Recent Reviews for Sage Sweetwater
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Madam Blaze Starr: Whiskey and Sagebrush Truth in Eights and Aces (Book) - 11/3/2009 8:07:22 AM
Greeting:
The Buckskin Skirt Oar Traveler (Book) - 9/9/2009 4:32:50 PM
A delicious testament to Loons, Lesbians, Maple Syrup and Muskrat Love, September 7, 2009
By W. Joyce White "Joyce White" (Belleville, Illinois) - See all my reviews
Sage Sweetwater's The Buckskin Skirt Oar Traveler, is the poetic testament of a 26 year old woman who "steers her life with the help of two oars, nourishes it with maple sugar and spoon lures.." Sage writes. It is a story of a woman who loaded her birch-bark canoe like a delicatessen, making stops all along the the river to unload her bounty. "Greed," she writes, "can empty a forest of large life and tiny life, placing heavy emphasis on wildlife, tree life, and human villages." Sage is a wonderful storyteller interlocking metaphors with the knowledge of the past.
Her book wraps medieval pixie dust in shimmering mica and gives us definitions in a fairy encyclopedia. She paints fairies on her oars and chases them up and down the river in her mind. I like the way she tells how trees have hidden powers. To the Ojibwa, all trees had souls A living or green tree was never cut down, believing it could experience pain. They even rub healing lanolin on the spot where they tapped holes for their sap to run into their buckets.
This book is like a present for the senses. What you taste, smell, and imagine can fill you up deliciously. She compares her own sexuality with the gayness of loons as they ride on each other, spilling flesh, cleavage, and passion onto each other. This is a love story that goes on beneath blankets, out of sight of the narrow-minded men who just can't imagine why a woman would prefer another woman? "A relationship based on love is one in which each partner allows the other to be what she chooses with no expectations and no demands," writes Sage. A must read again for me. So much to digest. So much to think about.
Dominga Rio of Cuero (Book) - 7/10/2009 1:01:41 PM
Truth
Madam Blaze Starr: Whiskey and Sagebrush Truth in Eights and Aces (Book) - 6/24/2009 1:15:22 PM
steamy but, i think most of all, the intelligence and attention to detail of the author shine through
Madam Blaze Starr: Whiskey and Sagebrush Truth in Eights and Aces (Book) - 6/23/2009 8:50:15 PM
Sage,
Thighs are smoken even
though they haven't been
rubbed together yet!!!!! ;-)
Wheres that hot breeze
com.....ming from?
Sounds as if this book
will be another reader!
Thanks for the read.
Madam Blaze Starr: Whiskey and Sagebrush Truth in Eights and Aces (Book) - 6/23/2009 4:23:34 PM
Congrats on your new book!
Chrissy
Dominga Rio of Cuero (Book) - 5/4/2009 11:57:21 PM
CONGRATULATIONS
Sage,
Another grand book you
have here, beautifully
written.
'Dominga Rio admires
female courage. She has
plenty of it, and can see
it in other women. She’s
as hot-blooded as they
come.'
Been standing in front
of the full length looken
glass it seems, as this
quote is a true reflection
of you.
Isn't it????? ;-)
Hope this book of yours
is read everywhere with
pure delight.
Grand cover for this
write.
With Care Always.
Night of the Foal: The New Riders of the Purple Sage (Book) - 2/21/2009 5:23:27 AM
Sage-
Like I keep saying, I am so PROUD of you and I will always be, you bring
much certainty to you writings! Poetry and More, for many of us readers to explore!
You open reservoirs of streams of knowledge in all avenues!
I am so proud and blessed to have known you and still know you! and all the talents you are capable of, makes it even purer in my heart!
May your quill never run out of creative knowing ink!
May your journey never falter as you adventure many crossroads ahead! and share with those that try to understand and open their soul's to you Lesb. and human brand!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings, LOVE, Light and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
STAY POSITIVE! Through the warmth of your inner serenity....
Night of the Foal: The New Riders of the Purple Sage (Book) - 4/10/2008 6:59:11 PM
Sage,
Congratulations!
You are truely an
ambition of real....
Thoughts
Ardor
Learning
Exuberance
Naturalism
Transcendental
Sapience
which shines on
every page and
soon to be film
that you ...
imprint.
Wonderful, Always.
Dominga Rio of Cuero (Book) - 4/10/2008 12:37:44 AM
Well done Sage -good thoughts and best wishes for your projects -i still need to sit down and read your others, i've had business to attend to here, hope you are well xx
Night of the Foal: The New Riders of the Purple Sage (Book) - 4/10/2008 12:14:07 AM
Sage,
I Am Blessed To Know You & Share In Your Beautiful Journey!
You Should Wear A Hat Of Pride Sweet Lesbian Poetess/Author!
A Feather Of Beauty Graces Your Pen!
Congrats On The Global Eyes Looking At Your Talent!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Dominga Rio of Cuero (Book) - 4/10/2008 12:05:08 AM
Sage,
This Sounds Delishious!
Provocative Intro :)
Congrats!!!
" The Judas sniffs the fragrant air with fugitive scents. He takes a quick scan of the Arizona desert inhabited by dense catsclaw, ocotillo, paloverde, and saguaro. His instincts have taught him how to read the landscape in all of its language of sound, color, and movement."
I LOVE LOVE LOVE Your Words!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Dominga Rio of Cuero (Book) - 4/9/2008 8:29:54 PM
you have been working hard as usual-sounds great!
Night of the Foal: The New Riders of the Purple Sage (Book) - 4/9/2008 8:25:54 PM
Sage,it sounds wonderful--
Stone Creek Woman (Book) - 3/6/2008 1:00:47 PM
This is the best damn synopsis I've ever read at AD or for any novel really - I wish I could get you to write my own synopsi. As I write this my little old 18 year female cat is sitting on my desktop purring even though she may be on her last year and has infections. I love her more than the stars. Anyway I think I want to read this one first, give me a few weeks to ponder, as I'm broke again. But I like your story so far. I think many men should read something like this but their too self involved and plain chicken. With your life and Native American interest you have much to offer besides the Firebrand bit (which is good for those readers too) I'll be checking it out. Sounds like it could be a good read for a guy like me (fisherman, nature lover, musician, poet, etc) Good luck
Michael Guy, novelist, poet, jazz musician.
Blue Corn Woman (Book) - 3/6/2008 12:49:29 PM
Darn good writing in the excerpt - this would probably appeal to others besides Lesbian readers but no one would venture here I bet - too afraid, especially most men. Even I at first steered clear, thinking nothing for me at your site. But there's a lot more to you, then meets the capsule review! Besides, I like the western beat especially if you can throw in some "pro-environmentalism" (won't make you popular though)
It looks like it is full of western and Native American imagery and characters probably well-drawn. Who knows unless that other "we" could read a little more for free first.
Success to this... michael guy, jazz composer/pianist/author
Stone Creek Woman (Book) - 1/6/2007 4:06:08 PM
"Karvanukanu."
Oh, Sage you are a Healer of tender, thorough proportions!!
I look forward to purchasing both novels:
• "The Buckskin Skirt Oar Traveler"
and "Stone Creek Woman" ... and all your works soon when I'm financially abundant!!
Thank you for this excerpt!! Enjoy the editing process with Jake ~ I'm still looking for an editor .. things are so slow in Australia!!
Good, well-deserved fortune to you! And, great news about the Seal Cubs... Non-violence all round!!
Love, friendship and best of Everything for the New Year and Always!!
Suzie xoxo :-D Blessed Be!
Stone Creek Woman (Book) - 7/5/2006 4:21:01 PM
Wow, Sage! You're churning out the red hot novels these days!
Stone Creek Woman (Book) - 7/4/2006 8:58:01 PM
In honor of the Sacajawea dollar coin, STONE CREEK WOMAN represents feminist frontiers. The lesbian character Stone Creek Woman is a half-breed modern-day Sacajawea who leads groups of battered women on a therapy trek to alpine refuge across Colorado's western frontier via llamas to get themselves back into the primal element of life in an undiluted, natural environment.
Sage
Loraine Leatherbow: The House of Spleen (Book) - 6/25/2006 8:20:39 AM
So, Sage, do you ever sleep? Seriously, this sounds like an interesting story.
Sonny G
Loraine Leatherbow: The House of Spleen (Book) - 6/24/2006 5:45:50 AM
I love to explore the legends, history, religions, etc. of other cultures. This is great!
The Sundance Wives Episode Seven: Scripture Whores and Bible Wars (Short Story) - 11/3/2009 8:13:22 AM
Greeting: well interpretation is an art form I have loved reading your works you and I both share many of the same ideas the beauti of life and mother earth with all her blessing I will continue to read you as I find my way along the golden road of life..So Mott it Be...Eugene
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/31/2009 7:52:34 AM
Sage, As always, I ENJOY ALL of your work ! !
Love,
DeB
The Sundance Wives Episode Seven: Scripture Whores and Bible Wars (Short Story) - 10/29/2009 1:07:54 PM
Interesting, to be sure, Sage; loved the graphic! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Sundance Wives Episode Seven: Scripture Whores and Bible Wars (Short Story) - 10/28/2009 6:25:27 PM
enjoyed as always-loved the contrasts
The Sundance Wives Episode Seven: Scripture Whores and Bible Wars (Short Story) - 10/28/2009 4:04:46 PM
Haha!! Gotta love that famous biblical phrase, "pussy is meat" / Ah the Sundance Wives were merely carrying on an old tradition of the variation of the old standard, Smoke Get in Your Eyes. What the hell do you think Eve plucked from the Garden to tempt Adam with along with her nubile charm? Weren't no apple I'm betting a sawbuck. For the Sundance Wives this one was a bit tame, and that is good, we need to catch our breath. By tame I'm not saying it was dull, not in the least, in fact I really did get off on your laid-back style with this one Sage . . .
The Sundance Wives Episode Six: Quaker Brooms Cleansing the Mistake (Short Story) - 10/27/2009 8:23:15 AM
Sage, you make it so much fun (and so enlightening) to show up at the den. Every line a delight; notably:
Blaze knew the danger, seer
standing under the room where
preacher fucked the whore, the
one with soot on his face and
his accomplice, the marked English
teacher a bituminous disgrace, wild
boar divining in the coal bucket with
a Rosicrucian gold symbol riveted on...
-gene
The Sundance Wives Episode Three: The Colony's Placer Claim (Short Story) - 10/25/2009 6:07:28 PM
the music captures the mood and atmosphere of phony girl's endeavor ... she sure has some pair of spurs ...
The Sundance Wives Episode Four: Night of the Foal (Short Story) - 10/25/2009 6:01:21 PM
magnetized & mesmerized by the scent of phony girls saddle ...
The Sundance Wives Episode Six: Quaker Brooms Cleansing the Mistake (Short Story) - 10/25/2009 5:55:23 PM
each strophe par excellence, Sage ... the rising phoenix image is some visual as the entire poem/short story ...
The Sundance Wives Episode Six: Quaker Brooms Cleansing the Mistake (Short Story) - 10/25/2009 6:46:51 AM
awesome write so true to your work-i love the tidbits of nostalgia and history
The Sundance Wives Episode Six: Quaker Brooms Cleansing the Mistake (Short Story) - 10/25/2009 5:03:37 AM
Great storytelling in poetic format, Sage; well done! The imagery is superb! GREAT job!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/23/2009 11:42:02 AM
The House of
the Rising Sun
I can hear the music in the background of this fine tale, Sage. Always interesting in the classic Sweetwater style. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/21/2009 11:42:53 AM
Wow. I have some catching up to do. Very interesting. Awesome. Liz
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/20/2009 11:28:55 PM
WOW.. When is the
book coming out??
Sage you know how
to press hard on ;).
Thanks for the
read.
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/19/2009 1:34:23 AM
enjoyed the read
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/18/2009 9:46:17 AM
Ah, we all have our moments of inspiration and write above our heads / Then we struggle and cuss and stomp our feet because we are unable to write such prose/poetry on a daily fashion / Eventually we will have that inspiration once more and we are happy / Sage Sweetwater has eclipsed us all in the brainpower it takes and her command of the English language to obey her and put forth excellence routinely / "The Sundance Wives Episodes are confirmation to that of which I speak . . .
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/18/2009 7:20:40 AM
Sage, nicely continued, you keep me wanting more and that's a good thing, I loved this stanza:
"yes,
we are
completely
inspired and
enamoured of
change - transcendence,
dross to phosphoresence,
we are equally engaged - as
to what is ash residue from
burn-off to quicksilver as mercury
looks in the mirror as shine to the
soul, phoenix rises in their vagina."
Really awesome!!!!!!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/18/2009 5:43:49 AM
love this saga!
The Sundance Wives Episode Five: The Phoenix Rises in Their Vagina (Short Story) - 10/18/2009 3:45:49 AM
Interesting tale, Sage; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Sundance Wives Episode Four: Night of the Foal (Short Story) - 10/16/2009 4:01:49 PM
Sage, I feel compelled to modify Jena's closing lines:
Thanks very
much for this
clitilating
read.
-gene
The Sundance Wives Episode Two The Rescue: Orphans and the Whore's Tip (Short Story) - 10/15/2009 1:53:37 AM
holds reader interest
The Sundance Wives Episode One: Ministry of The Morgan Silver Dollar (Short Story) - 10/15/2009 1:49:32 AM
i'll read more
The Sundance Wives Episode Four: Night of the Foal (Short Story) - 10/15/2009 1:47:07 AM
interesting read
The Sundance Wives Episode Four: Night of the Foal (Short Story) - 10/13/2009 7:34:38 PM
Oh my, I can feel that old west in my blood. You have captured a moment in time and revived it through your amazing imagery. Nicely woven story..more please.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The Sundance Wives Episode Three: The Colony's Placer Claim (Short Story) - 10/13/2009 7:31:53 PM
Umm, this all sounds like too much fun to me.. Pony Girl, Sage, AJ, Me thinks you need another Sundance wife in there, perhaps Amber doll?lol
Nicely written and some real hot stuff...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
New Age Lesbian Spirituality: Sage Sweetwater ROCKS! (Article) - 11/19/2009 7:08:40 AM
Sage, You make us all want to RocK...Music, Words...What a great
Countdown that would BE!
Love,
DeB
New Age Lesbian Spirituality: Sage Sweetwater ROCKS! (Article) - 11/18/2009 2:02:14 PM
And for some reason I feel like unwrapping some secret gifts
Especially from the pews where I hear blessings of the
“sex and church
sit in the pews
together, Holy
Heaven, it's the
Final Countdown,
It's the final Countdown...”
Proudly sexual & shameless about making music sing...this does ROCK!
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie
Losing Rank (Article) - 11/16/2009 9:10:02 PM
Really enjoy writes
about animals..
Watching my girls
living together isn't
as close as that of
the wild side of your
wolfs vital force.
Only they do seem
to exhibit a lot of
the same ways of
choosing a leader,
yet considering they
all are related they
kept the best of the
cultures knowledges
it seems.
If we all searched
through the pasts
of what was done
and what remains
of the cultures we
came from.
Would we have
saved the best of
the bits that were
left from the hacked
up fragments??
Can't say either way..
Only some day we
may just need to
know what the wild
animals already
know of true life??
Sage Thanks for
this grand read.
Losing Rank (Article) - 11/16/2009 7:21:40 PM
The family of wolves has more security, pecking order, obedience and respect than any man I know. They are genuis in four-legged form and are just beautiful animals. The eyes of a wolf feels sacred when I've looked into them. They read a person better than the petrson reads them.
Beautiful animals Sage. Love'em for me.
Blessings!
Susan
Losing Rank (Article) - 11/16/2009 5:43:58 PM
they are beautiful and their societies are fascinating
Losing Rank (Article) - 11/16/2009 4:56:01 PM
We could learn from the wolf, I'm thinking, Sage. Instead of electing our idiots in Washington and the state houses, let 'em prove their worth in anyway the see fit, but out in the open where everyone can see them.
Cider Therapy (Article) - 11/14/2009 9:10:39 PM
Upon reading the title....right off I'm thinking, "Cider Therapy"? That's gotta be done with a cinnamon stick." Boy!! Was I wrong!! Ya keep turning me around, Sage.
Blessings and love,
Susan
Cider Therapy (Article) - 11/13/2009 7:51:04 AM
Ah / Cider Therapy / Good news / Good vibes / Me? / Give me Cherry Bounce / (Google it) / Tiny sips / Potent to the physical taste / Same to the inner depths of your being / Share the two with friends / Downtown Jackson Browne . . .
Cider Therapy (Article) - 11/13/2009 1:05:45 AM
Sage:
Imagining your couch
me there as you reach
into my mind and find,
it reaching out to you.
A meeting place of
thoughts and of new
realities, reflections
of celebrations.
In the art of the steady
hands forming great
possibilities in the mind
while caressing the eyes.
All the while intoxicating
the souls of the giver and
receiver of her master
piece.
Great write and picture,
thanks for the read.
Congrats on the
950,000 tags in
here.
Cider Therapy (Article) - 11/12/2009 8:28:13 PM
there is much power in this writing and personal conviction-i needed to read this
the Head of an Isolated Religious Organization Called The Church (Article) - 11/3/2009 1:42:38 AM
Why do guys all want to
be seen as the ruler of
all religous teachings,
is there a complex that
they are trying to feed?
Are they feeling so
inferior that they have
to dominate others into
their fantasies?
History has been filled
with dead guys that all
tried to rule all other
peoples in that other
guys names, or is it just
that they get caught up
in the stories so much,
that they really belive
they are better then
every other guy that
lives??
Guys murdering guys!!
The truth is nature is
the creators and it has
no representative, yet
it has trillions of
characterizations of
it's truth!!
the Head of an Isolated Religious Organization Called The Church (Article) - 11/2/2009 6:14:47 PM
Rabun Gap is one of the most beautiful little villages in the foothills of the Appalachian Mountains. The rainbow trout tastes wonderful and one has the feeling of being spiritually connected to nature. This goofy man sees himself in the creeks and in the eyes of those women who are fooled by quick talk and the need to believe in someone. It's a shame a person like this can blight the beautiful landscape that is Rabun Gap and Wolf Creek.
Thanks Sage. This was interesting.
Love,
Susan
the Head of an Isolated Religious Organization Called The Church (Article) - 10/31/2009 9:29:45 PM
I have never quite understood how any sane person can go through their life and ignore historical facts to live ones life through the advice or ramblings of another humanbeing confuses me it is okay to have faith everyone has something they believe in but faith means believing in the unknown to be true. is it okay to doudt, question think, or reason, bying doing so does this make you less of a caring person than the person that wants you to follow them based on their own interpertations of a historical book of litature, of course this is not saying that religious text are not inspiring of course they are they are designed to inspire, and change ones life for the betterment of everyne within that community that shares that faith. but to ignore historical writ is as one Rabi said it is amazing that the christians have taken our book as their own without understanding why it was written and for whom.. it is easy to be a follower it is harder to lead ones own mind into the light of reason. Easy is the path of ignorance that questions not but excepts all. I just dont understand how it is possible to have eyes and yet be unable to see.. thats my opinion anyway..
the Head of an Isolated Religious Organization Called The Church (Article) - 10/31/2009 6:09:34 AM
these saccounts are always so disturbing-
Aspen Extreme: The Sundance Wives Carve Out a Niche (Article) - 10/25/2009 8:23:07 PM
one of my favorite places, Aspen, though i have not been there for almost 30 years-i enjoyed the pctures and the write
Den of Thieves (Article) - 9/29/2009 3:33:35 AM
Sage this is a wonderful work you have done, may many be touched and find balm for their wounds and inspiration for their giftedness.
Tapping Into the Celebrity Lesbian Mode: Give Them Something to Talk About (Article) - 9/25/2009 3:40:02 PM
Brilliant and lol thoroughly enjoyed. Liz
Tapping Into the Celebrity Lesbian Mode: Give Them Something to Talk About (Article) - 9/5/2009 1:58:32 AM
Bonnie Raitt gets down! I Love That Woman! & Your Really Inviting Photos Sage! What is that quotable saying? "Throw Caution To The Wind..." no way! I am still all for Dare To Be Different! & You keep tappin into your Lesbian Mode!!
Peace & Continued Aspirations of your Hungry Heart
Vickie
Tapping Into the Celebrity Lesbian Mode: Give Them Something to Talk About (Article) - 9/4/2009 4:22:14 PM
As you pour this
wetness from your
spout into my open
rimmed vessel, you
fill me with all
that is you.
With each splash
around the sides
of me, your true
essence clings,
as the heat is
infused.
Tasting you even
once, you give us
all something to
talk about!! ;-)
Thanks for the
read and the
picnic, great
pictures.
Tapping Into the Celebrity Lesbian Mode: Give Them Something to Talk About (Article) - 9/3/2009 7:37:02 PM
clever and smart for sure-
Tapping Into the Celebrity Lesbian Mode: Give Them Something to Talk About (Article) - 9/3/2009 5:53:54 PM
A fine, revealing article both verbally and pictorially, Sage. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Den of Thieves (Article) - 8/31/2009 2:52:37 AM
You are so right dear sister of nature. Abuse in all of its ugly forms needs to be stopped, and more understanding of those that are different needs to be taught to those who think they are "normal". This is a really eye opening article, and makes the reader think of how we would like to be treated. If we learn from this article, then we should have a wonderful world. This article is a lesson that life teaches but many don't follow for some reason. Anyway dear sister thank you for this thought provoking article.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Den of Thieves (Article) - 8/23/2009 10:57:58 PM
Great illustrations you
have here.
Your works seem to
be reaching in all
directions of ours
and your senses.
It is said that we
write to free the
feelings of our
heart and soul.
Then we draw
to open all the
dark areas of
our mind, when
it is purged, we
redraw others
nightmares.
Now we get to
really read you.
That is great
that you are
moving in the
direction of
healing the
youth.
Thanks for
the read and
pictures.
How To Keep Your Woman Satisfied Out of Bed (Article) - 8/22/2009 7:31:25 PM
beautiful
Den of Thieves (Article) - 8/22/2009 7:30:43 PM
i love these-what a beautiful and talented soul you are!
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 8:51:45 PM
...and the Meek shall enherit.
Blessings of love for Thanksgiving Ssge.
Susan
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 7:41:51 PM
...and so the demise of a strongman, Pithy Sage.
John
Confession (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 9:50:51 AM
Confession: "Do unto others as you would have others do unto you:
remains the only religion I need or want.
Thanks for the crusade, Sage.
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 9:17:40 AM
You told a long story in the perfect words Sage.
Up to Zion: Song of Moses (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 3:38:04 AM
you offer a wise look into our own lives here
& how some things in an aspect are still birthed
& lived and also decieved
I enjoyed reading this
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 3:31:59 AM
ahhh....I see two sides to percieve this fabulous
mind prod & and they both are very true...
it is so much easier to remember the truth is is no wonder
a lie cannot overpower in the long run...(though they try like hell)
Sharing secrets are nice though & for some a huge need...
lifting weights
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 9:59:37 PM
Short, sweet, and to the point making the reader think. I echo what Felix said too. Thank you for sharing.
Also thank you for your wonderful and advice filled comment to my poem Why Am I Bound?.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie.
Jericho (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 9:01:52 PM
Sage..,
This reminds me of
you..
The meeting..
Our walls crumbled,
Learning about you..
We collectively learn
to bury past mistakes,
Then starting over..
We begin Rebuilding
our new energy.
Thanks for the read.
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 8:53:23 PM
Sage..,
Adore your short and
filled with information
writes..
They are grand for what
you have written about
them and for what the
reader invisions in it as
well.
Captivating the mind
either way.
Thanks for the tiny
read.
Up to Zion: Song of Moses (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 7:23:12 PM
Lots to contemplate and wonder on in this one Sage...as Chirstians and non Christians can both empathize if they open their minds to the spiritual possibilities.
fee
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 7:17:20 PM
Giving a voice to splitting hairs in this snappy but effective work.
fee
Delilah (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 6:00:06 PM
Short, but says much. Sage has struck poetic gold yet again! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Blessed be! X0X0X0X0X0
Jesus Wept (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 5:43:08 PM
I find most of your pieces mesmerizing and always imagine the most incredible landscapes and strong, unique characters.
Axilea
Stigmata of the Witch (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 5:05:41 PM
Sage, the prolific outpouring of late is incredible and
and enlightening. You are an education. I am particularly
drawn to the intimacy of the second stanza: the sage, a
contemplater of tutelary spirits.... -gene.
Up to Zion: Song of Moses (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 1:53:53 PM
I'd love to be a fly on the wall when the folks come to your door, all dressed up on a Saturday morning...to tell you how it is.
"There but for the grace of God"...I don't mind saying.
Now, with love like cosmic rays that know no barriers- I rush to you and hang on your words like a Christmas ornament.
John
Up to Zion: Song of Moses (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 1:08:49 PM
With women like you at the helm, we don't have to worry about defending ourselves! WOW! L?OL Very well penned, Sage; brava!
Happy Thanksgiving to YOU!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
When Sage roars, people'd better listen! *grins*
Up to Zion: Song of Moses (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 12:43:26 PM
... and they call Woman the weaker sex. She knew what she was doing! LOL! Enjoyed reading this: Woman, hear me roar! Well done, Sage.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Up to Zion: Song of Moses (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 12:38:10 PM
If one is spiritually connected in any in this day and age, their bones should rattling and their tongues coming unglued at the tyranny upon us. Fantastic writing Sage.
Jericho (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 11:46:19 AM
You said it all. Can hear the sounds of the old negro (are we still allowed to say negro?) spiritual in my mind . . .
Jericho (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 8:50:24 AM
Great!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Pasted IQ (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 8:23:53 AM
Sage,
Sometimes we all must hold our tongues, but then there are those times that they should be allowed to do their thing...love this one! :)
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Nepenthe (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 8:22:34 AM
Life is so precious, our culture is killing the simple pleasure that we all embrace.
Quite a deeply written poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Priest of Navaronne (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 8:20:54 AM
Quite deeply moving Sage, I am about to read all of your poetry that you have posted, you are on fire girl!!!!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Jericho (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 7:36:11 AM
I was think'n the same thing Karla said. Well done.
Cheers,
Dan
Jericho (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 6:49:28 AM
So much depth in few words: perfect, Sage. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Happy Thanksgiving: I'm thankful for YOU. =]
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