Recent Reviews for Budd Nelson
Dusty (Book) - 2/17/2014 8:11:52 AM|
I love a good Western with some dramedy, encouraging trail about it
I will look forward to reading this Book,Dusty is a great name for it as well,Thank you for your review on my Poetry,I need all the postive thoughts I can get.
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 8/11/2014 11:14:03 AM
I KNOW THIS IS YOUR STORY BUDD, I SAW YOU...ALL THE WAY THROUGH IT...FROM CHILDHOOD - ALL THE WAY THROUGH TO THE PRESENT. I SALUTE YOU...AND MAY GOD CONTINUE TO BLESS YOU...AND YOURS... WITH LOVE ABUNDANTLY. WALK IN 'HIS' LIGHT! LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Maid of Maidstone (Short Story) - 5/25/2014 2:55:58 AM
Loved the tale of Margery , how she finally found her love in spite of the losses before. A strong character has been weaved out. well written. well done JK
The Elder's Angel (Short Story) - 4/9/2014 4:56:20 AM
A very good and touching write. I so enjoyed it. Mary
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 4/5/2014 2:09:38 PM
Glad to know you enjoyed my short stories. I'll send to you my comments about yours, which I'll read for sure even when I'm really busy with my own translations. To tell you the truth, I let my eyes look at the last paragraphs after reading the two at the beginning. I will not forget. Leopoldo.
Maid of Maidstone (Short Story) - 3/21/2014 3:24:33 AM
I love this beautiful love story between Margery and Beirheart. The way they've met was like a fairytale come true.
Ancient One (Short Story) - 3/19/2014 9:33:06 AM
What a touching story this is. You really are a great author. I so enjoy your writings. Keep it up! Mary
Maid of Maidstone (Short Story) - 3/18/2014 6:36:04 AM
I really like June Marshall's comment. And I agree with her about 'even for a single encounter.' Budd, you fleshed this encounter out beautifully. The scene where Beirheart first sees Margery, clumsily bumping into a pedestrian...that smitten awkward elation -- you paint it alive. Your storytelling here contains much gentleness and the observant nature of Beirheart may well be his 'creator's.' Samples of that sensitivity are: “I doubt there is much your eyes miss, sir." AND "Not meaning any offence, of course, but you are quite an intense observer as I can see." The flow of relationship beaty is also painted in lovely colors: "She felt a pang of slight embarrassment mixed with her own interest after so short a meeting." AND "They found they laughed much together and easily at even small insignificant things." AND "That coming home feeling they called it," AND
"..feel the extreme warmth of the other rising." Harlequin novels would need to take a seat behind your romance fiction, I think, Budd. ~~ Diana
Dutch's Duck (Short Story) - 3/18/2014 5:52:27 AM
Very well-told story, Budd. It should teach me a lesson not to read the comments before the article, because Ron's mention of 'twins' tipped me to Paul's identity in this story. Fun to read this account. ~~ Diana
Maid of Maidstone (Short Story) - 3/17/2014 3:27:50 PM
Well done Budd. It's a beautiful love story.
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 3/16/2014 7:06:57 AM
Great story, Budd!! I love the happy ending!!
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 3/13/2014 6:31:23 AM
Budd, this was a terrific story. You moved through stages of this character's life so well, using specifics, a writing tool that always delivers: "He and his sister slept in beds in the same room with the dining table and refrigerator." The manner in which the boy threw the knife in the opposite direction...I could just picture the frustration of a youth not being understood at all. There is poetry in the romance (even the unrequited romance) "there was a spark but it did not burn true , in no time at all she was seeing someone else when he wasn’t around and the hurt felt like a raging fire." Hurt like a raging fire. Excellent. "set their mothers so much knowing they both were returning to “The Nam”, that on their second extension they spent their leave in Australia." That sentence surely can be felt by me, being a mother and imagining my son doing that very thing. This part...."he had too many interests that they did not care for especially;" trumpets 'not being understood,' for who would fault someone for being too interested, amazing example to place in this story. As is: “Who do you think is ever going to read something you write”. The very quote itself paints the pain of this storyline. And what a luscious wrap up (the end the way you wrote it) of a laundry list of tragedy for this character...and I'm happy the story ends this way..for my own sake in that by the end of this reading, I truly 'care' about this man. Lovely end: "the beauty in her eyes, that symphony he heard as she spoke those first words," and "the feel of her as he put his arms around her waist" A worthwhile piece of literature and an extraordinarily-full story (perhaps six lifetimes in one), based in truth or tale. ~~ Diana
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 3/3/2014 5:21:14 PM
Splendid write. Thank you for sharing.
Lady Mary Ann
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 3/3/2014 9:26:53 AM
At first, describing childhood, there were many little things, even though I lived very far from Oklahoma and Texas, that were very similar to my experience. Especially the rural relatives and experiences. Except my father was not mean to me and I always had friends besides my twin brother.
As I read further, all I could think of was that you were writing your autobiography in the third person. Having just completed my autobiography in the first person, I thought it quite strange, until I realized how shy you are, and that's why you do not want to reveal that it is your life in this story. If I'm wrong, please forgive me and right here make a comment stating that I'm wrong or write and ask me to remove this part of my comment.
As usual, I have found a few typos that need to be corrected before further publishing:
He had "done" nothing that day. The local boys had to assert themselves "on to" both new guys [this sentence is a bit awkward and can be easily rewritten]. He was "sitting" by her bed. His "mother's" stepdad).… They were parked on the road [as they were--delete] for hours. (His "father's" father). " mumbley peg". "MPs" (the plural of MP is not possessive, requiring an apostrophe). The company office (?) asked him. I stopped here because I was running into too many small errors. You need to get this further edited if you are going to submit it for publishing.
I recommend that you use dialogue and quotes anytime anyone is speaking during the narrative. It will make the story much more realistic then unquoted, indirect he said, she said.
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 3/2/2014 4:07:24 PM
I'm glad that after all of the sorrow he had experienced that he found someone who made him happy. Love makes everything O.K..
Escape From the Shadows (Short Story) - 3/2/2014 12:18:25 PM
Seems life is just one set of problems after another.
Sky Eyes (Short Story) - 2/28/2014 8:54:36 PM
A WONDERFUL WORK! I LIKE THE POINT OF VIEW YOU COME FROM. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Pride (Short Story) - 2/28/2014 8:18:49 PM
HIS LIFE CHANGED WHEN HE WAS WISE ENOUGH TO SURRENDER HIS 'PRIDE' AND ACCEPT THE FACT THAT HIS 'TIME' HAD PASSED...HE WAS NO LONGER ABLE TO BE KING OF MANY BUT HE WAS STILL VERY VALUABLE AS THE KING OF AN INDULGING FEW. TO BE OR NOT TO BE...THAT IS THE QUESTION, INDEED. EXCELLENT, BUD. THIS IS GOING INTO MY LIBRARY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
OUTLANDER Reprisal (Short Story) - 2/10/2014 11:27:39 AM
Hi there Bud, you are a wonderful writer/story teller. You make the adventure so entertaining and I feel as if I am a part of it. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to more of you stories.
OUTLANDER Reprisal (Short Story) - 2/6/2014 10:33:06 AM
The story continues to be interesting, especially about the desert. I like your title, but there is a problem. I remember seeing a movie called "Outlander." Outlander was the first book in writer Diana Gabaldon's series, written in 1991. You can't publish a story or book using the same name without confusion with her series. See if you can come up with some name that will be just as inviting, but not in conflict with any previous hero's name.
I'm still finding a few small errors. The way you describe people in the world's making changes in direction or changing position often is awkward. I didn't note any and probably should have. Here are a few more.
As the conversations "continued,…" "Lore" of the stone… "Too" wide a track. At the "sun's" zenith. the attackers "fled" back into the night. How could they start a fire in the desert with No fuel? Each "man's" more serious… The fire they had "set" just before leaving.
OUTLANDER Reprisal (Short Story) - 2/5/2014 4:17:54 PM
Still enjoying it. Nicely done.
OUTLANDER Pursuit (Short Story) - 2/5/2014 1:22:25 PM
You are very thoughtful, Budd, to have written this story! Well done!
OUTLANDER Pursuit (Short Story) - 2/2/2014 9:10:21 AM
I agree. This is a really great tale, and I love the dire wolves too.
OUTLANDER Pursuit (Short Story) - 1/24/2014 11:16:29 AM
This is a great write and a great story, love it. Way to go Budd
OUTLANDER Pursuit (Short Story) - 1/20/2014 9:00:31 AM
Love the interaction with wolves. Such magnificent animals deserve a high level of regard and respect.
This just reaches a whole new level with every episode.
OUTLANDER Pursuit (Short Story) - 1/20/2014 8:22:48 AM
This is so interesting to follow and always leaves me wanting to know more. I love Darma and the names of her pups so much.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 7/13/2015 5:18:52 AM
You are so right Budd, let us honor those who keep us safe, so we shall never forget the sacrifice they make for us. Some do not return, others without limbs and bruised souls. Praise to all of them...
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 6/1/2015 3:21:33 PM
Nor will I dear Budd... Very nicely written! If everyone felt as we do this would be a better world.
Blessings and hugs!
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 1/23/2015 2:30:00 AM
This is a wonderful write! The world cannot do enough for all the soldiers who have lost and continue to lose their innocence on battlefields to protect ours.
Carol Phelan Aebby
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 12/26/2014 12:44:03 PM
Great write Budd,and thanks for sharing with us here in the Den.
As far as I know, every worthwhile writer has emulated other great writers before him/her,as with any other art form. We may borrow words from here or there,but we lay them on the page in our unique way.
Barbara J. Henry
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/20/2014 12:10:45 PM
We must always remeber those that have served and died for us and those that are serfving now.
Her Return (Poetry) - 11/19/2014 11:11:33 AM
Dreamy moments well-shared through your verses, Budd. Thank you! Love and peace to you,
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/17/2014 10:38:53 AM
A most apt and timely sharing, Budd. Love and peace to you,
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/17/2014 10:20:46 AM
Great write Budd,and I too honor and salute veterans. Each Thanksgiving and Christmas(and throughout the year) I, along with a few friends, prepare meals and gifts for veterans who live in a nearby veteran's compound.
Thank you for sharing,and continued success.
Barbara J Henry
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/16/2014 10:42:18 AM
Very well done.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/15/2014 6:06:51 AM
indeed, i do ... especially my relatives who died in the Revolutionary War, in the Civil War and my father who served in WW 2 as a pilot as well as my son-in-law who served 2 years in special forces and received 2 purple hearts ...
good poem, mr,nelson
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/13/2014 1:34:31 PM
Yes, honor our vets, and care for them also.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 9:43:17 PM
True for some but some is too many. No Veteran should be on a bread line...
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 11:35:10 AM
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 10:23:25 AM
I don't see this as a lament. Otherwise, it's beautiful.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 6:41:48 AM
This is a great poem...we do not honor those who served our country enough.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 6:39:52 AM
All the men in my family were veterans. I have nothing but the utmost respect for those who are serving and for those who have served as my children and grandchildren were taught to have as well. You have stated it all so well here in your write.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/12/2014 4:05:59 AM
What a phenomenal write Budd. Remember and honor them we should and for always.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/11/2014 5:14:06 PM
an excellent Write Budd
you hit it on the head
we must teach our youth the reaspect
needed for for our Vets, the ones that return
and those that left their souls in a battle field
Peace be with you
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/11/2014 3:27:44 PM
An interesting confluence of modern language ("sans tickertape and confetti") and Shakespearean lyric ("our people yore who honored those"). Trying to bridge the old and new in one piece is ok but perhaps continuity is preferable. Nonetheless, your message is intact and touching. All vets (I am one) desire America's veneration, back-slaps, and thanks. Enjoyed.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/11/2014 2:42:32 PM
You have called it like it is, Budd. The goddamn liberals are sending this country on a one trip ticket to hell.
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/11/2014 2:40:52 PM
Valiant each one never to forget always honored.
Lady Mary Ann
Veterans Lament (Poetry) - 11/11/2014 2:26:48 PM
Wonderful tribute. I too will never forget those who've sacrificed their lives for my freedom. This poem is a wake up call.
Kathy J Parenteau
On The Way Home (Poetry) - 11/6/2014 8:30:39 AM
FILLED WITH ANTICIPATION...OF WHAT WILL ALWAYS BE. FINE WORK. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...HIS INSPIRATIONS
We are Always (Poetry) - 11/6/2014 8:25:57 AM
BASKING IN THE GIFT OF LOVE IS MORE THAN BEAUTIFUL...ITS LASTING AND ETERNALLY RAPTUROUS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH TO YOU AND YOURS...HIS INSPIRATIONS
My Muse (Poetry) - 10/31/2014 9:16:00 AM
True and genuine love is a lasting treasure; you express this very effectively through your verses, Budd. Love and peace to you,
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 10/27/2014 6:13:23 PM
Dear Budd, every day brings new wonders and discoveries, be they words or feelings. Love, Emile
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 10/15/2014 10:14:52 AM
I know the feeling and can so well relate. :o)
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 10/15/2014 10:13:21 AM
Wow! Great prose! Love it! :o)
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 10/11/2014 10:09:19 AM
Awww I know the feeling. But you know they say that reading makes a good writer better. Keep reading, and keep writing, because you must..just as a bird must sing.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 10/10/2014 9:08:25 AM
So glad you can write and keep posting here, your words mean lots.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 10/10/2014 7:44:01 AM
Your poem has awakened my thought process, Budd. Thank you. Love and peace,
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 9/18/2014 6:01:54 AM
Looking at these words you write,
You state you read for your insight.
Unbeknownst to you we love your write,
Stay on the path it gives us sight.
Don't stay so long from authorsden,
We love you and need you my dear friend!
Hugs always to you dear Budd...
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 8/29/2014 4:10:07 AM
Many of us must stand back and close the door...
I have done it more than once in my lifetime...
But it was a good thing, for once closure comes
happiness can begin...
Love and Light
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 8/27/2014 6:50:15 PM
Meaningful and thought-inciting; thank you, Budd. Love and peace to you,
My Muse (Poetry) - 8/5/2014 4:26:48 PM
Excellent and romantic write Budd
was a pleasure to read
Peace be with you
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 7/30/2014 10:26:14 PM
WHAT IS INSPIRATION...BUT A THIEF OF WORDS? SO WELL EXPRESSED, BUD. THANK YOU AND MUCH LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 7/7/2014 8:21:39 AM
WELL DONE BUDD
TRULY AN OUTSTANDING PIECE
PEACE BE WITH YOU
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 7/7/2014 8:19:12 AM
an excellent write Budd
continue on your writing quest.
Peace be with you
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/23/2014 3:05:55 PM
Can't have readers with out writers , so write what you will so we can read!
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/18/2014 11:27:18 AM
GREAT poetic thoughts that are both true and overdue! One of the best professors in the USA wrote a book about teaching students. His first rule is to beg, borrow and steal anything worthwhile that will help you to make it throughout the year. Now you know that people do, but don't have the guts to admit it. I usually thank the person for the ideas they give me but I seldom ask permission from them unless it's a direct quote. If that is stealing then I am going to hell man!!
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/10/2014 7:19:46 PM
I sense that the den (as I knew it for awhile) is re-assembling. That is exciting. Patrick
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/10/2014 10:38:25 AM
Would that i could but say words half as well
or simply stay away without the need.
But alas i can't, so i"ll read my fill
and steal these words of verse to feed my greed.
- Wordsmithing to compete with the Masters, Budd! I know EXACTLY how you feel and my study, stuffed with books read and unread, is my delight. Excellent. xx
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 7:45:36 PM
WOW, Budd, you have come such a long way since last I had the chance to read you...this has real meaning to me too...enjoyed...e
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 12:37:28 PM
Such humility in your splendid words, Budd!
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/8/2014 3:50:08 AM
I just 'stole' in here to read this, and it's pretty good.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/7/2014 6:05:12 AM
How sweet yet true. That's why I 'steal' here whenever I can too.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/7/2014 5:46:03 AM
Really funny, but who can kill truth, but truth! Loud and clear the truth is here!
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/7/2014 3:35:21 AM
as always, enjoyed the read, good one
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/7/2014 1:11:59 AM
lovely write Budd , Do feel you presence and look forward to your stolen words!jk
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 5:13:38 PM
Welcome back Budd! Glad that you're back. You own the words as you are such a gifted author. Nice write.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 3:59:10 PM
....soooooo good to "hear" you back, Budd and...to know
that you..."creep into this treasury of such wondrous
expressions of thoughts"...Don't think you "steal the words"
...just creating your own imagery...onto your readers mind.
You capture in your poetic lines and stanzas...the fleeting
moment...evoking...ad hoc...an experience of your own imagination
and personal feeling...catering to readers senses...
Each line of your poem...forms words-image-collage and
the feel...all images are equally important...immortal
and static like a paint. You can "steal these words"
but you never steal the idea of individual elements
arranged in poets-specific way...to express/deliver/
In this sense, it is like...en Plein Air weekend painting
where...7-10 artists are looking at the same landscape
and producing an individual master-piece...no two oils
the same...true creation...
Thank you Budd.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 3:07:41 PM
ahaha.. we are each other's inspiration.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 2:32:06 PM
I love reading your poetry. You inspire me. This is stunning Bud.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 10:54:01 AM
Ah hah! So you're the one stealing my verse so that I can't write it when I sit down to do it. I think I'll steal a few of these words to get even. ;-)
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 8:42:40 AM
Whoa!! Look who's here!! Welcome back, dear friend!!!
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 7:45:45 AM
I have to agree with Jerry.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 7:30:30 AM
HaH! Budd, steal away from whatever and whoever. But quit putting yourself down, my friend. You are a talented wordsmith. You betcha!! So great that you have come back.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 6:58:12 AM
As Kris kristofferson said, Lets all steal each others songs.
It's great to have you back.
Thief of Words (Poetry) - 6/6/2014 6:57:57 AM
I suppose it should be said as you just did that most of our poems and thoughts are triggered by others who have used certain words that inspire our own. They are like objects hidden in a picture that one must discover yet they are words of inspiration and thought for those who write them in yet another version.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 6/5/2014 5:54:09 AM
Yes, very intriguing, even prophetic. And I enjoyed the previously. written reviews. Had me wondering about your observation or perhaps introspection. I could totally relate.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 6/4/2014 2:34:48 PM
Out staying ones welcome allowing the past to fade and new life begin. Even if only with a pen.
Love Decided (Poetry) - 5/23/2014 8:01:55 PM
Great with gratitude!
Two to One Complete (Poetry) - 5/23/2014 8:01:01 PM
You have loving ways with your poetry!
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 5/23/2014 7:58:17 PM
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 5/17/2014 12:11:33 AM
IN OUR HOUSES OF GLASS...THERE ARE SKELETONS IN EVERY CLOSET. OF COURSE, WE SHOULD BE CAREFUL...WHEN LOOKING INTO ANOTHER PERSON'S HOUSE AND THEIR 'CLOSETS'. CLOSING THE DOOR...WE BOW OUT. THANKS, BUDD. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FATH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 5/12/2014 5:03:27 AM
Very enigmatic...and although your meaning and intention not clear, it had me captured...
It stands in it's own right as intriguing....
A Heart not Blind (Poetry) - 5/3/2014 10:05:08 PM
First Haiku I'm coming across here.
Great!! Keep Penning
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 5/3/2014 10:03:51 PM
Good rhythmic flow to the poem.
Loves Sound is Missing (Poetry) - 5/3/2014 12:31:10 AM
kind of emotional to me!
Her Return (Poetry) - 5/3/2014 12:30:11 AM
love is just like this!
Passion of Deep Love (Poetry) - 5/3/2014 12:29:22 AM
WOW, very good!
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 5/3/2014 12:26:08 AM
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/30/2014 10:57:13 AM
Leads me to wonder if it's fact or fiction. Either way, it's well-written with an interesting tale.
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/29/2014 2:08:44 PM
Oneness is like this, I've not got it anymore tho.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/29/2014 11:24:45 AM
... sounds like attending a Poetry Workshop where you are, at times, not understood and, at times, all chiming together. It's amazing how bonding such highs and lows can be. I like the mystery attached to this one, Budd. xx
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/29/2014 6:31:01 AM
Very, very powerful write. What reaches out the largest for me is the line: "Spoke what he should ignore." There is a vast universe wrapped inside that one line alone. ~~ Diana
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/28/2014 11:30:21 PM
it does sound mysterious which i liked. i have my own interpretation patterned on my life. and the poem gave a certain type of understanding.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/26/2014 8:46:37 AM
Hoping this is fictitious in nature and not a swan song farewell.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/26/2014 3:41:49 AM
A mysterious write Budd. I hope you are happy because you so deserve to be. Mary
A Heart not Blind (Poetry) - 4/25/2014 9:39:55 PM
nice! I recognize the feeling. Like looking at a picture of your love. And everything else just fades away.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/24/2014 8:50:44 PM
A fine diss, sir! I'd hate to be this person. Very humbling... or humiliating.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/24/2014 7:06:57 AM
Wondering who the "he" is. Is it you or me?
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 3:29:54 PM
...mystery "He"...has a right to think
unthinkable...to express it and act on "His"
thoughts...exploring all options...and "His" own
ideas...Who knows what the unexplored contains
until...it has been ...eeeer...explored all.
Thank you Budd for sharing your great poem.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 1:36:41 PM
Yes the poem seems like a mystery to me as we'll but it was good
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 7:52:27 AM
This one is quite mysterious. Leaving the need to try to figure out who "he" is. Like, for example, could it be you? Or could it be me? Whoever he is, I'm not sure that an "Adieu is due."
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 2:39:19 AM
When one door closes, hopefully another one opens, and I think we should always enter it if it does.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/22/2014 5:26:24 PM
Somehow a thread of understanding may be all we can grasp. After all we are all going through so much stuff at such an incredible speed. All I know it's better to learn from mistakes, love and to bury any past hate. Amen
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/22/2014 3:15:56 PM
I don't want to make wild guess, because sometimes what we think might not be what it actually to be; so I'm just claiming that I don't know this. To be assuming something we don't know is not a good thing to do. I hope all is well with you.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/22/2014 1:38:34 PM
I understand every line. Wonderful Bud!
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/22/2014 7:46:04 AM
I think I understand this. It's true.
Closing the Door (Poetry) - 4/22/2014 7:08:38 AM
Don't understand it, but then I guess I'm not supposed to.
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/21/2014 2:18:51 PM
Touching tribute to your Muse! Well done! :-) ~ Dawn
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/21/2014 5:35:42 AM
Once again, you've managed to write still further words praising this find of yours. I with you well.
Her Return (Poetry) - 4/20/2014 7:27:27 AM
What a beautiful picture you just painted...
This is true love my friend...
Love and Light,
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/20/2014 7:26:42 AM
I'm so happy for you Budd...
Love is such a wonderful thing...
Beauty to be held forever once you find her...
A touching warm write to her...
Love and Light
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/20/2014 3:22:06 AM
AND HAPPY RESURRECTION DAY TO YOU...AND YOURS! THE WINE OF LOVE...FROM ABOVE...AND FROM THE HEART, SO APPRECIATED. WELL DONE, THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/19/2014 4:26:40 PM
Very lovely and touching. I loved the last line where you offered up a prayer of gratitude for her.
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/18/2014 11:50:13 AM
Gentle..and soothing, romantic and moving... from a velvet-gloved pen.. and a Bard's very perceptive heart.
Just lovely, Budd!
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/14/2014 2:55:58 AM
One's Muse is a marvelous thing to have, and you honor yours well.
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/13/2014 7:46:52 PM
"She completes my being."...............no more need be said. Simply lovely!
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/12/2014 6:08:36 PM
quite passionate ... lovely poem ...
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/12/2014 12:20:57 PM
What a beautiful celebration of love through your words of poetry, Budd, she is very lucky to be the receiver of the perfection scribbled here.
Love and Dreams, Karen
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/12/2014 10:56:42 AM
She is your inspiration, not "he."
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 8:56:10 PM
Yes, to be on the receiving end of this poetic piece must be a treasure.
No, you do not disappoint, but you know how to anoint your loved one with expressive blessings and make her feel like a princess.
You crafted one of your best yet! Go Budd!!
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 7:05:41 PM
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 3:51:46 PM
Such a lovely poem Budd. I so loved this.Mary
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 3:29:28 PM
A delightful poem for the one you truly love...
There will be one happy lady when she reads your heartfelt words...
'Scribbles' were never written better!
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 8:33:39 AM
This is all so lovely Budd Jk
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 7:17:31 AM
true love is a blessing.
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 7:11:24 AM
What a delightful sonnet to the one you love, Budd...I'll bet she loved it too...
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 7:02:07 AM
You're always saying you're scribbling, but you write so well even when you're scribbling. I like your romantic style. You have a lot of love within you. Great poem! I enjoyed this.
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 5:51:02 AM
a well-written piece. i'm happy for you, Mr. Nelson. thank you for sharing.
My Muse (Poetry) - 4/11/2014 5:48:17 AM
Beautiful rendering, Budd. Sometimes you just have to let it all out. It is a cleansing of the soul. I probably do it too much, but what can I say? It's who I am.
A Heart not Blind (Poetry) - 4/10/2014 1:34:14 PM
A lucky woman she is. Beautiful Budd. Mary
Over the Precipice (Poetry) - 4/9/2014 4:42:14 AM
A chilling description of a frightening event, love the twist
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/9/2014 4:38:18 AM
Beautiful word pictures
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/8/2014 2:38:10 PM
Lots of appreciation for this poem, Budd. I would rate it NR, Natural & Romantic. Bravo! ~~ Diana
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/8/2014 11:53:53 AM
A tender afterglow that is both reverent and carnal is harnessed by your loving observations here, Budd. Such a love is deeply expressive and mutually fulfilling. xx
Her Return (Poetry) - 4/8/2014 6:39:58 AM
Nicely done. Kisses shared and left us hanging.
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/8/2014 6:38:26 AM
Soft and lovely work. Truly enjoyed reading.
Love Decided (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 6:08:33 PM
excellence at its best
peace be with you
Love's Image (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 6:06:01 PM
another outstanding piece
thanks for sharing your thoughts
Peace be with you
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 6:03:22 PM
Peace be with you
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 5:59:19 PM
most beautiful bird
the cardinal is
Peace be with you
Her Return (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 5:57:08 PM
glorious retun happy days
Peace be with you
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 5:55:36 PM
smooth as satin
Peace be with you
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/6/2014 10:08:11 AM
Way beautiful and so touching. There's just so much calmness in this piece.
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/5/2014 7:53:32 AM
A painted poetic picture that breathes! Well done Budd!!
On The Way Home (Poetry) - 4/4/2014 4:25:14 PM
Dear Budd, It's always inspiring to read you. Thank you for visiting my den. Love, Emile
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/4/2014 12:06:10 PM
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/4/2014 10:46:20 AM
Beautifully romantic and engaging, Budd. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/4/2014 8:00:38 AM
The wonderful aftermath.
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/4/2014 4:02:00 AM
a beautiful romantic poem ...
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/4/2014 1:30:04 AM
Romance at its finest in this write!
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 9:00:54 PM
There is beauty,warmth and love's sheen in thisJK
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 4:33:20 PM
Love is the greatest of all feelings. So well portrayed in this poem Budd. Mary
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 4:06:42 PM
Poem that...creates the pour femme feel
and let the words gentle flow through
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 3:41:31 PM
Mmmmm is how this made me feel...
the essence of Love, so delicately played...
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 3:00:31 PM
Rich in love and beauty!
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 2:55:34 PM
Tender and romantic the pearl essence sheen of love.
Lady Mary Ann
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 1:44:14 PM
So beautifully and delicately written.
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 1:32:32 PM
Made me want to lite up a cig, and I don't even smoke.
Loves Oneness (Poetry) - 4/3/2014 12:37:47 PM
Poetry made for lovers.
Her Return (Poetry) - 4/2/2014 9:12:22 AM
Simple, real, fodder for our imagination's reload, meditative for longevity.
On The Way Home (Poetry) - 4/2/2014 5:49:24 AM
I love your short, and compactness of your thoughts. Nice.
Her Return (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 6:52:03 AM
Fun one! ~~ Diana
Her Return (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 6:31:14 AM
A sweet return under the new moon.
Lady Mary Ann
Her Return (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 5:53:24 AM
fervor does need to rest ... lovely poem ...
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 5:32:25 AM
I know we have cardinals here.. I can't see them but I recognize their song...)))
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 6:05:57 PM
Ah but just wait until the full moon.
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 3:05:39 PM
oh, lol. Wonderful.
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 1:59:53 PM
Awww, very sweet. Mary
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 1:58:35 PM
I love birds and am happy to read this. Mary
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 1:57:14 PM
Very well expressed Budd. Life is fun when you find your true rib-mate. Enjoy yourself all the way! Mary
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 9:15:32 AM
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 7:01:49 AM
Now that you've corrected me of the last poem, I'm assuming that Bailey is your dog. ;-)
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 6:25:22 AM
Sweet dreams, I hope she wakes up without a kink in her neck.
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 4:20:51 AM
Well tomorrow is another day. Enjoyed the poem Budd
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/31/2014 2:19:26 AM
Like Spring, She Doth Return.
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 8:22:04 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww......kinda sweet in a way.
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:58:24 PM
THE ANTICIPATION AND FULFILLMENT OF LOVE AND AFFECTION IS ALWAYS APPRECIATED...BY EVERYTHING THAT DRAWS BREATH. FINE WORK, BUDD...THANKS FOR SHARE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 5:32:43 PM
Such sweetness and innocence in this write. Beautiful as always Bud.
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 4:56:31 PM
Aaaaahhhhh!!!!! Such sweet love!!!!! She's like me, I always fall asleep lying my head on my hubby's laps while watching TV. He watches, I sleep. Heeeheee!!!!!
Her Return (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 3:45:26 PM
All's well that ends well. Sorry to use this cliché, but it just worked for me.
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 9:30:57 AM
Cardinals have arrived in my backyard and are busy making a nest for their first brood of the year. They are joining our blue jays, mockingbirds, mourning doves, and numerous sparrows.
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 9:24:13 AM
In Ohio, the cardinal is our state bird. A lovely bird, with a lovely song.
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 8:33:51 AM
A phenomena of nature few take the time to contemplate. Perhaps we care not of the most intrinsic needs of creation's diminutive creatures...and that is sad.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 7:43:18 AM
Their light of love would truly shine.
Blessings for the love that completes your life.
Wonderful heartfelt poem.
Lady Mary Ann
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 7:38:08 AM
The colour of red is spectacular for the male. The female is a soft
brown, orange beek. Lovely to watch them feeding. Beautiful poem.
Lady Mary Ann
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 7:27:53 AM
there's a pair of cardinals living in the park i frequent daily ... the male is such a beautiful vibrant red ... strangely, this pair has been around all year ...
vivid poem, Budd ...
Love Decided (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:46:22 AM
Short, sweet, and loving. Perfect.
Loves Sound is Missing (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:41:15 AM
That is the one thing we cannot do again. We can look at pictures and videos, but the sound of a loved one's voice is never quite the same. Sad. Thank you for writing this.
Two to One Complete (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:35:31 AM
Oh, so lovely. No selfishness in a heart that's complete when two are one. What we all ultimately strive for.
Dark Journey (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:32:02 AM
So sad, yet beautiful. You have a knack in writing these.
The Sounds of Love (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:29:06 AM
Wonderful poem, so many comparisons to the many feelings of love.
New Moon Coming Soon (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:26:00 AM
Very nice. Yes, the new moon signifies change all the time. This time of year she does take away gloom, and I'm looking forward to that.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:25:42 AM
very well done in these baeutifulexpressions of the women in your life JK
Clinging to the Precipice (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:22:05 AM
How sad yet beautiful. Love is such a difficult emotion.
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:17:18 AM
Never known this beautiful bird, Jk Nicely done
Lovers Prayer (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 6:15:11 AM
Your love poems are filled with so much emotion. Beautiful.
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 1:38:58 AM
These beautiful birds have such determination and focus...
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 7:13:18 PM
The cardinal is one of my favorite birds! So bright and entertaining!
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 4:29:40 PM
Love the cardinals. They are beautiful red birds!
Cardinal's Flight (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 4:17:29 PM
Homeward just for our eyes to bask in its beautiful flight! Another masterpiece Bud! Keep inspiring me.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 3:24:20 PM
Nothing happens without a reason.
We do not always understand,
though, what...that reason is...But
your poem's words...have realized,
and found the profound relevance...
Thank you for sharing.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 2:14:34 PM
Always good to give thanks for what we receive in this life.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 1:44:04 PM
This poem is a reflection of the women in your lives that you loved and
now all have gone, I enjoyed reading it toay. Each verse was very descriptive of the way in which you felt about each one.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 12:52:42 PM
you found your true soulmate and the one who enhances your thoughts these days, I only started reading your works last year and now you write from the heart, so obvious to me as I travel that path you were on my friend, God has given you a whole new life to live, enjoy and cherish
Love on Tour (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 11:17:06 AM
Nicely done. In three lines you've explained the meaning of your poem.
Milking Love (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 11:13:03 AM
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 10:24:55 AM
Reminds me of Lionel Richie's, Three Times a Lady. He was referring to his family in the same way.
Rubber Necking Trucker (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 10:20:26 AM
Oh! Hmm. Well. Way funny. Loved it.
A Heart not Blind (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 10:19:33 AM
another very sweet poem that captures the essence of snow and love.
On Your Day (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 10:18:33 AM
So lovely. It shows the depth of your love.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 9:41:06 AM
I am so happy for you. What a feeling!
Love's Image (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 8:59:32 AM
THE CREATOR WHO INSPIRES THE MAKING OF MODERN TECHNOLOGY, SUCH AS SKYPE AND BEYOND...MUST OF HAD 'YOU' AND 'HER' IN MIND...YOU THINK? WONDERFUL SHARING, BUDD, THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 4:14:43 AM
Happy you have found love.
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 3:43:49 AM
Every poem you write is so beautiful. I truly enjoyed this Bud. Once again well done!
Six Decades to my Heart (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 3:26:53 AM
Thank you Budd. Your poem helped me to reflect on the blessings family brings. Yes, it can be trying at times but if you can share experiences with that special person we can reflect and grow together in life as long as God will grant us. Amen
Love's Image (Poetry) - 3/29/2014 2:02:12 AM
My heart is uplifted now...Hope always on the Horizon...
Thank you Budd...