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Creamy Cloud Of Slosherings
by Eddie Thompson

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(When the Spirit within us dreams.)

creamy pink blue creamy white castle cloud
float upon your canvas
reveal to me the hand of your painter
show me the passion of your maker
oh pink creamy white blue continent cloud
make for me a nation of thoughts...of deeds
of hopes unspoiled by mortal hands and minds
oh painter...oh maker...oh slosher of colors so intricately broad
so broadly intricate...can you stroke me on your canvas
can you fashion me a cloud that sloshes to my soul such truth
that even winds can't blow, dispersing hopes
seas can't wash away the beaches of my dreams
can i be a cloud...on thy canvas this day
can i be the object of your intricate care
your broad attentions
can you slosh what is inside me on this sky
before i die


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Reviewed by Debra Welch 2/21/2008
Beautifully done. I love the imagery and the emotion.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/25/2007
Now how'd I miss THIS one, Pastor?? A wonderfully heartfelt, moving write; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))), much love, and many blessings to you~ As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/12/2005
Moving write...fantastic my n luck...BHUWAN!!!!
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 6/11/2005
Funny, reading this makes me think of ice cream ... sloshing ... creamy ... pink ... blue ...

On a serious note - beautiful poem and great acknowledgement to the Lord and the talents and joys He has blessed us with.

Hmm, I wonder if I have some ice cream in the freezer ... ...

God bless,

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 6/9/2005
What a unique perspective on how the Lord 'sloshes' the beauty into our lives. Thanks for sharing this poem, Pastor Eddie!
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 6/7/2004
A truly moving bit of well-composed and well-written prose - wonderful!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/5/2004
Uplifting and spiritual. Thank you for this offering, Eddie. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/1/2004
Haven't heard the word sloshing since my mother used it when I was a kid. You can be sure that the Lord has you on His canvas and is waiting to present you with heaven in all its magnificient colors of which you will play a part. Love the write

Thanks for your nice review Pastor Eddie
Reviewed by Cynth'ya 2/10/2004
Sloshing. . .what is it that isn't creative that doesn't require sloshing?

Absolutely nuthin' my brotha! Besides, Jesus said to be creatively new, we have to get sloshed, (I think some would call it water baptism.)

blessin's, and I so appreciate your comments at my site.
keep sloshin' poetry Eddie, and make a bodacious beautiful mess :-)

cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Victoria Murray 2/9/2004
Fabulous write! Thanks for sharing it!


Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 2/8/2004
Well written and delightful read
Reviewed by Eddie Thompson 2/7/2004
Thanks Ace...Done!
Reviewed by jude forese 2/6/2004
nicely crafted poem! (may i suggest replacing the "thy" with your)
Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell 2/6/2004
What a beautiful expression in your lines....Just as my friend Jackie has said....."Yes please" - I would wish to be the cloud on His canvas, and believe that one day I will. Lovely work!
Reviewed by Jackie Brooks 2/6/2004
I just had to save this one to my library, I love it. The thought of our Creator 'sloshing' colours all over the clouds and sky just tickles me pink. I wrote one about the pictures He sketches - in the clouds, some time back.

can i be a cloud...on thy canvas this day
"can i be the object of thy intricate care
thy broad attentions
can you slosh what is inside me on this sky
before i die"

Yes Please. Jackie <> <
Reviewed by andrea coltman 2/4/2004
Enjoyed this..if only this were so easy?!! best wishes Andrea
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 2/4/2004
this is cool
Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame 2/4/2004
seas can't wash away the beaches of my dreams

..exceptional line..depicts the innerness and deep thought..ty!

Reviewed by Helga Ross 2/3/2004
Lovely and lyrical of sound, and beauty of thought
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/3/2004
Wonderful poem, Eddie!
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta 2/3/2004
I can't change the weather, but I do in my paintings. This was wonderful!

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