating piece of writing. ~~ DIana
Without a Plane (Poetry) - 4/9/2013 1:12:21 PM
Such a sense of delight and smoothness!
Blessings,
Christine
Without a Plane (Poetry) - 4/9/2013 10:31:13 AM
Like a trip taken on drugs. I prefer to do it daydreaming.
Ron
Without a Plane (Poetry) - 4/9/2013 6:54:52 AM
Ah, the things dreams are made of...enjoyed the read.
Cheers,
Dan
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