Recent Reviews for Shirley Beauty Houston
Beauty, Poetry & Flow...Birthed in Travail (Book) - 12/18/2014 2:34:54 PM|
Your writing style and your poems always move me. Your choice of words are so unique and neatly chronicled.
I wish you the very best especially with this one that the release is so timely for Christmas.
I think this book is very personal for you.
Freedom (Poetry) - 3/22/2015 4:26:45 AM
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/23/2015 3:22:57 PM
a great sea to sail upon indeed
I am Beauty (Poetry) - 2/17/2015 1:58:02 PM
Unique and powerful in metaphor and symbolism; love this, Shirley. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you.
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/17/2015 1:56:56 PM
A lovely and meaningful ode to poetry and to your personality as well. Most exquisetely expressed, Shirley. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 11:29:34 AM
A GREAT poetic piece here. Roll with the ocean and be as serene as you can be. Love, JMD Amen!
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 10:37:39 AM
Create on! A sea of poetry awaits you…
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 9:35:23 AM
Very very lovely !
Much peace love and light
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 8:42:11 AM
You are very, very good at your craft!
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 8:33:07 AM
Shirley! YES! I agree with you. It's nice to have an audience, but truly it is our way of explaining ourselves to ourselves! If you use </br> you won't need the virgules (/) at the end of lines. A little html. I used to teach Shakespeare online when our high school had too many kids for the buildings to hold.
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 6:14:26 AM
...no need for a man's... wow - powerful stuff....
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 5:54:49 AM
I hear you loud and perfectly clear, Shirley . . .
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/15/2015 2:08:44 AM
Charming and soothing, and secure in it's own belief...
I loved it...
Divergent (Poetry) - 2/11/2015 3:47:28 AM
Clever, incredible poem... again, wonderful word selection ... luv that poetic flow too...
Thank you. I got up and wanted to read some good poetry, you delivered in a big way.
One Flesh (Poetry) - 2/11/2015 3:42:04 AM
The photo is poetic as is your poem...I see you have a very poetic soul.
I am Beauty (Poetry) - 2/11/2015 3:38:05 AM
Nicely written - short but passionate and good use of words ...
The Lotus (Poetry) - 1/17/2015 7:39:19 PM
The Lotus (Poetry) - 1/12/2015 6:41:09 AM
Gorgeous poem Shirley.
The Lotus (Poetry) - 1/7/2015 8:06:51 AM
Yes, it is amazing how the Lotus blooms.
The Lotus (Poetry) - 1/5/2015 4:41:14 PM
I can see, smell and taste this.
U R Absolutely Amazing!
The Lotus (Poetry) - 1/1/2015 2:22:45 PM
Thank you for the fragrant heart poem.
The Lotus (Poetry) - 12/29/2014 8:17:36 AM
Beautiful and unique the lotus blossom.
Lady Mary Ann
The Lotus (Poetry) - 12/29/2014 4:30:59 AM
Very lovely poetry !
You are an inspiration!
Happy New Year
The Lotus (Poetry) - 12/28/2014 10:15:27 AM
Reminds me of that very small stone pond in front of the Egyptian Museum in Cairo. In the murky water could be seen a single lotus plant with one bloom. One small token of beauty amid the dusty square that stretched out in all directions filled with the hustle of the city. Seemingly uncaring for its worth.
One Flesh (Poetry) - 11/30/2014 2:21:11 PM
This is a song of a humble soul!!
One Flesh (Poetry) - 11/30/2014 7:35:47 AM
In spite of the improbable story of a woman coming from a man's rib, there is something magical about the difference between a man and a woman, that you write so well. Lines like, "let me drink nectar from the fruit of your inclinations, "our brilliant and sensual. Your man must be very lucky to have a woman who can express herself in such beautiful ways.
One Flesh (Poetry) - 11/30/2014 6:55:59 AM
An enchanting poem to an
improbable story. Well done.
Divergent (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 11:32:47 AM
Certainly very brightly inspired, illuminating any darkness and casting it aside. Here on earth, we live in the shadow of such a light. It is our inspiration, but we cannot look directly at it or expose our skin to it very long. It is our eternal flame and inspiration.
Divergent (Poetry) - 11/24/2014 7:02:49 AM
I love everything about this poem, the photo the way you formatted this, it shines with your light Shirley!
Peace, love and light,
Divergent (Poetry) - 11/23/2014 9:27:50 PM
You light up our lives Shirley with your poems! I was feeling a bit down and you brightened my evening. That is powerful poetry! Amen
Sleep (Poetry) - 10/1/2014 10:34:51 PM
Wonderful poem Shirley! You MUST be an Angel. I will read your poem as I drift off to some much needed sleep. ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz...
Bipolar (Poetry) - 9/22/2014 8:52:11 AM
Shirley, your poems always move me.
Keep up the good work until posterity.
Your friend & fellow author
Bipolar (Poetry) - 9/21/2014 9:25:32 AM
Sleep (Poetry) - 9/16/2014 5:29:27 AM
"to the place where my dreams breathe" excellent
interesting note: Thomas Edison slept 4 hours a day and Nikola Telsa slept 2 hours s day ...
Sleep (Poetry) - 9/15/2014 8:02:07 AM
Ah, sweet sleep. Fortunately I get some between bouts of waking up to nature's call. You give it a beautiful, ethereal quality just like the process, itself.
I just read an article about a professor who teaches a course on Sleep and Dreams that is highly popular and his recent studies that have proven how important sleep really is for our well-being. I've known those that claim they could cheat sleep, but somehow, inherently, I knew they were wrong.
Sleep (Poetry) - 9/14/2014 3:11:35 PM
Sometimes I Fly (Poetry) - 8/10/2014 11:36:04 AM
flying high above the earth/
embraced the rage/
displaced the rage/
sometimes I fly/
like a bird whose cage disintegrates/
pay homage to ashes/
inurned in the sky/
pay homage to my soul/
exhume the life entombed inside/
God bless the child/
exhume the life entombed inside/
God bless the child/
alas, to rise/
alas, to fly
The best description of pain, and rising above pain I have ever read. Inspiring
Sometimes I Fly (Poetry) - 8/8/2014 7:38:08 PM
I know exactly where you are coming from, Shirley.
Restoration (Poetry) - 8/1/2014 7:45:13 AM
Shirley, I love the words you chose to embrace this poem.
Vision (Poetry) - 7/30/2014 1:21:37 AM
You Are The Sun (Poetry) - 7/30/2014 1:20:42 AM
Restoration (Poetry) - 7/30/2014 1:19:43 AM
powerful words, well said
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 7/28/2014 8:59:17 AM
Great job! You nailed it!
Exhale, My Soul (Poetry) - 7/28/2014 8:58:18 AM
Restoration (Poetry) - 7/25/2014 6:42:55 PM
This emotional clear, full of faith and inspirational and authentic. Did I mention that l liked it? Bravo beauty.
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 7/22/2014 5:37:28 AM
yes indeed, poets call to many ...
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/30/2014 5:09:28 PM
...found your calling...thank you
for helping us to do the same...
Thank you Shirley.
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/30/2014 1:28:18 PM
Just so lovely ~
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/29/2014 7:03:35 AM
One of your best, Shirley...Enjoyed Immensely!
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/27/2014 8:45:43 PM
I loved this poem. It's an uplifting, positive prayer poem and more are needed like this one in this negative world we live in today!
Peace, love and blessings be with you,
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/26/2014 9:11:24 AM
You were called to be a poet! I enjoyed this poem!
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/26/2014 8:07:31 AM
You called you to be a poet. And I'm glad you did.
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/26/2014 5:57:03 AM
enjoyed reading your interesting poem
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/26/2014 5:29:51 AM
"it burdens your heart'... indeed it can. what we are called to accomplish for the Most High is like a 'fire in the bones'. But it can also be as a field that flourishes and then lies fallow for a season. Your thoughts here are fully considered and flow like a pure stream. rlc
The Poets Call (Poetry) - 6/26/2014 12:11:29 AM
very beautiful. thank you so much for sharing this. peace and blessings to you.
Essential Oil (Poetry) - 6/15/2014 7:29:50 AM
I like the strength and mindfulness in your writing!
Essential Oil (Poetry) - 6/14/2014 8:16:45 AM
I think a beloved one keeps the mind well oiled.
Don't you think?
Essential Oil (Poetry) - 6/13/2014 10:06:42 PM
Beautiful, meaningful words...we are eternal...
Essential Oil (Poetry) - 6/13/2014 2:04:43 PM
Essential Oil (Poetry) - 6/13/2014 11:32:37 AM
Romantic poetic words - well done!
Essential Oil (Poetry) - 6/13/2014 10:45:27 AM
Streams (Poetry) - 6/13/2014 9:41:00 AM
These are sentiments with which I can completely relate, Shirley. I love the evocative and "prayerful" tone of this poem. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Pessimism (Poetry) - 6/13/2014 9:39:39 AM
Your words awaken thought, Shirley. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/30/2014 3:27:15 AM
As I become older I become more optimistic...
My Beloved Sons (Poetry) - 5/30/2014 3:18:51 AM
I understand, Shirley.
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/25/2014 7:30:58 AM
No doubt true, but will not beauty, trust, and love not increase our sense of wonder?
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/24/2014 6:22:14 PM
Hurt always has an influence. How you handle it defines your pessimism.
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/24/2014 9:32:15 AM
Yet the myths persist when one fears that there's no hope in this life, maybe there is something "over the rainbow."
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/24/2014 4:19:37 AM
Indeed a great thought and a beautiful picture
displaying part of the true glory of God!
Blessings to you, Shirley!
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/23/2014 9:29:29 PM
Hmmm. Insightful thoughts,
An Eternal Optomist
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/23/2014 8:16:41 PM
love the lines. depicting the negative in a beautiful way.
Pessimism (Poetry) - 5/23/2014 5:20:20 PM
Didn't know where you were going, but great piece,light from the dark, indicating more light to come.
My Beloved Sons (Poetry) - 5/18/2014 11:52:27 AM
Gotta say it, did say it, well said.
1 of 31 people in this country are under the control of the criminal justice and parole system. Worse incarceration rate in the world.
Speak Poet (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 1:46:33 PM
Still, I need you (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 1:45:48 PM
I like the way you write and the thoughts that run
Exhale, My Soul (Poetry) - 4/23/2014 1:42:48 PM
Love Me (Poetry) - 4/22/2014 12:16:21 PM
passionate and romantic
Passion (Poetry) - 4/22/2014 12:15:43 PM
wow very creative
Passion (Poetry) - 4/15/2014 5:39:02 PM
Passion is a lovely thing. You expressed it all to well in words and in pictures. A burning desire, a light of fire, a heartfelt glow for someone who is more than special...
Passion (Poetry) - 4/14/2014 4:53:04 PM
...that's the staff...Artist's heart
is made of...
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
HAPPY EASTER SHIRLEY!
Passion (Poetry) - 4/14/2014 7:06:42 AM
I would love to hold those thoughts… forever.
Passion (Poetry) - 4/14/2014 4:37:00 AM
and wonderfully expressed art it is
Streams (Poetry) - 3/30/2014 2:33:50 PM
The healing power of salty tears...and the relief when they flow freely...
Streams (Poetry) - 3/25/2014 4:18:26 PM
Beautiful, intuitive writing from a true and open soul.
Streams (Poetry) - 3/23/2014 6:40:57 PM
Memories however cruel
Must not claim our defeat
The temptation is to purge the worst
But we must never cleanse the sweet
Streams (Poetry) - 3/23/2014 10:24:54 AM
Beautifully tragic except for the stranger last line which seems to ask for your sweet memories to be cleansed. I am probably misreading this… for that was not your intention.
Streams (Poetry) - 3/23/2014 8:12:19 AM
Streams (Poetry) - 3/22/2014 1:48:44 PM
a beautiful write
Streams (Poetry) - 3/22/2014 12:34:14 PM
Heartfelt wonderful piece. Your writing is getting better and better IMHO
Love Me (Poetry) - 3/22/2014 11:18:53 AM
Passionately powerful and meaningful, Shirley. Thank you for sharing through your verses. Love and best wishes to you,
Love Me (Poetry) - 3/5/2014 10:26:15 AM
Shirley, Such beautiful words...The very first line is my favorite.
Love Me (Poetry) - 2/17/2014 9:25:31 PM
This poem melts steel and iron. Enough said...
Love Me (Poetry) - 2/17/2014 7:10:41 AM
Truly unique and beautifully presented. I'm falling already…
Love Me (Poetry) - 2/16/2014 12:41:59 PM
Truly an inspired write. It's message is one that many a fair maiden would desire. However when reading to the end the song "To dream the impossible dream" came to mind.
Your devoted reader
Love Me (Poetry) - 2/16/2014 11:52:33 AM
Again, a wonderful piece. You continue to get better and better.
"embrace the contrasts from demure to bold/
extend your love, unconditional/
take all of me/
Love Me (Poetry) - 2/16/2014 9:40:10 AM
a beautiful enticing write
Through the Fire (Poetry) - 1/28/2014 8:20:57 AM
I want to know, why was she shamed?
Through the Fire (Poetry) - 1/28/2014 3:12:44 AM
Anoint Me (Poetry) - 1/27/2014 9:33:33 AM
Wow...such a mixing of emotions. One of your very best, Shirley!
Anoint Me (Poetry) - 1/22/2014 8:26:59 AM
More alluring words I have never read. It might just get me to admit my darkest shame. But what if I have none to offer? ;-)
Anoint Me (Poetry) - 1/21/2014 4:33:12 PM
This is vulnerability and desire to love wholeheartedly. I have to chuckle at "medicinal properties" of your kisses. I hope you can correct that!!!
I have one criticism.. "the love that fuses we" seems a bit awkward to me. Why not use "fuses us" which would be proper grammar?
I like your intro sentence, too.
Anoint Me (Poetry) - 1/21/2014 2:03:41 PM
VERY PASSIONATE, I like it... Bob-
Anoint Me (Poetry) - 1/21/2014 2:01:45 PM
Shirley, this is brilliant, true and moving. Wish I had written it.
Anoint Me (Poetry) - 1/21/2014 1:19:09 PM
very well penned
Detour (Poetry) - 1/14/2014 10:25:08 PM
Very encouraging. Inspirational. Well written too.
Detour (Poetry) - 1/13/2014 8:56:28 AM
Why am I thinking of Hillary Clinton? I believe it's already too late for her, even if she has transposed. Why do I have these kinds of daydreams in the middle of reading poetry? I don't know.
When I read your poem, I know a good woman will find a way.
Detour (Poetry) - 1/13/2014 12:18:43 AM
Nice reflective poetry. As for dreams, you go for it girl! Amen!
Detour (Poetry) - 1/12/2014 6:52:18 PM
I enjoyed reading your well-written poem today. It tells a true story.
Never give up. Where one door cloes. Another one will open.
This poem inspires one to keep the faith. Don't give up.
Thanks for writing it.
Detour (Poetry) - 1/12/2014 2:08:29 PM
as long as you continue to manuveur in your own direction
Emancipate my Soul (Poetry) - 1/4/2014 2:55:52 AM
I just read the poem you posted from your book: "Emancipate My Soul"
Your way with words touches the heart very deeply and moves the reader to stop and reflect.
Keep up the good work. -Herman-
Emancipate my Soul (Poetry) - 1/3/2014 10:08:37 PM
Wonderful romantic poetic expression. A GREAT way to start off 2014!
A Passageway (Poetry) - 12/31/2013 12:24:41 PM
Lovely images to accompany the meaningful message that you are sharing through you verses. Thank you, Shirley. Love, peace, and best wishes,
A Passageway (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 1:24:09 PM
May the Lord be with you on your pilgrimage.
Peace, Love and Christ Blessings,
A Passageway (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 12:40:30 PM
Short and so sweet under the brilliant starlight. And the way looks clear from here.
A Passageway (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 8:53:36 AM
good luck on your way
Butterfly Rising (Poetry) - 12/23/2013 9:12:49 AM
Beautiful as the butterfly who penned these words.
Fair Pen (Poetry) - 12/23/2013 9:07:43 AM
Writings such as this are to be savored like a sweet treacle pudding.
Travail's Gift (Poetry) - 12/23/2013 8:57:41 AM
Each one of us will grow a better bloom when our roots find fertile soil.
Confusion (Poetry) - 12/23/2013 8:49:58 AM
So few words yet every set makes for a perfect reflection.
Travail's Gift (Poetry) - 12/22/2013 7:13:53 AM
Going through a painful effort she becomes whom she is destined
Travail's Gift (Poetry) - 12/21/2013 4:40:03 PM
Travail's Gift (Poetry) - 12/21/2013 2:17:29 PM
i loved this one
Travail's Gift (Poetry) - 12/21/2013 9:17:03 AM
She's a survivor, that's for sure.
Unfortunately, most people grab a can of Roundup.
The Apex Calls (Poetry) - 12/20/2013 1:21:41 PM
So very true Shirley and you have expressed it so beautifully with your sybolism.
Without You (Poetry) - 12/20/2013 1:15:07 PM
You are one hell of a poet young lady. The wording is beautifully chosen and set out in meaningful tuneful order.
My respect to you and your poems.
Confusion (Poetry) - 12/15/2013 4:29:25 PM
the view in the mirrors is sometimes very confusing
Confusion (Poetry) - 12/15/2013 4:18:27 AM
The view from outside that house of mirrors may not give you the view you want to see, but it can give you the one you need to see. Life is about choices.
Confusion (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 3:53:08 PM
Shirley, And so much more.
Confusion (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 12:25:29 PM
Time to leave those mirrors of distortion behind, perhaps smash them, and view the world outside the mirrors. I think you'll find it wonderful.
Surrendered (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 11:50:04 AM
Deep and well written.....
Exhale, My Soul (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 11:46:47 AM
You are clearly a woman that likes to get right to the point.....
My mother is long winded and daddy seldom sad much....luckily i am the 'tween....
Butterfly Rising (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 11:42:27 AM
Confusion (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 11:37:42 AM
A lot said in just a few words...
Loosing The Storm (Poetry) - 12/13/2013 4:12:33 AM
Your picture and poem compliment each other...with strong emotional content in so few words.
Angel (Poetry) - 12/12/2013 11:26:33 AM
Men. Give 'em an inch and they'll take a mile.
Give 'em a smile, and they'll go for your soul.
Fair Pen (Poetry) - 12/11/2013 6:04:58 PM
Angel (Poetry) - 12/11/2013 6:00:07 PM
How dare he...Shirley!
Angel (Poetry) - 12/9/2013 8:35:59 AM
I keep thinking that you're writing about summer being banished by winter without a fall.
Angel (Poetry) - 12/9/2013 4:15:52 AM
sad but beautiful still
Angel (Poetry) - 12/8/2013 7:11:20 PM
A beautiful mournful piece. Love it.
Angel (Poetry) - 12/8/2013 5:28:18 PM
Beautiful, simply beautiful!
Much peace, love and Christmas blessing to you and yours!
Your Eternal Friend in Christ,
Fair Pen (Poetry) - 12/3/2013 11:39:58 AM
Who would not imbibe when presented with such an offering? Thank you for sharing, Shirley. Love and best wishes to you,
Exhale, My Soul (Poetry) - 12/3/2013 11:38:18 AM
Succinctly powerful in meaning expressed. Thank you for sharing, Shirley. Love and best wishes,
Fair Pen (Poetry) - 12/2/2013 7:20:42 AM
i'll assimilate your ideas ... think i'll have another ...
Fair Pen (Poetry) - 12/2/2013 3:25:31 AM
who would have need of spirits when he woold read your words
Fair Pen (Poetry) - 12/1/2013 8:49:55 AM
Except for the wine, I prefer Rhine, you are describing me! Especially the "scantily clad and frail" part. Love it!
Fair Pen (Poetry) - 11/30/2013 9:52:19 PM
He'll swim in these words. Sizzling!
Beauty (Poetry) - 11/26/2013 12:02:25 AM
Yes you are! BTW that's a beautiful poem that you wrote too.
Peace, Love and Blessings,
Exhale, My Soul (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 3:58:21 PM
sometimes those beasts lie dormant for years... Bob-
Exhale, My Soul (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 12:16:43 PM
Discourse on, then… Discourse on.
Exhale, My Soul (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 12:04:07 PM
very deep felt words
Loosing The Storm (Poetry) - 11/18/2013 1:10:44 PM
Let loose Shirley.
Loosing The Storm (Poetry) - 11/18/2013 10:53:02 AM
Let her rip… I love the smell of lightning bolts in the morning.
Loosing The Storm (Poetry) - 11/18/2013 7:37:49 AM
this storm is well felt
Without You (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 11:49:45 AM
Awesome write- thinking about it here.
Butterfly Rising (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 11:49:00 AM
Good nature poem. Descriptive.
Butterfly Rising (Poetry) - 11/8/2013 5:03:14 PM
This is beautiful.
Butterfly Rising (Poetry) - 11/7/2013 4:04:06 PM
A very beautiful description of nature, Shirley...Quite enjoyable.
Butterfly Rising (Poetry) - 11/7/2013 11:46:47 AM
Richly descriptive of the transformation of life.
Butterfly Rising (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 10:06:38 AM
that is a beautiful wish and verse
Surrendered (Poetry) - 5/25/2013 7:08:08 PM
this is a lovely poem to read again and again
I long for U (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 8:09:12 AM
Lovely images and verses that awaken the senses and the emotions; thank you for sharing this gift, Shirley. Love and best wishes,
Beauty (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 8:07:29 AM
Very uplifting and encouraging; an appreciation of self and so beautifully and respectfully stated. Thank you for sharing, Shirley. Love and peace to you,
Surrendered (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 8:06:17 AM
Thank you for sharing this engaging romantic offering, Shirley. Love and best wishes to you,
Surrendered (Poetry) - 2/25/2013 9:01:55 AM
Such beautiful poetic words are being missed by so many friends on the den. I feel special to have the honor to make the first comment on your "Musing" poem. On a positive note it's absolutely breathtaking! On a negative not the title, "Musing" does not give this spectacular poem any credit. I have a special message for you Shirley I will write seperately.
Peace, love and blessings,
Divine Libations (Poetry) - 1/24/2013 10:33:23 AM
Wish I could find a drink that would give me that kind of feeling.
Divine Libations (Poetry) - 1/24/2013 8:48:49 AM
We are the best and God made us.
Languishing (Poetry) - 1/16/2013 12:33:20 PM
I agree with Lonnie...invites reading without stopping. This was a cascading ascent of a poem. I especially liked: "from a fiery hearth of monotony" and the 'unabated' "by the superficiality of appearances kept/" -- what an adroit way to describe what society does on a one-to-one and a one-to-group, and a group-to-group. Excellent, Shirley ~~ Diana
Languishing (Poetry) - 1/4/2013 4:49:56 PM
Shirley....Thank you for sharing......Yes, Life indeed is in need of rest or sleep; and we grow weary.
God Bless You,
Languishing (Poetry) - 1/3/2013 11:00:53 PM
A heartfelt and enchantingly lovely write. Bravo!
Languishing (Poetry) - 1/3/2013 3:50:32 PM
another your very wonderful writes
Languishing (Poetry) - 1/3/2013 1:59:27 PM
This is tremendous. It achieves a nice balance of imagery and use of words that allows the reader to continue along in the reading. Your use of words is achieving that balance between allowing the reader to continue to be immersed in the writing without stopping to think about what specific words mean. Good balance. Your writing continues to get better and better in my view.
Good job, great thoughts and feelings displayed here.
You Are The Sun (Poetry) - 12/28/2012 5:59:13 AM
nice! sooo nice
You Are The Sun (Poetry) - 12/26/2012 10:13:22 AM
this was a lovely piece to read--thank you
You Are The Sun (Poetry) - 12/26/2012 4:55:08 AM
I read this poem almost as if I was listening to a song: with a sense of music inside and a rhythm in mind. Lovely ideas, connections, imagery. I like the way you compare uncertainty to an "aphotic mist" that evanishes under the Sun.
You Are The Sun (Poetry) - 12/25/2012 6:03:19 PM
This sounds like a love meant to be
Musical Fantasies (Poetry) - 10/14/2012 10:50:18 AM
Beautifully composed a pleasure to read
love & Peace be with you
Enough (Poetry) - 10/11/2012 6:14:02 PM
I am pleased that I am now a reader and not a submitter. That I have found a poet who's works I can enjoy. Though "Enough" is an age old tale of love forlorn it is still new in this rendering.- Robert
Act 1, Scene 2 (Poetry) - 10/11/2012 5:48:59 PM
The birth of a brighter day, set to the music of bird song. No doubt conducted by countless baton's of "The Willow".
9-1-1 (Poetry) - 10/11/2012 5:40:40 PM
Never seen a poem set up like this one Shirley, but by golly I enjoyed it. I think that you just surrendered yourself to his charmes if the truth be known. Oh! the pictures you include send this old codgers 82 year old heart pumping faster than it should.
Musical Fantasies (Poetry) - 10/10/2012 1:22:06 PM
A unique poem of compelling emotions orchestrated in
"Musical Fantasies." Accolades to you.
Lady Mary Ann
The Willow (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 1:34:13 PM
A write set out in abstract form. Cleverly done so as not to be pondered over at length to be able to interpret its meaning. A cleverly painted picture in words.
Truth (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 1:23:53 PM
The use of nature to portray ones own emotions, is a very clever and refreshing way of putting words into a delightful and satifying write. This work is very skilfully done and I congratulate you for it flows beautifully.
Enough (Poetry) - 10/5/2012 6:21:56 PM
Love hurts sometime until we're force to turn page from the embitterness and move on. Very emotionally descriptive and I loved it! Thanks for the share Shirley! Blessings to you!
Rejoicing (Poetry) - 10/5/2012 6:03:16 PM
Very beautifully expressed Shirley! I love it! Thanks for sharing! Blessings to you! :)
Musical Fantasies (Poetry) - 10/5/2012 10:18:59 AM
An ocean of emotion so beautifully rendered in this poem.
Musical Fantasies (Poetry) - 10/5/2012 8:11:43 AM
Nicely written, Shirley. You have given us a view of what lies on the other side of that "wallof mistrust," and it looks oh so enchanting!
Musical Fantasies (Poetry) - 10/4/2012 1:20:18 PM
excellent Shirley yes Deborah is right
Musical Fantasies (Poetry) - 10/4/2012 12:11:49 PM
WoW Oh WoW, Shirley...you have topped yourself.
This is one of your best!
Enough (Poetry) - 10/2/2012 4:16:07 PM
powerful in tis beauty-i love this write!
The Willow (Poetry) - 10/1/2012 7:13:46 AM
Your introductory line alone is remarkably profound. The artwork is also profound. I understand this poem. Stunning. ~~ Diana
Enough (Poetry) - 10/1/2012 5:31:35 AM
In this gleaming gem of a poem, the brightest glint of them all for me is: "....transparency/is a requisite to love/" Stunning illumination Shirley. Thank you. ~~ Diana
Truth (Poetry) - 9/28/2012 5:52:32 AM
Shirley, with a new day your mind is clearer.
Truth (Poetry) - 9/28/2012 5:42:00 AM
A very neat poem, with only few words, even so contains deep thoughts!
Nice work, Shirley!
Truth (Poetry) - 9/28/2012 1:35:48 AM
Very well written, Shirley
Truth (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 3:37:13 PM
Bravo! A poem that appeals to all the senses!
Peace, love. and blessings.
John M D
Truth (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 3:04:23 PM
Bravo! Wonderful flowing images and emotions.
Truth (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 2:58:51 PM
I loved the visuals you painted hear for the reader to perceive
Truth (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 1:03:11 PM
I love the way you reached this revelation.
Truth (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 1:00:09 PM
You are becoming more and more skilled in adding together visuals, poetic sense and music to your writing. This one has all three.
Truth (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 9:10:53 AM
Brava is the word for this gem, Shirley. Truth. A commodity found lacking so much these day, but clearly within the framework of this refreshing poem it has been found and admired for what it is.