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The Princess and the Deer
By Gianetta Ellis
Last edited: Thursday, February 07, 2008
Posted: Sunday, January 13, 2008
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.

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I wrote this story for my beautiful daughter who, at six years old, loves to walk our trails while leaving scraps for the animals. Her favorite animals are deer. At posting, the piece is copyright-protected yet not published as I am still in the process of creating the illustrations for this upcoming book - a gift to my daughter. I hope to publish it in 2009.

The Princess and the Deer

 

Once upon an autumn evening, a beautiful young princess set out on a walk.


She took with her a basket of potato peelings and old, stale bread, which she intended to scatter about along the wooded trails of her kingdom.


It was warm outside and the sunset lit everything up in a pink and orange glow.

As she tossed the peelings and hung the bread from twigs for all of the creatures and birds who might feast on this treat, she never noticed how far from her castle she’d roamed. 

Then, seemingly all at once, the sunset was gone and it was getting very dark.

The princess’ heart began to beat rapidly and the palms of her hands became damp.  She was very frightened.

Then, she remembered what her mother had always taught her:  “If ever you find yourself frightened and alone, say a prayer.”

So, as she walked on in the dark of that late evening, she prayed:  “Dear God, please help me to return home safely, soundly and quickly.”

Before the Princess even said “Amen”, heavy grey clouds parted to reveal a bright moon that was nearly full.

But, in the light, she now could see that she had wandered far off her trails and deep into the woods.
 
Just then, she heard a soft rustle behind her.  Startled, she turned to find a young white-tail deer standing only a few feet away. 

Relieved, she said:  “Well, hello lovely one.  I am sorry to intrude on your home, but I am lost.”


Then, like a whisper on the wind, she heard the deer say:  “Follow me.”


So, she placed her hand upon his back and side-by-side they walked until the princess saw the glow of lanterns from her castle windows.


As she and the deer arrived to her door, the princess turned to thank the deer for showing her the way.  The deer tucked his head and extended his front leg as if in a bow.


The princess gently kissed his forehead and they became friends.


Each time thereafter that the princess took a basket of peelings and bread out to the trails, her secret friend of the forest always walked her home.


The End.

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Reviewed by Carol Surber 11/1/2008
Lovely story, and I am sure your daughter wants to hear this one many times.
CarolHawks
Reviewed by Alain Gracio 7/15/2008
God is in the details, My favorite line was "The deer tucked his head and extendd his front leg as in in bow"
beatifully written and expressed story
it inspired me
Cordially
Alain
Thanks for your wonderful comments on my poems
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 5/20/2008
That's a beautiful little story that should have high appeal for your daughter and other children. It is like the beginnings of traditional fairy tales...Jerry
Reviewed by Henry Stevens 1/26/2008
A wonderful story. I've spent many hours at sundown being near and among deer at the edge of our golf course at our remote travel trailer park in Punta Gorda Florida USA. I've never been able to get close enough to touch one, but I've spent enough time doing this that the deer are no longer frightened of me and I can pass by on my walk and they will continue to grazing and brouse. s/henry
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/13/2008
Sweet write. Thank you for sharing it and best wishes with your book/s. Love and peace to you,

Regis



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