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Come Walk With Me
By * Aberjhani
Last edited: Friday, March 06, 2009
Posted: Friday, March 06, 2009
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.

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One southern city, two American perspectives.

 

Walking one night from an open mic poetry reading on Liberty Street in downtown Savannah, I was with my friend Z.T. Thompson when he stopped to comment on the beauty of the surrounding buildings. Like me at that time, Z.T. was in his mid-thirties. Unlike me, he is white and originally from the Midwest. I am black, and was born and raised in Savannah before leaving to live in different places for some twelve years, then moving back.

Looking around at the buildings that had mesmerized Z.T., I was unaware at the time that many of them were still standing primarily for only two reasons. The first was because Union Army General William Tecumseh Sherman during the U.S. Civil War had decided not to wreak upon Savannah the same fiery havoc that he had upon Atlanta. The second was because a century later, various sons and daughters of the city realized the downtown area resting babe-like next to the Savannah River was virtually a living museum of classic architectural style and beauty. They also realized they should follow Sherman's example: preserve the buildings as opposed to allow their destruction in the face of increasing urbanization, a word that to some was synonymous was progress.

One of the buildings they had not preserved was the old Desoto Hotel, where my mother had worked when I was a child. It had been replaced by the newer Desoto Hilton Hotel, standing 15 stories tall just across the street from where we stood.

The preservationists nevertheless obviously had done an exceptional job overall because in March, 1960, the great Italian writer Italo Calvino found himself surprised when he came to the city, more attracted by its name than by any commanding reputation at the time, just to "have a look at it." He was stunned by what he saw and wrote in his journal: "IT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL CITY IN THE UNITED STATES." (The caps are his.) Among the charms that moved him the most was the fact that "at every second intersection there is a small tree-lined square, all identical, but always different, because of the pleasantness of the buildings which range from the colonial period to that of the Civil War."

Thanks to the preservationists, my friend and I enjoyed the distinction of continuing our walk through an area where Calvino may very well have made his observations and which, in fact, was now one of the largest National Historic Landmark Districts in the United States. For Z.T., the surrounding history was cultural and intellectual. For me, it was personal and often painful. He pointed out that a new magazine on American homes featured two houses in Savannah among the best in the country; then added that the city's architecture had been one of his primary reasons for moving to it. At the time, his statement struck me as an odd one because even though I was a bookseller who had sold numerous books about the city, such as Classic Savannah and Savannah Spectres, I had not studied any of them.

Only after performing research for a novel would I develop a deeper appreciation for the Federalist, Greek Revival, Gothic, Italian, West Indian, and other styles that comprised the city's multiple architectural identity. Only after learning that ancestors brought from West Africa had constructed many of the historic buildings would I more fully understand and come to treasure the legacy they represented. None of that was the case while I walked with my friend. My response to his--as well as Calvino's too I suppose--observations about the city's beauty surprised both of us.

I stated very calmly that I had never realized how beautiful my hometown was while growing up in it during the 1960s and 1970s because it had been my tendency to hold my head down whenever journeying through the downtown area with my mother or older siblings. This tendency, obviously, was one left over from more oppressive times. I don't recall my mother conducting herself in such a manner--she generally looked straight ahead like a soldier marching toward a mission--and I never went to public places with my father so would not have mimicked whatever his behavior in those circumstances might have been. My guess would be that I must have picked it up from other Blacks around me and that the behavior was reinforced by the annihilating gaze sometimes encountered in the anxious eyes of Whites when I did look up. That may very well have been the same reason that later on I did notice the extraordinary elegance of Painted Ladies in San Francisco, the modern sculpture that adorned public spaces in Philadelphia, palatial structures in Berlin, and the royal splendor of London.

I thought what I said about missing out on the marvels of landscape due to racial conditioning was profound enough to elicit some kind of validating or challenging response from my friend. Instead, he continued with, "Anyways, I'm surprised you've never noticed how exceptional the architecture here is."

I didn't have to look long in his eyes to see that he really was surprised.
 

 


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Reviewed by Mary Coe 8/29/2009
I actually felt that I was traveling down the streets of Savannah with you and your friend. Excellent write.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/7/2009
You took me there, Aberjhani - thank you. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 3/7/2009
Thanks to mention my dear Painted Ladies of San Francisco, although if you have read some of my writings knew by now that my spirit was part of Savannah many many years ago. Who would believe that a boy from Sausalito would have a piece of his heart in Georgia?

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/6/2009
Wonderful writing, Aberjhani; just spectacular in every way! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford 3/6/2009
The moment my eyes see *Aberjhani has added..." my world stops and I access AD. In my lifetime Aberjhani will be recognized as one of our time's best writers. Whether it's a poem, an article, or a short story it's always exceptional. When I red "Come Walk With Me" I felt as though I was also walking down the streets of Savannah. To pull the reader into your writing is the hallmark of a gifted writer. Suddenly I have an overwhelming urge to visit Georgia and Savannah in particular. BRAVO my friend, you did it once again. More, more, more.



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