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Recent Reviews for Patrick J McNamara
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Change (Poetry) - 10/21/2012 8:51:44 AM
The more things change, the more they stay the same. Innocent boys often grow up to be cruel men. And when we train men to become soldiers, we sometimes ruin their lives well beyond the murder they commit as emissaries of our ideology we call “freedom .”
Ron
A.M.M. (Poetry) - 7/20/2012 10:41:51 AM
A wonderful, healing verse.
Ron
Life (Poetry) - 8/6/2011 3:12:02 PM
Please, never stop writing. I feel the same way as you do, but your talent is much greater than mine.
A Cry for Help (Poetry) - 8/5/2011 12:15:13 AM
Oh my... this poem is AMAZING. You're certiantly not afraid to voice your pain!! A skill not many have. Please make more, because I think I'm hooked.
Sad Persons Glory (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 6:07:31 PM
I think the phrase, "a victim to society" sums up about 99% of suicides in the world. Expectations overwhelm. Life can be difficult to swallow when your thoughts are continuously being molded by robots. Perversely enough, I like the way you think. Not that condone suicide, but through appreciation of your message.
And there are people who care. Immaturity and fear sometimes mask them, but they exist.
Life (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 5:58:46 PM
Hang in there. You have talent, which is rare in this communist world of convention and wannabes. Always be yourself, whoever that is. Nobody can take that away from you. And never stop writing.
Untitled (Poetry) - 4/1/2009 6:03:09 PM
Hey. I really like this one. alot of this happened to me.
your other poems are really good too.
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