Recent Reviews for D. L. Vegas
Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/11/2011 3:40:25 PM|
I have to agree with Fee, and think of all the individuals with different personality disorder's whom went miss diagnosed. Be thankful, you have the answers now. Also, I enjoyed the write. Best wishes to you...
Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/20/2010 5:00:39 AM
Sadly all too many people were written off, kicked out of families, locked away or worst because so little was known about mental illness. Glad you survived.
Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 6/10/2010 6:13:03 PM
Thank you for sharing this important information. Love and peace to you,
Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 1/22/2010 10:17:48 AM
Sounds as you suggest like a book we all should read and learn from.
Looking for Me (Poetry) - 4/12/2015 10:13:12 AM
Nice poem with a glance at love.
Un cer tain ty (Poetry) - 3/22/2015 4:15:53 PM
I believe this as well, Deborah; thank you for sharing your perspective through your verses. Love and best wishes,
Un cer tain ty (Poetry) - 3/18/2015 7:24:28 AM
A nice poem, but I agree with Ron. Death remains the last great mystery.
Un cer tain ty (Poetry) - 3/18/2015 5:08:46 AM
The old saw is, "Nothing is more certain than death and taxes." While life may be uncertain, death isn't. You write of going into "another dimension." That's nice wishful thinking, but it is also uncertain.
Un cer tain ty (Poetry) - 3/17/2015 1:49:36 PM
I can't wait for the next dimension to appear as I know I have learned a lot in this one to make that next one better. Great write!
Un cer tain ty (Poetry) - 3/17/2015 11:48:40 AM
Yes heaven or hell are the two places reserved for the dead. We have the choice.
Un cer tain ty (Poetry) - 3/17/2015 11:39:04 AM
Ahhh . . . Wisdom from your pen Deborah, and I agree completely with your assessment. Death opens the door to something wonderful. I truly believe this . . l excellent poetry!
Cobwebs Attached to my Heartstrings (Poetry) - 3/12/2015 6:26:18 PM
Perfect analogy. I think many could relate.
Cobwebs Attached to my Heartstrings (Poetry) - 3/12/2015 12:09:09 PM
Cobwebs Attached to my Heartstrings (Poetry) - 3/12/2015 8:06:28 AM
Looks like a need for spring cleaning.
Cobwebs Attached to my Heartstrings (Poetry) - 3/12/2015 7:18:44 AM
I really love this poem!!!
It says so much in such a short verse.
Peace love and light
Cobwebs Attached to my Heartstrings (Poetry) - 3/12/2015 6:26:00 AM
I pretty much understand you without knowing the particulars. These "issues" will crop up now and again, don't be shy stomp them, stomp them down.
With no Place to Go (Poetry) - 3/11/2015 11:54:14 AM
She's not suffering anymore. Every time you feel that certain "peace" know she is there.
With no Place to Go (Poetry) - 3/10/2015 12:19:03 PM
You know that I completely empathize since the last time I talked with her was less than a month ago. I kept believing that she would be back. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and tribute to Carol. Love and best wishes,
With no Place to Go (Poetry) - 3/10/2015 11:31:15 AM
Again sorry for your loss
Lily of the Lough Neagh (Poetry) - 3/10/2015 8:51:11 AM
Yes! I can vouch for what she helped me through at a particularly bad time. I am still shocked by how quickly this disease took her away. Thank you for sharing this tribute to Carol (Aingeal, the Lily of Lough Neagh), Deborah. Love and best wishes,
Lily of the Lough Neagh (Poetry) - 3/9/2015 2:10:57 PM
I remember her
Lily of the Lough Neagh (Poetry) - 3/9/2015 1:30:50 PM
Life is cruel sometimes.
Looking for Me (Poetry) - 3/7/2015 6:03:00 AM
Lovely poem, gentle yet passionate.
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/7/2015 6:01:42 AM
It is a great loss to you personally because she was your friend. But she was one of those people who is a friend to the world and will be greatly missed. Lovely tribute from your heart, the kind she would appreciate.
A Memory of Many (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 7:15:08 PM
unfortunately it is usually a bittersweet scene many in love have experienced...sometimes one wonders if that magic is like the new car smell when you first get in a new car and eventually without thinking it fades and then you wonder what happened to that magic and when did it all disappear?
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 7:06:42 PM
Yes, those of us who were fortunate to have known such a sweet and tender soul such as Carol were truly blessed. I too was very close to her and it seemed she made time for everyone as she was a soul who always took in strays and helped in every way she could. She was loved by all and I do so love that you did this in tribute to her as we are all affected by her passing. You have a very generous soul Deborah. You need to be proud of who you are.
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 6:26:18 PM
She was a wonderful person, I'm sure she's very happy up in Heaven, helping others as she did on earth.
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 8:06:40 AM
So sad to hear that she lost her battle. Thank you for telling us. Carol certainly lit up the den with her poetry and insights.
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 7:37:32 AM
You said it all, Deborah...Carol was all kindness, understanding, poetry and beauty. May we all strive to be more like her.
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/6/2015 7:35:16 AM
I "feel" Carol smiling down on everyone. She has become pure light, I'm sure of it. Let us not mourn her death but celebrate the life she lead.
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 6:51:11 PM
...today...we all at the AD...lost our Dear Friend Carol aka Lily of Lough Neagh...my thoughts and prayers are with Her loved ones...We will miss you Carol!
My warmest condolences to you Deborah.
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 6:25:52 PM
I love her too. A bit at a loss for words. Thank you, Deborah (assuming I know who wrote this). Love and best wishes to you,
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 5:04:57 PM
Yes Deb, she was a damn good friend to anyone that knew her & have to ask why does God take the good people like her and leave people that are not so good here...-e-
Carol was her Name (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 2:52:52 PM
God bless her and welcome her home. Sorry for your loss.
Looking for Me (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 8:30:48 AM
Let us hope that in the vastness, there is love for everyone. At least that's what the Internet dating services claim.
Looking for Me (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 5:42:47 PM
Looking for Me (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 4:06:30 PM
What a beautiful stairway!....Looking, Discovering, Whispers, and finally Releasing!
Looking for Me (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 1:51:54 PM
My kind of poetic expression that elevates love. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Looking for Me (Poetry) - 3/4/2015 12:43:37 PM
How fortunate we are when true love comes our way.
Two Roses Become One (Poetry) - 2/28/2015 9:53:21 AM
It's about time, but there's still a lot of work to do. Most of the world's religions still demean women and that needs to change.
Two Roses Become One (Poetry) - 2/27/2015 4:28:00 PM
I agree... ...I love roses and women; I let them choose. Lovely and meaningful write, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Two Roses Become One (Poetry) - 2/27/2015 2:36:16 PM
Proving a point?
Two Roses Become One (Poetry) - 2/27/2015 2:29:52 PM
Right on, Sistah!!!!
Two Roses Become One (Poetry) - 2/27/2015 1:07:08 PM
Yes indeed, I would certainly say they do . . .
Turn Turn Turn (Poetry) - 2/27/2015 7:10:39 AM
Without an axis, all this would not be possible. The entire Earth would have no seasons, similar to what occurs in the equator. It is indeed, the turn, turn, turning of the earth that creates these wonderful changes north of the tropics. Your poem makes me remember when I lived where they were more distinct and life-changing.
Turn Turn Turn (Poetry) - 2/26/2015 5:19:45 PM
Oh that wonderful changing of the seasons...
I love this poem....nothing ever stands still...
Nature is always looking ahead...
Turn Turn Turn (Poetry) - 2/26/2015 4:15:57 PM
Gosh how I love the four seasons and your poem.
Turn Turn Turn (Poetry) - 2/26/2015 3:06:36 PM
There has been no winter here (second year in a row); and spring has sprung (like the title of my latest poem posted here), quite some time back. The daffodils are just about in bloom. Believe it or not, I miss the snow. I love your poem, by the way, Deborah. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Turn Turn Turn (Poetry) - 2/26/2015 11:57:58 AM
We up here in the Western Reserve will never see Spring, I fear!!!
Just kidding, of course. Your lovely poem has given me hope! Thank you.
Turn Turn Turn (Poetry) - 2/26/2015 11:47:36 AM
Yeah you're right. Bring it on. Spring. Only one thing wrong with spring. It leads to summer . . . eh . . . Drat!
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/23/2015 7:07:54 PM
The good memories are what keep us going.......
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/23/2015 9:13:51 AM
The making of memories is always good. It is a way of writing the book of experience in our lives one chapter at a time. Sometimes the most beautiful thing in life is making great memories. Excellent write,
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/23/2015 7:18:07 AM
Yes we all want to do this...but the only way to achieve great memories is to learn to live in the present moment. And that is not always easy! Great thoughts from you as usual :)
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/22/2015 4:04:05 PM
Sometimes, briefly, our memories are all we have to help us through. great poem.
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/21/2015 1:12:57 PM
I wish my memories were everlasting as I try to remember what I've forgotten.
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/21/2015 12:36:23 PM
I have a few memories I wish I could forget but for the most part it's been a fun ride. (It still is!)
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/21/2015 12:02:38 PM
Yes, even the least of us should make the most of our memories. There comes a time when that's all we have left of life.
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/21/2015 11:24:17 AM
As long as two folks can walk away clean and learn something from the experience, nothing more can be said...-e-
Everlasting Memories (Poetry) - 2/21/2015 10:45:14 AM
Yes I do. Yes I did. Yes, it was worth every minute of it.
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/21/2015 8:22:21 AM
I agree with Regis: universal and timeless...great poem!
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/20/2015 6:28:00 AM
Yes, but pity the poor timid soul who never took the chance...
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/19/2015 8:47:27 AM
Love may or may not not be disposable, but it sure is easily dispensed! Very thought-provoking poem.
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/19/2015 8:14:26 AM
It takes a lot of work to make a relationship work. For to many people, it's easier to just walk away.
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 11:36:07 PM
Kinda glad I never got married, well not really, bu then again definitely...-e-
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 4:06:55 PM
Ah! this incredible good chemistry of human attraction...the earth-moving phenomenon and a lighting struck sensation...still need a lot of time and work to develop into long lasting un-disposable love...
Thank you Deborah for your strongly appreciated analysis of human relationship...
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 4:01:09 PM
It is so sad when this happens, but hopefully there will be good memories too....and a lot of hard earned experience..
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 3:23:22 PM
"A loveless marriage with no intimacy" - oh that's really bad when that happens. I'm glad my marriage is filled with love, intimacy, and sentiments. I thank God for my WONDERFUL hubby and my 3 beautiful children everyday!
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 3:02:48 PM
Sometimes even working at a marriage can be one sided. There are so many different situations to consider here. I certainly can relate to your poem, Deborah, in any case.
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 3:00:51 PM
Jerry is right on the target. It is a life's work.
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 2:13:51 PM
Sadly, the theme that you express via your verses here is a universal and seemingly timeless one in this life/world. I am intimate with what you have shared here, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Disposable Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2015 2:01:08 PM
You betcha, Deborah, it is epidemic in nature. Once married things change. Courtship is over. Now it is time to "work" at the marriage. Some guys and gals just do not understand that.
Let US Rejoice..... (Poetry) - 2/16/2015 2:04:16 PM
Words of wisdom and love!
Blessings, Christine xo
Let US Rejoice..... (Poetry) - 2/13/2015 6:50:56 PM
Deborah, yours are powerful words..."let us rejoice"...embracing
the whole beauty of nature...laughing free our face from the facade
of hidden pain...and your photo....to prove the point-need...to express
our joy...compassion with all human spirit..
Let US Rejoice..... (Poetry) - 2/13/2015 1:44:35 PM
Uplifting, wonderful words...!
Let US Rejoice..... (Poetry) - 2/13/2015 9:39:30 AM
Stunning in its simplicity.
A beautiful message.
Let US Rejoice..... (Poetry) - 2/12/2015 11:27:12 AM
Gives me a wonderful feeling without having to go to church… Just rejoicing for the love of it.
Let US Rejoice..... (Poetry) - 2/11/2015 2:06:49 PM
Seems this is the nature of life to look at a mirror and with a smile that turns to laughter, knowing what a fool I have become.
Let US Rejoice..... (Poetry) - 2/11/2015 1:12:12 PM
Oh, you hit the nail right on the head with those last two lines! Thank you for the reminder.
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/11/2015 11:31:24 AM
I like this unique viewpoint and thoughtful observation, Deborah. Transformation comes in many forms but not without change and metamorphosis of some kind. Neat. xx
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/10/2015 7:24:24 AM
Pain spurs growth in many areas of life. I like this one a lot!
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/10/2015 7:23:15 AM
Amazing poem! Thank you :)
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/10/2015 7:12:44 AM
Somehow, I sense this is a very personal statement.
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/10/2015 6:51:01 AM
Ed said it best. I hope I never stop growing.
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/9/2015 4:01:47 PM
Some things we never grow out of
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/9/2015 3:18:16 PM
Don't ya have to be still growing to have those pains...? -e-
Growing Pains (Poetry) - 2/9/2015 3:13:39 PM
Still having those things, eh, after all these years? Ouch!!
Memorable Memories (Poetry) - 2/8/2015 4:21:01 PM
This is "right in my face" as I am a member of a group recently created on Facebook where it's all about our childhood days where I grew up. Most of the photos shared from that time are in black and white. Thank you for sharing, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Memorable Memories (Poetry) - 2/8/2015 2:33:29 PM
Treasured photos and music to dream by.....what a wonderful way to pass the time.
Memorable Memories (Poetry) - 2/8/2015 12:24:40 PM
Something like listening to old tapes can enhance old memories. I have a couple of those that I dare not let anyone listen to. ;-)
Memorable Memories (Poetry) - 2/8/2015 7:14:26 AM
Looking at b&w photographs-trying to remember. I can so relate to that.I look at my yr. book from"72 and i don't remember who half of my class mates are. All the pictures we took of our kids when they were infants, and I can't tell you who's who. That's why we should label our photos, but seldom do.
Memorable Memories (Poetry) - 2/8/2015 3:38:33 AM
Deborah, you're so right...it is something about
photographs...they capture that single moment...
single smile...good time and not so...And memories
bringing back a thought...the smell...the song...the
early morning dawn...bringing us back to that moment,
that we view from every possible angle...now...because
it is safe to look at life...in day-light...to see that
nothing's really lost...as long as we cherish the memory
of that single moment...
Memorable poetry, indeed. Thank you for sharing your
thoughts-provoking verse. Blessings!
Memorable Memories (Poetry) - 2/8/2015 1:33:40 AM
The good out weighs the bad
Memorable Memories (Poetry) - 2/7/2015 7:15:36 PM
Indeed, life is sweet,. It just takes some of us longer to understand that, than do others.
In the Dark (Poetry) - 2/5/2015 12:11:49 PM
Risk... often has unique rewards; one of which is relief and... release. Very daringly penned! -- Jeff Mason
In the Dark (Poetry) - 2/3/2015 10:56:29 AM
Very sensual indeed. well done.
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/31/2015 3:32:51 PM
clever, real and sensual ...
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/31/2015 12:57:51 PM
great write D L liked the ending
Peace be with you
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/28/2015 9:15:18 AM
Wow one sensual poem you know how to do this!!!!
Peace, love and light,
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/28/2015 8:38:46 AM
That's what you call spicing it up, and that's how to spell relief.
Prisoner (Poetry) - 1/28/2015 7:41:16 AM
A very concise view of the human condition...so well done!
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/28/2015 7:40:07 AM
Jello shots??? Never done that! A curious drink, but the effect seems to be a good one...Nice, fun write.
Cry With You (Poetry) - 1/27/2015 8:11:05 PM
Deborah this is so heartfelt. Everyone should have a friend like you.
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/27/2015 8:10:01 PM
Very sensual and real. Well penned Deborah.
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/27/2015 7:40:09 PM
Love this, Deborah; it is passionate and enticingly engaging too. Love and best wishes,
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/26/2015 11:35:19 PM
Smiles! What a trip...to giving relief in the dark!
Wishing creativity and bliss!
Carol Phelan Aebby
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/26/2015 6:56:53 AM
I'm all eyes, ears, and hands for this one! Naughty naughty…
PS. Never had a Jell-O shot. How do you drink something that you have to eat with a spoon because you can't eat it with chopsticks? ;-)
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/26/2015 5:18:19 AM
There is no end to amusing ourselves.
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/26/2015 4:45:10 AM
Just doin' what we do. 'Loved it!
In the Dark (Poetry) - 1/26/2015 4:07:13 AM
Danger makes it all the more exciting.
Cry With You (Poetry) - 1/24/2015 11:59:39 AM
This is a treasure... ...as true friendship is. Thank you for sharing this gift, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Cry With You (Poetry) - 1/23/2015 2:51:25 PM
Everyone needs someone like this at "low" moments.
Cry With You (Poetry) - 1/23/2015 10:08:25 AM
Funny (not) that you would post this poem this day. I could use a hand to hold . . .
Prisoner (Poetry) - 1/23/2015 7:38:08 AM
I believe I know the source of your struggle. May you find that freedom soon.
Prisoner (Poetry) - 1/22/2015 4:47:25 PM
I can completely relate. You might have peeked into my soul and those sentiments would fit completely. Thank you for sharing, Deborah. Love and best wishes,
Prisoner (Poetry) - 1/22/2015 3:50:26 PM
Love frees the soul. I hope yours is set free soon.
Prisoner (Poetry) - 1/22/2015 12:29:41 PM
Love must share to be truly free.
Prisoner (Poetry) - 1/22/2015 12:25:32 PM
Love has a way of doing that to us from time to time. Hopefully yours will be short-lived.
Prisoner (Poetry) - 1/22/2015 12:21:18 PM
Very profound. We indeed are all prisoners in our own bodies, and love is our key to freedom. Beautifully stated.
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 1/12/2015 5:29:39 AM
And where are the love letters, lovers once tied up with a ribbon and kept in a locked chest?
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/12/2015 5:28:59 AM
You are so right Deborah, music is a gift from God. Went to a wedding where there was no music, I felt cheated of one of the most beautiful elements of a wedding.
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 1/6/2015 10:22:56 AM
I do love technology (particularly for the ease of communicating) but I also love getting my yearly cards from my daughters and one of my nieces. The personal touch cannot be replaced. Love and best wishes to you,
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/5/2015 2:21:31 PM
The truth, told with humor and heart! Love this one Deborah!
I can remember being awfully pushy at this game :)
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/4/2015 11:54:08 AM
Music is an integral part of our being I think. Nicely done! Love and best wishes to you,
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/3/2015 12:11:54 PM
I think music goes back a long way. From the time early humans heard the songs of birds and tried to imitate them, too singing around campfires at night and ritualistic singing to the gods. Instruments like the flute and the drum were easy to make long before the thought of the piano and electric guitar crossed a mind.
I love most music except those that are too repetitive.
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/3/2015 8:30:47 AM
As they say, without music the world would B Flat.
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/2/2015 6:40:54 PM
This poem reminded me of my piano lessons, the 3 B's, Moonlight Sonata................I bet you took piano lessons!
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/2/2015 2:20:04 PM
Hah! Great, and what would the world be like without musical chairs? Loved this one . . .
Musical Chairs (Poetry) - 1/2/2015 1:36:08 PM
Hard to forget those great composers.
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 12/22/2014 2:21:05 PM
Yes, and I love keeping in touch the old fashioned way!
Merry Christmas, Christine :)
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 12/21/2014 3:21:37 PM
my daughter makes her own cards with computer software and sends them out ...
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 12/21/2014 12:28:18 AM
True poetic thoughts here. Well, it's nice to get cards both ways. I will take whatever from my children and grand kids. But the fifties and sixties generation still send cards and I like that as well.
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 12/20/2014 3:35:11 PM
I still get them, but not like before the Internet.
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 12/20/2014 9:20:50 AM
So true..............but Merry Christmas!!!
Where are my Cards? (Poetry) - 12/20/2014 9:09:38 AM
You said it, and said it well!
Peace is Prevalent (Poetry) - 12/17/2014 8:06:26 PM
Good poetic thoughts! Pray they come true. Amen
Peace is Prevalent (Poetry) - 12/17/2014 10:52:21 AM
I sure hope that your crystal ball is dead on accurate!!!!!
Much peace, love and light,
Peace is Prevalent (Poetry) - 12/17/2014 9:29:07 AM
I second Jane's thoughts. It's up to us (everybody) to make that happen.
Peace is Prevalent (Poetry) - 12/16/2014 7:09:32 PM
I sure hope you're a prophetess!
Winter Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/16/2014 11:42:28 AM
Fun! That's what come to my mind when I was a child. Southern-most part of Texas doesn't see much snow, not like Dallas and Amarillo.
Great poem, great picture, great poet. Thanks for taking me back.
Winter Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/15/2014 8:34:40 PM
This is the poetic truth. The backyard was our playground. Now it's mainly another place to find work. How true...
Winter Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/15/2014 2:39:23 PM
There's something magical about a fresh snowfall that turns everything into a winter wonderland. I never tire of it.
Winter Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/15/2014 12:53:56 PM
I would give up a lot of palm trees for one night of snow.
Like you have shown us.
Winter Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/15/2014 10:35:43 AM
Thank you for sharing and awakening memories, Deborah. Coincidentally, my senryu on Facebook today is about winter as well. Love and best wishes,
Winter Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/15/2014 8:05:09 AM
I hate to think of it, but you have to be right. However, I do remember the few days of snow and magical wonderland that was my brief honeymoon in northern Wisconsin that ended with a cold night in a dreary motel, bringing back the dismal part of winter that makes me long for spring.
Winter Wonderland (Poetry) - 12/15/2014 1:25:24 AM
You have brought back pleasant memories of sled riding for hours, ice skating, skiing, and good ol' snow ball fights. Where'd the time go?
Unfamiliar Faces (Poetry) - 12/3/2014 7:16:54 AM
Such important thoughts in so few words...you truly have a gift! Fabulous poem!
Unfamiliar Faces (Poetry) - 12/2/2014 8:15:08 AM
A tightly defined poem with a lot of meaning. And the collage is wonderful!
Unfamiliar Faces (Poetry) - 12/2/2014 4:36:50 AM
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Unfamiliar Faces (Poetry) - 12/1/2014 5:50:08 PM
Yes, they were, Deborah. I have been so into dream states as you describe that I actually met myself coming back.
Finalization (Poetry) - 11/28/2014 8:38:37 AM
Yes, life is too short to spend time on what happened and cannot be changed. We can change our futures and that's what we should all focus on.
However, if the statute of limitations has not run out, we can hire a lawyer and sue whoever wronged us to teach them a lesson, and, if we are successful, pocket a little change for our future, as well.
Bill Cosby, I think your time of paying women off is over. You may have to start paying big time now. ;-)
Finalization (Poetry) - 11/28/2014 7:07:17 AM
The courage of moving forward, can only pay off big time...like opening a door into the future :)
Finalization (Poetry) - 11/28/2014 5:45:35 AM
Wonderful thing she did.
Finalization (Poetry) - 11/27/2014 6:41:20 PM
The female sex has much to put up with. We guys think we do, but what we deal with is nothing like the so-called fairer sex has to deal with. I have a line in the new novel, "Magical," I am working on which says . . . "It really isn't fair what men do to us." That just about says it all.
Finalization (Poetry) - 11/27/2014 6:27:17 PM
This is a very powerful poem about a subject that has ruined too many young girls lives, rape.
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/25/2014 12:55:42 PM
Ah, but the 'nothing more' will always be a light to the fuse, Deborah! Love the 'certainty' expressed in this. xx
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 2:28:20 PM
...poem filled with yearning for the feel...the delight
..the ecstasy of it...the lightest touch...little breeze
arriving from nowhere...the feeling that can not
be name...yet...the beginning of a relationship...
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 12:04:04 PM
What a lovely way to start a relationship. Two minds on the same track. And I love that track very much because it's what makes the world go round.
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 10:00:28 AM
WoW! Or maybe . . . WoWee! Heh.Heh "Stay this night" Yes indeed.
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 8:47:21 AM
Women need sex just as much as men and have more orgasms during sex
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 8:32:48 AM
Love, lust, and need..............all wrapped up in this fine write.
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 8:19:55 AM
Sounds so splendid!
Peace, love and light,
And Nothing More (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 8:15:13 AM
With that plead, I'm sure I would do so...(just don't tell Rene...LOL) -e-
Make no Mistake (Poetry) - 11/18/2014 10:31:37 AM
A most effective poem that awakens thoughts and emotions. Thank you, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Make no Mistake (Poetry) - 11/13/2014 10:31:36 AM
Umm, very thought provoking poetry indeed!
Warm energy to you!
Peace, love and light,
Make no Mistake (Poetry) - 11/13/2014 8:34:25 AM
I sense an underlying sense of aloneness and despair in these words. The cold is real and brought on by the circumstances of the left alone or avoided.
Make no Mistake (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 3:45:04 PM
Yeah, I'm there most of the time.
Make no Mistake (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 2:39:08 PM
great..so very much said here
Make no Mistake (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 12:12:17 PM
Whoah! Now you KNOW I love this one!!!
Make no Mistake (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 11:08:32 AM
I shiver to think about it
Running on Empty (Poetry) - 11/1/2014 4:43:56 PM
I felt that way many a times
if you don't find the way, the way
will find you, in prayers
love & Peace be with you
Running on Empty (Poetry) - 10/30/2014 3:20:48 PM
Gotta love your attitude though, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Running on Empty (Poetry) - 10/29/2014 6:48:28 AM
I believe we all feel this way every now and then...it's true for me, at least the way you express it...
Running on Empty (Poetry) - 10/27/2014 8:31:22 AM
In hop you find God's presence.
Running on Empty (Poetry) - 10/27/2014 7:28:30 AM
Thank goodness for hope.
Glass Shattered (Poetry) - 10/27/2014 6:39:33 AM
KIDS WILL BE KIDS,
JUST HAVING FUN.
SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING,
THAT I MIGHT HAVE DONE.
Glass Shattered (Poetry) - 10/26/2014 11:22:47 AM
Sounds like kids to me. Always curious, which leads to trouble.
Glass Shattered (Poetry) - 10/26/2014 9:40:23 AM
This is a pure delight.
And to think you blamed your younger sister!
Another fine mess you've gotten us into, sis...
Lives (Poetry) - 10/25/2014 10:23:19 AM
Now that things are more open, it's easier for lives to be shared. The days of walking far behind are, hopefully, over.
Before the Dawn (Poetry) - 10/25/2014 3:53:30 AM
and at the dawn ...
Before the Dawn (Poetry) - 10/24/2014 8:09:50 PM
Your poetry here is extensive and vastly measuring essense in the distillation. I like this flavor of your work, Deborah. ~~ Diana
Before the Dawn (Poetry) - 10/24/2014 5:01:07 PM
Succinctly most effective in conveying the scene and circumstances. Thank you, Deborah. Love and best wishes to you,
Before the Dawn (Poetry) - 10/24/2014 4:19:05 PM
I get the picture you have painted and have lived thru it myself.
Everything is Right (Poetry) - 10/23/2014 6:17:53 AM
Everything is right, You are everything...an awesome line if there ever was one!
Everything is Right (Poetry) - 10/23/2014 1:32:24 AM
...poem filled with admiration...and awe
and marvel...great choice of an artistic
Everything is Right (Poetry) - 10/22/2014 7:59:10 AM
Perfect blend of words and image.
Everything is Right (Poetry) - 10/22/2014 4:36:19 AM
Simple and direct poetry, and oh so poignant . . .
Everything is Right (Poetry) - 10/22/2014 4:28:23 AM
Making love is so beautiful and to be in love is its fulfillment.
A Seriousness Prevailed (Poetry) - 10/17/2014 7:38:43 AM
Isn't it heaven when you know.
Lovely poetry as always,
Peace, love and light,
The Crush (Poetry) - 10/15/2014 12:52:38 PM
And how beautiful the crush...
For I too have had many...
A crush on a beautiful soul...
A crush on a giving soul...
For there are so little of these kind...
and if we are fortunate enough to cross their path...
and they we are the object of their affection...
Oh how very blessed we are...
Just beautiful Deborah
Love, Light, and hugs
A Seriousness Prevailed (Poetry) - 10/15/2014 10:00:25 AM
when it is, it is
The Crush (Poetry) - 10/15/2014 6:28:33 AM
Crushes are functional...they always tell you it is time to change your life :) Great little gem of a poem, as usual!
The Crush (Poetry) - 10/14/2014 6:21:06 PM
The Crush (Poetry) - 10/14/2014 1:12:57 PM
so true and so much said in so few words
The Crush (Poetry) - 10/14/2014 12:36:57 PM
Refreshingly romantic and yes, I had a crush too. The last one stuck!
The Crush (Poetry) - 10/14/2014 10:59:23 AM
The crush 7 years later became my wife.
The Crush (Poetry) - 10/14/2014 10:39:03 AM
Crushes for the most part don't have a tendency to end up in love. Sometimes, as in your case they do, and THAT is a good thing!
Green Grass (Poetry) - 10/14/2014 5:13:51 AM
Glad I'm wired for grass.
Love's Tenderness (Poetry) - 10/13/2014 6:01:40 AM
Great visual evocation, that encompasses all in so few words...
Green Grass (Poetry) - 10/11/2014 2:28:46 PM
I echo Jane . . .
Green Grass (Poetry) - 10/11/2014 12:57:57 PM
I hope your quench was satisfied.
Love's Tenderness (Poetry) - 10/11/2014 11:13:04 AM
Green Grass (Poetry) - 10/11/2014 11:09:14 AM
Regis hit it on the head. Great poetry
Love's Tenderness (Poetry) - 10/11/2014 10:45:16 AM
Yes! Love! Perfect! Love and best wishes to you,