Zion (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 2:58:33 AM
A well written poem,take care
Character (Poetry) - 6/18/2002 10:12:03 AM
A very fine write! Even though the bitterness lasts a while it does fade and the lows from love are the same impetus that produce the highs.
Character (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 8:01:05 PM
sometimes it's hard for others to hear our cries...
Character (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 5:44:58 PM
I can relate to this one right now.
Until I get myself up off of the floor, emersed in my own tears..
I remember, that I "can"..get back up, and walk away.
Very emotioanl Write!
I second Peggy.. I hope this is just a write.
Just in case..*hugs*
Deep Dreams (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 2:08:35 PM
Loved this David! Loved the last line especially...only enough to make me love you. Superb!
The Story (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 2:06:12 PM
Awesome write David. The imagery is so vivid.