|Reviewed by Debra Welch
|Beautifully done. I love the imagery and the emotion.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Now how'd I miss THIS one, Pastor?? A wonderfully heartfelt, moving write; very well done! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))), much love, and many blessings to you~ As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Moving write...fantastic my friend...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Funny, reading this makes me think of ice cream ... sloshing ... creamy ... pink ... blue ...
On a serious note - beautiful poem and great acknowledgement to the Lord and the talents and joys He has blessed us with.
Hmm, I wonder if I have some ice cream in the freezer ... ...
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|What a unique perspective on how the Lord 'sloshes' the beauty into our lives. Thanks for sharing this poem, Pastor Eddie!
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|A truly moving bit of well-composed and well-written prose - wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Uplifting and spiritual. Thank you for this offering, Eddie. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Haven't heard the word sloshing since my mother used it when I was a kid. You can be sure that the Lord has you on His canvas and is waiting to present you with heaven in all its magnificient colors of which you will play a part. Love the write
Thanks for your nice review Pastor Eddie
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya email@example.com
|Sloshing. . .what is it that isn't creative that doesn't require sloshing?
Absolutely nuthin' my brotha! Besides, Jesus said to be creatively new, we have to get sloshed, (I think some would call it water baptism.)
blessin's, and I so appreciate your comments at my site.
keep sloshin' poetry Eddie, and make a bodacious beautiful mess :-)
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Victoria Murray
|Fabulous write! Thanks for sharing it!
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Well written and delightful read|
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|Reviewed by jude forese
|nicely crafted poem! (may i suggest replacing the "thy" with your)|
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|What a beautiful expression in your lines....Just as my friend Jackie has said....."Yes please" - I would wish to be the cloud on His canvas, and believe that one day I will. Lovely work!|
|Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
|I just had to save this one to my library, I love it. The thought of our Creator 'sloshing' colours all over the clouds and sky just tickles me pink. I wrote one about the pictures He sketches - in the clouds, some time back.
can i be a cloud...on thy canvas this day
"can i be the object of thy intricate care
thy broad attentions
can you slosh what is inside me on this sky
before i die"
Yes Please. Jackie <> <
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Enjoyed this..if only this were so easy?!! best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|this is cool|
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|seas can't wash away the beaches of my dreams
..exceptional line..depicts the innerness and deep thought..ty!
|Reviewed by Helga Ross
|Lovely and lyrical of sound, and beauty of thought|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Wonderful poem, Eddie!|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
|I can't change the weather, but I do in my paintings. This was wonderful!|