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Recent Reviews for Chloe Jon Paul
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Dying Embers,Smoldering Ash (Short Story) - 8/7/2009 6:18:29 PM
Nice piece. The ending is very good. You paint a wonderful picture that really works with the story and supports the feeling in it. Bravo
Estate Sale (Short Story) - 5/4/2009 2:10:49 PM
Very well written. Description, characterization, flow and conclusion fantastic, Chloe. Read this through tears. Not only was my grandparent's farmhouse demolished after the last Uncle died(they were Italian, also) but the house I grew up in and have lived in for the last decade will also succumb to the same fate. You might want to read my poem posted just today. It's no small coincendence that I stumbled apon your den, today. Thank you. Blessings...Lin
Dying Embers,Smoldering Ash (Short Story) - 4/21/2009 9:09:04 AM
I've been where you are Chloe...and believe me I can appreciate your pain...I had to get some meds for the depression, and a fog lifted. Now he could jump off the Brooklyn Bridge with both feet tied to a concrete block and I'd never shed a tear. He's not only a myth, but a habit...a BAD habit. Once you conquer the depression, you'll conquer what's got you held back...the HABIT. I know this from personal experience. I thought I'd never get over my habit, but I'm on the other side telling you that it's not only possible but do-able. I went on Abilify which has been a life saver for me. This is a finely written, VERY detailed chronicle of the pain of divorce and surviving its aftermath. Best wishes to you Chloe...Michelle
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